DEJAVU II (horror) UPDATING - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
loved the 1st part 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u know wat samra ji !!!!!!

app thoul thoul kay hi update karna😆!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
scary update
great job samra!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Scary but great start

Thnx 4 pm


Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zohafarheen

hey samra
awesome update

thanx
will be updating in a mint
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
hi all
thankyou all who are supporting me in this fiction and commenting. those who are not what can i say.. so a big hug to all my loely readers and commenters.😳😳
so coming back to dejavu many ppl had been guessing diferent story regarding part one a few actually cracked me up.😆 if you were a new reder i wd have expected that but my old readers knew it well that maan's talk are always blue and geet's red. pink is usually the cupid guy. infact mene character sketch me bhi colours code kiye thy. too bad koi daikhta hi nahi hai.😭
hmm character se agey story guys this is season 2 of dejavu . based on reincarnation (even though i dont blv in that but it's so dramatic hehehheehehe)
oh and if you want update then comment else i will not update.
now enogh of my bak bak. here is the update. if you want pm add sschPm in your buddy list.

Part 2:

She could not control anymore she turned back and started running blindly towards the exit only to hit in something solid. Someone solid

She shrieked out loud.

What the hell are you doing in my house and why are you shouting??

She shrieked more trying to escape

Stop it it's me

Yash. Omg it's you .

Yeah well who else do you expect in my house. Ofcourse its me.

No it was so dark and then I felt as if someone was watching me and then this place everything about is so creepy it is not even listed in the regular map..

It took me all day to track you here. Why do you live here in this wiered place. Do you live alone.

Why are you here. And why the hell have you been asking around for my address.

I wanted to talk to you .

The talks are over.

You can't just leave me like that

I never promised anything. You are the one who wanted to be with me I never even took the first step.

So what we were a couple

We were just dating

That's how it is for you

Yes. That's how it is for me I have told you in the beginning . I don't blv in love or marriage. You still came after me it's your problem . I never took advantage of you. I maintained my distance. And now when I felt you are developing real feelings for me I told you to go away. How complicated is that.

But why. Why can't you

Plz ria go now. I have some work . waise bhi it's not safe for alone girls in this part of the city. Go before dark.

And ria his girlfriend for past 2 months ran back to her car crying.

Pheww. He sighed.

You should not have done that.

Yeah and what you did was very nice. scared the hell out of her

I did not

Yeah she just loves to scream like that haina?

i did not scare her.
oh yeah you did not you just like to act all spooky standing in the dark hiding behind the pillar observing her.
i did not want to disturb you guys
cd you not just cme down and offer some pleasenteries for a change there was no need to act like a ghost.
shut up.Why did you broke up with her.

Maan singh khurrana came down the stairs with all the grace a guy could have.

He came and sat on the royal chair actually just a sofa but since only maan used to sit there with full authority yash used to call it royal chair.

And why does his highness want to know. He bowed infront of him and sat on the opposite sofa infront of the fireplace..that was the routine everyevening they wd sit there chatting and at night yash wd go to his side and maan to his side.

Cut the crap yash you know why

And you know the answer too. I don't want to fall in love . I don't want any commitments

Love is a beautiful feeling. Maan stood up and went near the big window. Looking at the distant horizon.where the sun was setting.

A painfull feeling yash added

There is no pain in love those are just rewards of your deep love. The more pain you get the deeper you love goes.

Love kills you. It destroys you.

Nonsense love gives you everything.

Yash came and stood next to him.

What did love gave you . pain pain pain.

It gave me her. He smiled with tears in his eyes.

At what cost?

she showed me how she was always with me how I cd never be alone.

And where is she now. ? ha? Bolo ? nahi hai na koi reply. She is gone . you are all alone infact you would not be here if it was not for her.

What do you think that I don't know what happens in these dark cooridors every night after I go.

I know what happens I know how you die every single second .i know painful it is for you . what do you think that I can't guess what's in your heart. We have been together for years now. I know how much suffering you have faced.

You know nothing.

I hate the word love do you get it. Love destroyed you.and where is she now.? Ha? nowhere near you to atleast save you from the pain.she might not even be alive of all we know

She will come one day. She will come.. she has to come here . she will come here .you will see everyone will see. we will be together

he was saying it with so much conviction but he had lost hope he knew better there was no medicine for his wound. she was gone forever. never to return back

he just nodded and left for his side a lone tear escaping his eye.

He lied down for hours no sign of sleep. Lost in thoughts of him. He had never seen maan shedding a single tear.not even once. His hopes never died.

What is this love.?

It was almost 4 am when yash went towards maan's side. he knew he ahd said harsh words to him. he wd have straight away gone to gym and wd still be there. he went there but found it emptyonly a note was there

She is here. I can feel her . I am going to get her. I m going in search of her. Ab me us k sath hi wapis loto ga.. i will show you that she is here.

PRECAP:

geet tu ye kia ker ri hai?

plz read the note on top of the update

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
😊awesome!!!! but is maan not alive??? i mean i just felt like that by the way he was talkin..hehe ;)😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
ok...this time i am confused like hell...but koi na...yehi to mazaa hai...will wait for nexxt updates to unfold the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update. Am a bit confused. But no problem will have patience and wait for ur story to unfold. Feeling a bit spooky but i guess thats the fun of it.Thanx for the update and PM. Pls continue soon.Am already anxious for the story to unfold.

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