MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part Thread 4 - Page 44

hey

nice update.now d truth is infront of maan.let's see what will he do nxt.

Waiting eagerly for the update Ritzy.

Thank you friends for your wishes and comments. I have tried to respond to most of you. Please go through the replies on previous pages.

This part is quite emotional and hoping you will like it…..

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Chapter 70 – Aftermath

After few minutes of silence they heard Nisha speaking – "Kuch nahin hua hai meri beti ko….she is going to be fine"

Maan, Rahul and Annie were startled to see Nisha and Juhi at the door. They had heard everything. Nisha entered wiping her tears – "Bas karo tum log…aise kyon ro rahe ho…uski koi galti nahin hai….meri bachi bahut brave hai"

She had a determined look – "We will support her…we will get her out of this….she doesn't deserve these nightmares….she doesn't need to feel ashamed of anything."

Juhi patter her back – "You are right Nisha…kuch nahin hoga humari bachi ko"

Maan, Rahul and Annie came closer and hugged Nisha.

Evening 6:00 PM

Maan did aggressive tai-chi with sticks having fire burning at their ends to take off his mind. But with every move, every cut, he kept on getting flashback of Annie's words. His heart was crippled with pain and his entire being felt shattered. Nisha's words today morning though had assuaged his heart but also had once again made him bottle his pain inside him. He was hurting with the thought of Geet's hurt. He felt angry and frustrated. In his frustration he smashed the stick into two. Luckily the stick ends extinguished when they touched the marble floor. He heaved heavily with strain of pushing his body beyond physical pain.

In the morning, Nisha had spoken to Raj and Rishab and all had spoken with Geet. At first she was angry at Annie for letting every one know but then she had collapsed crying in Nisha's arms. But entire family including Raj, Nisha and Rahul had been very brave. They did not let in and didn't budge from their stand. They did not cry and did not let her feel even for a second that it was something to be ashamed of. They had spoken to her firmly and told her it was not something worth crying.

Geet had finally smiled at the love and support around her. But Maan had noticed her glances towards him. At this point she needed his arms, his embrace….him.

Maan closed his eyes and let a sigh out. They had decided to give some time to everyone as wounds from Naintara's assault were still fresh. But today more than ever, he wanted to break all walls around him. His already tattered soul had been finally pushed to the edge later in the afternoon.

----flashback---

Everyone had just finished lunch. Mood was quite somber as Geet had finally slept off after an emotionally stressing morning.

Chaiyiji suddenly started – "Pata nahin kya hoga is ladki ka…pehle nemocytis ho gaya aur ab yeh sab….itne stiches….kaun thamega uska haath"

Maan was irritated to the core. He was already very frustrated and on top of it had to go to hospital as well due to some surgeries. All he wanted was Geet and some peace of mind. He spoke tersely – "kya matlab hai aapka…Geet jise milegi woh khuskismat hoga….samjhi aap"

Rishab put a hand on his shoulder to calm him down.

Chaiyiji continued unperturbed – "Kehna aasan hai beta…kaun karega aisi ladki se shaadi…do do baar operation….stiched….sabko perfect wife cahiye aaj kal….saari umar akele rah jaana hai usne"

Maan's blood boiled. He roared – "How dare you!!!! Don't say a word against Geet."

Raj stopped him with his hand. "Maan…stop it…it is not for you to say this"

Maan was flabbergasted. "How can you?" Maan knew he would loose his control anytime. Only Geet's thought made him curl his fist and walk away.

As he left he heard Raj saying firmly – "Preeto….sorry for Maan's behavior aur jahan tak rahi meri beti ki shaadi ki baat, please don't worry. Like any parent I also want her marriage but not because of social norms or some pressure. But because I want her to be happy. She can only be happy with some one who understands her and accepts her for what she is. So don't worry."

----flashback ends----

"Yes, I have taken a right decision" Maan's reverie was broken when he heard voices below. He hurriedly wiped himself and changed into a fresh shirt and walked downstairs.

Rishab – "Arre Raj….tu yahan"

Raj – "Haan, Maan called me and said he wanted to discuss something important"

Rishab – "he called me too"

By then Maan came downstairs – "Thanks bade pa, dad for coming"

Rishab – "Thanks?"

Raj came close and put a hand on his shoulder. He said lovingly – "Kya baat hai Maan….pareshan lag rahe ho"

Since Geet's accident, Maan had kept a tight leash on his emotions. He wanted to be responsible. Even today when Annie had told him about what had happened, he had controlled his feelings. But those loving words and gesture of concern made his throat choke with tears. He just wanted to let go all of it.

Tears welled in his eyes. Rishab was shocked looking at the anguish on his face. "Maan….kya hua…sab thik hai na beta"

Finally the dam broke. He turned and hugged Raj. He cried bitterly on his shoulder as Raj's shirt got wet – "Main aur nahi sah sakta….please…please….I can't take it anymore…I can't see her in pain…I love her….she is my life and seeing her like this….staying away from her now is killing me….please papa"

Rishab and Raj were stunned. They could hardly make out the things he was saying and could not grasp the full meaning.

Rishab patted on his head whiled he poured himself onto Raj. His own voice was heavy seeing his son break like this. "Maan….aise mat ro beta…mujhse nahin dekha jaata….aakhir baat kya hai…thik se bol"

Maan turned and hugged his dad. Raj patted his back and gestured Rishab to give him some time to calm down. Maan cried – "Papa….papa"

After few minutes, he parted and wiped his tears. His heart felt lighter. Raj asked him again – "Maan…beta hum tere saath hain na….ab bol kya baat hai…we all are there with you"

Maan turned and looked at Raj for few seconds. He finally sat down on his knees and grabbed his feet. Raj was startled with his action– "Maan yeh kya kar rahe ho…utho beta…please"

Rishab was panicking now. He bent down and picked up Maan from Raj's feet. He made him sit on the couch and sat beside him. Raj also came and sat on the other side. They waited silently for him to speak.

Maan - "I know that probably she deserves much better than me. But….but we like each other….She needs me….no I guess I need her more"

Maan smiled slightly at his own thought and then his eyes began misty again – "She is much stronger than I am…I can't take this pain…this separation anymore…even when I am with her I can't comfort her…I can't"

It's my need to give name to our relationship…I have to now…I can't bear this pain alone anymore"

With that a fresh bout of tears came out from his eyes. It was as if everything since Naintara's accusations was flowing out of his eyes.

Precap - My Two Dads

awesome update dear so finally maan telling them that he loves her for the update and also

feeling very bad for maan he has poured out his pain infront of his dad

very nice part dear..I am happy that Maan finally let his feelings out in front of Raj and Risabh!.. I am sure they would be more than happy,but still want to see their reaction to reassure myself😉..Maan breaking down was very emotional😭..nicely written!..continue sooon😊
PS-I forgot to say that I loved how maturely and nicely the family handled the situation and supported Geet!👍🏼