Droplets#2 (Rajeev FF) FINAL 2 Parts Page-82 - Page 27

choclates n magazine ka scene ek damm mast tha...!!! Ashna ke answer se toh Adil bhi kuch pal ke liye bhul gaya tha ki akhir wo aaya kis liye tha...😛😆

chota sa word hai 'HELL' ka...par iss par dono ka wo chota sa jhagda mast tha...maza aa gaya...sachhi...😆😛

Shekhar toh hamesha se ek darling hai yaar...!!! kitna khayal rakhta hai Adil ka...!!! par Adil aisa kyoun hai...!!! sab ke liye dil me pyar hai...par zahir karrne me use itna prob kyoun hota hai...!!! use sahi teacher ki jarurat hai...hope ki ye tution teacher Ashna bann jaye...aur teaching ka session thoda romantic ho jaye...😛

chalo der aaye par durust aaye...itna achha sa part post kiya...!!! lekin phir bhi tumhe maafi nahi milegi...!!! tumhe tab maaf kiya jayega...jab tumhara next part bhi jaldi aayega...😛

Originally posted by: chinmayi

Hello sweety😊, finally u'v done the UD !!!! (although ths comment cums jst a couple of days b4 the next UD Never mind...as the reply cums after the next UD..😆😆) hahaha'waise thnx haa I'm really glad to knw ke next UD jaldi hoga and I can see tht frm a aalsi sumi🥱 u're again gonna be a acchi bacchi 😃'Hmm...trying hard to be one...mere mehnat ki TAG hai ye...cant afford to lose it..😳accha chalo nw cuming to the part;
AASHNA 😃 ispe pehle jitna gussa aata tha na ab utni hi cute lagti hai hehe'and poor ADIL is pareshan any wich ways 😆'Hehe...am glad to knw that u guys are liking Ashna, Hero ko like karna is pretty obvious 😉...but I have always wanted u to like the heroine also, as our Hero is gonna love her eventually..😉😉waise she's soo ziddi jst like her darling hubby☺️tht she trapped shekhar also in her plan 😉After all...they have to be perfect match!! 😉'and ths gadha Rishabh😡 as usual I jst knew isne Canada mein kuch nai kiya dating ke siwai, ab bolo hw to believe he's done an MBA???🤔 Haha dont blv...mujhe khud doubt hai ispe..😆😆And shekhar ne Adil se jhoot bola😲'haila ye kaise hogaya 😆...neways jo bhi hua accha ke liye hua 😊Hmm...and achhe ke liye bola gaya jhooth jhooth nahi hota!!😆😆 (but hey, dont ask me "Kya hota hai phir?"😆😆)'and wow I just love shekhar (ofcourse less than Adil❤️That we all knw..😆) for donating his lil part of brain to ths gadha'hope itne bade bhashan ke baad atleast ab kuch samjhe ye idiot huh😒'Dont worry...I'll make him understand everything..😆and nw cuming to the major part wich u were trying to put up since last two UDs'wooohhhooo u finally managed to do it well, proud of u 😃👍🏼'Phew...thank God u like it..😳😆...u knw na...how much I had been struggling to put up that confrontation...😆😆...am just glad...at the end...ITS DONE!!😳 and I loved all ashna ka questions, finally ladki ne dimaag ki batti ka switch find karr hi liya hai😆, isiliye she is shooting so many questions na, after all darr hoga na ke kahi fuse firse na udd jaaye hehe'Haha...🤣...love the way u put it...no matter how much u have started to like her...u dont forget na that at the beginning she used to trouble Adil so much...and hence u dont forget ur taunts...😉😉😆😆and my poor Adil has to handle her 😔'btw even im w8ing haa for thse all questions ka answers, hope tum jaldi inke jawaab dedo (ofcourse thru Adil❤️) warna sacchi mein tum hi bata dogi 🤪'Hawww!! Bhul gayi? main SSS hu...main khud kyun bataungi??😲😆😆 And dont worry...answers will come soon...😉and finally jaise maine kaha uska fuse udd hi gaya, last part was jst too good, out of no whre she asks u don't love any1 else na, ths is the most hilarious thg🤣, Lol...glad u all liked this one...waise to main ye likhna b hul gayi thi...and then while reading it for mistakes...I just thought...kuch missing hai!! Then realized..of course..she hasnt asked the most imp ques yet!!😆😆😆and ghum firke khud hi answering her last question (I do ths often while writing exams 😆)'Haha...I do it when I want to answer favorable to me...😉😉 and finally she's got bodyguards hahaha'well ab to iska dimaag aur daudega na as she'l be more irritated😛'and I love her +ve attitude, kuch bhi hojayee she is irritatingly cute 😃'Hehe...gud to knw...u r liking this adamant attitude of hers..😳😆

& nw telling u abt the over all part, though it jst had 2-3 scenes per it was simply awesum,Thanks dear...the part was a super significant one...and so the feedback holds utter importance...😃😃 im looking ahead as always very much eagerly for the next UD (wich I hope will cum in a day or 2, atleast by tht tym my irritating exams shall be over😡)'meanwhile u keep up the gr8 wrk going on , & yeah chane jhaad pe tumhe nahi chada rahi hoon, as mujhe UD chahiye na hehe😃'looking forward to my Adil'bubyee for nw, tc, luv ya🤗👏👍🏼haha...thanks for the encouragement always..😊

PS: ur dialogues hav seriously taken a huge leap👍🏼, pata nai kaise but I always end up reading the UD 4-5 times, wich I initially never did 😃 so see u'v improved a lot (Ab kaafi BOOST pila diya tumhe, energy kaafi mili hogi usse, so zara jaldi UD karo 😊 )Hehe...thats a huge encouragement sweetie...as u said...BOOST hai mere liye...😃😃...though I dont do it consciously, but its gud to knw...am improving...😃😃..glad that u love to read the dialogues..so much that u read the UD 4-5 times!!😲😆...Even I have never done that!! 😆😆

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Hi sumi di...long part this time..isiliye i think this time i'd love to be lazy with comments😆See...long parts make you lazy...so its not my fault..😆😆😳

Loved it alot...and hope to see u with another part soon ...Soon? The definition for this word vary in our case...😆...however am glad u liked the part..😃would have loved to write longer but organic chem is taking its toll on me...all these alcohols and nitriles...wish they could go to hell...now here i go with my dukh bhari kahani...and ya thankfully mere upar se shuddh hindi ka fever utar gaya hai...😃Aww...poor you!! Hindi ka bukhar utra to alcohol phenols ne rang dikha diya......i understand ur position dear...😳...you concentrate on their reactions...yaha to Adil-Ashna me reaction hota rahega...u can catch up anytime..😆😆

update real jaldi...because ye dil maange more...This first time ur Dil means Heart!!😆😆

ashna ka naya avtaar mast hai...the way she is trying to make adil accept her is sweet...seems there are going to be some ooh la la😳😉 scenes in the not so distant bhavishya...lekin sab app hi ki kripadrishti par nirbhar hai...😊...Glad u find her sweet...rahi baat ooh lala scenes ki...to u have w8 and decide if the scenes are ooh la la or not...personally I suck at romance..😆😆

waise i found the rishabh-shekhar convo nice and sort of cute...don't get me wrong lekin agar unme se koi ek ladki hota...to would have made a perfect couple...😆...lekin kyonki dono ladke hain...so the idea is gross🤢.LOL...not ur fault..main intentionally unke convos kuch aise likhti hu so that u get the feel of bickering of sum married couple..😆...while penning down their relation..I was suddenly struck wid this idea...becoz of watching Harry Potter (a dialogue was there sumwat referring to this kinda situation)..😆😆..but do send some sundar-sushil ladkis in their lives...warna jis rate se pyaar badh raha hai, they might end up together..Haha...no worries...wont let that happen to them...they'll get their girls..😆😆.on serious note, ek baar rishabh ko akal aa jaye to they'll make gud frnds...they do care for each other, despite showing ki khoon ka pyaasa attitude...Yeah..bas Rishabh sudhar jaye to Shekhar bhi usse achhese baat karega..😆😉

waiting for the nxt part...hope adil ki mummi jaldi uska naam bole, itna mushkil naam bhi nahi hai...main to din bhar bol sakti hoon😳😍...Hehe..true!! Will bring that soon...actually Ashna ki wajah se mummy par dhyan nahi gaya inn do parts me..😆😆

luv u...

exam ke bojh tale dabi...vidushi...Love u too dear & Best of Luck (from Adil as well😉)...😃

Originally posted by: Inu-13

Yay yay..!! Before u returned with ur update i came back wid my comment heheh :P :D aaah and dats wat i call a soooper loong part..

Louve ..u Love.. Oh my Louve.. i luved dis part..uu..

Soooperb part..👏👏

Originally posted by: tina_1234

loved both d parts thnx for d amazing updt...bothd conversations were really gud...well adil is a master piece...it will b a awesome twist in d tail if he admits hos love first to ashna

Originally posted by: nisha1984

Awesome update 👏👏👏Thanks Nisha..😃

Ashna's convo with Shekhar was awesome... She told him not to come in any how and Shekhar and Rishab disagreement was hilarious... Hehe...am glad u liked the bit of humour..😳😆😆Poor shekhar!!! Bichara Adil se jooth nahi bolna chahta par karna padta hai...Hmm...warna Mrs. Adil chhoregi nahi...😆😆

Adil and Ashna conversation was awesome and intense...Am really glad to hear that...😳😃 I am sure ab Ashna adil ko pareshan karna tab tak nahi chodegi jab tak wo use sare jawab nahi de deta...Yeah...Ashna will not let go that easily..😉😆

I will love to see Adil's tactics to escape from Ashna's questions...Hehe...I doubt if they'll work with Ashna..😉😆😆

update soon...This time...am trying really hard..😳😆...thanks for commenting dear!! 😊😃

hey sumi nice part 😊 😊

ashna ki thinking process ko maanna padega ghar per baith ke wo kuch bhi nai kar rahi hai lekin phir bhi bohot kuch hota ja raha bina uske kare aur kahe hi bechara adil 😆 😆 😆

adil ko kitna dhyaan hai ashna ka use to ye bhi pata hai ki use tom achcha lagta hai ya jerry (johnny)bechara chuhe aur billi ke chakkar mein ye bhi bhul gaya ki baat karni kya thi😆 😆 😉 i think adil has asked ashna a very stupid question ki wo ghar pe baith kar kya karegi ye sab hi jaante hain aur adil bhi ki wo sirf jhak maregi ghar pe baith ke aur thoda sa adil ko pareshan karegi use line pe laane ke liye aur shayad adil apni housemaker ki intentions ko samajh raha tha isliye usne do bar kya kaha😆 😆 😛 adil a free advice from my side to you pls ashna se behes mat karo kyonki haaroge to tumhi kyonki tumhi ne usko jaane se roka tha ab tumhari pyaari ashna is ball se tumhare upar humesha bouncers daalegi hi humesha 😆😆😛 both are serious about going to hell or heaven whatever they may like pls accompany me there with you adil i would love to come along with you😳 😳 😉

but what is the reason that adil has now become a too serious ya shekhar ki lingo mein tutne laga haiaur kaunsi galti kar di adil ne😕 😕 aur agar shekhar ne rishabh ko kuch bataya bhi to rishabh kaunsi bohot help karega adil ki 🤢🥱🥱 but ab rishabh kya bolte bolte ruk gaya ... waise uska bolna ya nai bolna sab ek jaisa hi lagta hai😆😆😆

wah wah ashna mam aisa bhi sochti hain adil ke baare mein ye to breaking news hai ... well jo bhi for a change is baar kuch achcha hi soch rahi hai😉😊😉 convo btw ashna and the diary was good😊

but raat mein dono ullu so nai paaye thik se pehle jo soya hua tha use bina dimaag waale ulli ne jaga diya aur baad dimaag waala ullu jaag ke baith gaya phir se serious situations sochne ke liye😆😆😆

ab is ullu ki aapse yahi prathna hai sumi ji ki aap is baar jaldi humaare dono ulluon ko pesh karengi nai to humare saath saath vidushi aur priya dono hi aapko ullu bana ker chali jayengi😆😆😆

shreya😊 ye iss ullu ka naam hai😆

Originally posted by: golu_1677

superb update sumi...Thanks..😊

Loved it wen aashna questions Adil directly...

He needed this...Hehe...I agree!! Glad u liked the confrontation..😳

Also loved the convo between shekhar n rishabh...Thank you!! 😊😳

waiting for more..Trying my best to put up the next UD fast at least...😳...thanks for reading & commenting!! 😃😃

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Sumi..Helo Dii..😊

u have written a brilliant part👏👏 loved the confrontations here ..be it Rishabh Skhekar or Adil Ashna..⭐️⭐️Oh..thank you!! Ur words really mean a lot..😊

Ashna is really desperate for Adil's company and he is avoiding her like anything but this time Ashna thought a little ahead of him and warned Shekhar so he can make any excuse to avoid coming to help her.😆😆😆Hehe..smart husband ki smart biwi...perfect match...😉

Adil is forced to go there but this time she was in genuine problem.he helped her there but refused to have lunch with her.Poor Ashna was forced to play the role of spy to check upon her hubby😉😆😆Hehe...hubby is such a headache to her sumtimes..😆😆...lekin itne achhe hubby ke liye thodi bahut jasoosi is fine..😉😳

Atleast she was happy to know that Adil was speaking the truth but it was clear to her that Adil is indeed avoiding her company.and of course...she cudnt do wid that..😆

Shekhar tried to clear the air between Rishabh and Adil..he spoke on Adil's behalf coz he wont ever explain his actions to anyone.people can thing watever about him but he doesn't justify himself.Yup...and thats why Shekhar did it for Adil..😊

Rishabh is not so bad..he is littel in awe with his big brother.Shekhar tried to solve his misconception abt Adil..I hope he was succeessful this time.Hmm...almost successful I wud say..😳...and yes..Rishabh is not bad..as I had said before..😊...he is just a bit deviated by his own insecurities..😕

Ashna really scared Adil with her dissappearance act.he was really worried over her whereabouts.That he was!! 😉

Adil was really angry to see her but Ashna was glad to see him there. it means that he cares for her and this was important for her.And this very fact was all she needed to knw...uske baad to madam ne bouncers ready rakhe the!! 😆😆

She asked few questions and Adil really tried hard to avoid answering them.but his unspoken words were saying more than his spoken words.Yehi to problem hai...bechara bole ya naa bole...express ho hi jata hai..😆😆😉😳 Ashna was determined to get her answers this time and she didn't let Adil go so easlily.It was difficult for Adil to control his emotions this time.He was loosing control fast infront of Ashna.Yup..he has to!! 😳

Adil was able to get her back home without answering her doubts but his silence was speaking volumes. Ashna is sure that he cares for her in his own way..😊Yes..and she knws half job is done..😉

but Adil can't run forever from Ashna..he has to answer her someday and that will b the turning point of this story..😃😃I really hope..the turning point is worth ur interest and patience...😆...but yes..theoretically that is the turning point of the story..😳

Pls continue soon Sumi

Bye

Thanks for the wonderful comment Dii..😊

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

Hey sumi...u're back and again with a longerrr update 😊 😊😊..n yes dont worry i didnt take a nap during reading an update...wo kia hai na neend srf course book study krnai k time ati hai 😛😛😛..Hehe...glad to hear ki tumhe neend nahi ayi..😆..and course books!! 🤢 They do that to everyone!! 😕😆

Now coming to part...Adil felt this time ashna again calling him for a DATE but she got a genuine problem..n the way ashna said main bhi dekhti hun WO kaisai nahi ata was so good...us nai achai sai shehkar ko bta diya k u're not welcome here..😆...Hehe...yes!! Akhir biwi kiski hai..😉😉

Nice convo between Shehkar n rishab...sehkar is really a true friend of adil...😊😊😊...rishab bhi to some pints apni jaga theek hai...but adil has to taken all the responsibilities wrna wo aj itnai aram sai nhai hta...Hmm..and thats wat he doesnt understand..I wont say...Rishabh is wrong/negative...he has just a lil misconception..😕

Now coming to the post good part of the update...tne coversation b/w adil and ashna...superb dear..👏..Thanks dear!! Really glad to hear that...😃😳.start main to luv the concern when adil search her and then when they came face to face...ashna jee nai jo bouncers phenkna shru kiyai to bus adil ki wicket gira k hi chori us ko chup hna hi para.Hehe...yup!! 😆..but adil being adilashna ko bhi sath pavillion(house) lai k gya😆Haha...thoda hatke player hai!! Khudke sath bowler ko bhi out kar deta hai..😆😆 n sab sai acha to last question tha😆😆😆...waisai must say adil ki company nai ashna ko intelligent bna diya hai 😆😆😆...kafi achai questions kiyai adil sai😆😆😆...Hehe...am glad u liked Ashna's questions...& of course u r right...ye sab Adil ka asar hai..😉😆

now i've talked too much...Not at all dear...mere long posts se pata chalta hoga...I talk more..😆😆

waiting for a next update...cont soon

Take care You too..😊...& thanks for the sweet comment of urs!! 😛😃