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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Rocking start dear ..keep it up..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: bobby13rocks

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="7" color="#ff3333">Rocking start dear ..keep it up..👍🏼</font>






Thank you so much bobby
Muahhh 😳 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

My NEW SS "SAPNE"

Introduction:-

She was sitting in the corner of her room, crying bitterly holding his husband's picture Maan Singh khuraana, his wife geet maan Singh khuraana, lekin naam se kya Hota hai jab pyaar hi naa mile,
Geet POV
He hates me, he can't see my face even for a second, why what is my fault he never tells me plz maan tell me what is my fault, why you hate me so much why maan, I love you very much but why you can't love me maan, you marry me for your dadima because you love her very much, plz Maan don't do this to me I can't live without you I can't Maan I can't.
She was crying loudly, no one can hear her pain no one,
G:- I have no one Maan, only you are mine, dadima loves me very much,she consider me as her daughter but you don't love me maan, I can do anything for you,
I am sure I will win your heart one day maan, yaa tau jeete jee yaa Marne ke baad
She wiped her tears and went out from her room




How was it, plz do read, do comments and press a big like button, I hope you all like it, if you don't then I will not continue
Love you all
Happy eid to everyone
-sehri-
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INDEX

introduction pg 1
Part 1:- pg 2
Part 2:- pg 6
Part 3:- pg 6
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74


thank you so much hira for this beautiful banner luv u muahhh xxx 😃



Part:-4

Geet went out, tears were continuously flowing from her eyes, she was hurt, deeply hurt, no one is for her, she was so alone, once again her life her destiny cheated her, she don't know why her babaji did this to her, what is her fault, she just faces problem
G:" I am alone, just then should I call meera, yes this will be okay" she wiped her tears and called meera, meera saw her number and was very happy, she quickly attends her call but her smile vanished when she heard her sobbing
M:" geet what happened are you okay ... Where are you"
Geet start crying
And said
G:" I am coming back meera"
M:" where" she asks worriedly
G:" to orphanage"
Meera was shocked she meant to be in her house, in her maan's house
M:" why geet what happened plz tell me"
G:" I will Tell you everything there"
M:" okay... I am waiting here for you"
G:" hmm" she hang up and for last time looked back her house her everything, which is not belong her now.
She took cab and went in orphanage , everyone were very happy to see geet there, they were feeling something bad when they saw her tears, meera came and hugged her, geet hugged her tightly and crying uncontrollably, everyone looks at her with worried and shock faces
Meera took her inside and made her sit and give her water
M:" plz geet stop crying, plz geet tell what happened... Did you have fight with maan jiju what happened plz tell me... And what happen to you here" he points at her lips
Geet remembered when Maan slapped her tight and her lips were bleeding
G:" kuch nahin woh... Mein gir gayi thi.."
Meera knew she is lying
M:" don't lie to me geet, I know u since childhood... So plz don't lie to me... I am ur sister geet, won't you tell your sister" she cupped her face
Geet starting crying again and hugged meera tightly
Meera patted her back
G:" everyone is finished meera... Everything... I lost everything... I lost my maan... He hate me meera... He never loves me... He hates me very much... Meine u unko chor diya hai meera... Unke khushi isi mein hai... Mein unse buhat pyaar karti hu... Buhat pyaar... Unki khushi keliye mein kuch bhi kar sakti hu...unki khushi ise mein hai ke mein unhein chor do... Isliye mein yaha aagayi"
Meera was really really shocked and angry
M:" unho ne tujhe roka nahi"
Geet nodded in no
M:" woh aesa kese kar sakte hai... Mein unse baat karti hu"
Geet hold her hand
G:" meera nahin tu unko kuch nahin bataiye ge...tujhe meri kasam"
Meera looked at her with pain
M:" tu itni aachi kyun hai geet... Humesha apni khushi se pehle tu dusro ke baare mein sochti hai... Tere maa baap ne bhi yahin kiya tere saath... Aur aab maan jiju ne bhi yahi... Mein insab logo ko kabhi Maaf nahin karungi geet... Kabhi nahi" she said with crying and hugged her, both were crying
G:" can I stay here meera... Agar yahan kisi ko problem naa ho..."
One of the lady cane from outside, her name was Julie
She said
J:" geet sweet.. Tum yahan pe reh sakta hai,, yeh tumhara bhi tau haina"
Geet saw tears in her eyes and hugged her
J:" fikar mat karo... Tum dekhna god unhein kabhi Maaf nahin karega"
G:" nahin Julie mujhe Maan se koi shiqayat nahin hai... Woh dil ke buhat aache hai"
M:" geet chor in Sab baato ko... Tu aaram kar mein tere liye kuch khane ko lekar aati hu"
G:" nahi meera mujhe bhook nahin hai"
M:" chup kar... Mein abhi lekar aati hu"
She left from there, Julie kissed her forehead and said
J:" tum aaram karo geet"
Meera bring some food and start eating her, tears were flowing from geet's eyes, meera wiped them
M:" jis insaan ke liye tu yeh ansoo baha rahi hai.. Usse Teri koi fikar nahin hai geet... Mat ro"
Geet wiped her tears and stand there near the window
G:" meera mujhe kuch waqat akele guzarna hai... Plz"
M:" theek hai geet... Tu aaram kar"
She left from there, geet took their wedding picture and kissed his picture
G:" I love u maan... I will always love u ... I am nothing without you...I love you very much"

Maan was being restless there, he was walking here and there, he saw her picture on side table and start walking towards her picture, he sit on bed and hold her picture in his hands... He saw her smiling and he smiled a bit...he looked at her lips... When remembers when he slapped her and her lips were bleeding... He was feeling very guilty and hurt,
He remembers her when she said
I want your happiness maan
Maan closed his eyes and heard her beautiful voice
G:" Maan" she said very softly, Maan opened his eyes and saw her sitting beside him... Somewhere he was feeling very haapy
Maan looked at her and saw her in beautiful white saree with her hair fully opened
G:" I love you" she whispers in his ear and kissed his cheek maanhad liitle bit tears in his eyes
He looked at her lips, touched them very softly, when he was about to touch her lips she disappeared
Maan thought he was imagining her
Mk:" yeh mujhe kya hogaya hai... Geet mujhe kyun dekhai derahi hai... What is happening to me...o god forget her Maan just forget her, she is nothing... NOTHING FOR ME"
He looked at her picture and throws it away... He saw the picture was shattered in many pieces... That was not only a picture... That was his heart which was shattered into many pieces... He looks at her picture angirly and left from there


Precap:- aapko geet se pyaar hogaya hai maan



Plz plz plz do comments and press like. They really appreciate me and motivate me to write more
Love u all
Muahhh
Lots of love
Sehri

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Hope maan realises his mistake soon and brings geet back.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
great update😳
thanks for pm 🤗
cont. soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
amazing update
n awesum precap
waiting to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
sad sad update b
hoe maan will realize his mistake soon

continue soon
bye tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
Very nice please update soon, do not let us wait so long...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awesome upd
lov it...
so finally maan fall for 4 her...

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