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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

Awesome updatee dear...
plz dnt stop wrtngg..plzz cntnue soonn

No dear...I'll not stop this FF in between😃

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Beautiful update...
loved the bonding between father and sons...
so geet met her would-be father-in-law in the part...😛...not bad😉
maaneet's moments are awesome...
precap😕...please update soon...


I'm glad you liked the update and you'll get to know the reason behind Maan's anger in the next update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...please continue writing...what you wrote at the end of update is totally true, I have same feelings for maaneet and last episode was happy ending in the serialbut sad ending for me recollecting their moments once again...its pricking in the heart...very sad that we can see them together ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
luved it
wonder why maan is mad
cont soon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow namratha dear...
what a suuuperb update it was yaar...
i loved it sooo much...
and am very sorry for my late reply...
hope u dont mind...
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Posted: 13 years ago
when r u going to update next part dear??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part...

Adhurass... Chala bahgundi...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 23

Geet was in a hurry to reach the office on time ,she was getting late so she also told Pinky to leave without her ,she got ready as fast as possible to reach the office

She finally reached office but got late by ten minutes.

She was about to go to her cabin while Pinky stopped her.

Geet ,tu aaj late ho gayi hai!!

Pata hai pinky , 10 minutes!!

Aur in 10 mins mein 2 logon ki acchi tarah se band baj gayi!!

Kya?? Kyun kya hua??

Maan Sir is very angry today ,I guess there's a meeting day in 2-3 days and some sort of work is still not complete ,Maan Sir was really very angry on those employees he also wanted to meet you but you weren't there

What ?? and you are telling me now??

Relax Geet , Maan sir is now with Adi sir..you can go in after adi sir comes out

Oh no ...why did I get late today ,she was a bit tensed

Adi came out ,Geet stood there looking at Adi with her eyes wide open .

Adi ,Woh Maan Sir ne mujhe bulaaya hai kya?

Haan Geet ,Maan sir wants to talk to you about the designs.

Designs??

Yeah Geet ,Jaldi jao Geet ,He is waiting for you.

Geet was getting more tensed after hearing about the sudden anger of Maan .

She slowly knocked the door and peeped in ,she saw Maan busy in reading a file

She cleared her throat

Sir ,You called me.

Ms. Geet you are late

Sorry Sir , actually...

I really don't want to know the actual reason behind this Ms. Geet , Maan said still bus in checking the file you are late and that's it ...I don't want to see the same mistake being repeated again .

Geet just looked at Maan with her eyes popped out ,It was the first time after joining the office she saw Maan's anger .

Geet!! Maan looked at her

JI sir ..sh..sh..sure I'll make sure that this doesn't get repeated again.

Geet ,I wanted to ask you about the designs

The designs are almost completed sir ,they'll be completed today

I want those designs on my desk ,tomorrow at sharp 9:00 AM

So complete those as fast as possible ,we have a meeting with the clients day after tomorrow so I want to see all the designs till tomorrow.

Ok Sir .

Geet still stood there

Geet what are you waiting for??

What am I waiting for??

Oh no Sir ,nothing.

She turned back to leave ,but before leaving she again turned back and looked at Maan who was still busy in reading the files.

Geet went back to her cabin and got busy in completing her designs ,She was completely involved in her work but finally she finished her work ,she took a deep breathe and looked at the clock It was 5 and everyone was leacing the office .

Geet was confident about her work but still she was feeling a bit nervous .

She went outside her cabin and got to know that Maan was still in his cabim.

She wanted to go in and talk to him but she thought it wouldn't be professional to go inside his cabin just like that and talk to him ,she went to drink some coffee as she was working for the whole day.

She took the coffee and went to her cabin but wasn't able to take a single sip,Maan ko aj kya ho gaya??

He was so angry and he is still working ,kya abhi bhi uska mood kharaab hai??

She was getting restless ,she wanted to meet him.

Jaun ya na jaun??

Geet are you crazy?? You should go ,itna kyun soch rahi ho??He is your friend!!!

She knocked the door and went in.

She saw Maan sitting with his one hand on his forehead ,he looked tired

Sir , I brought coffee for you

Geet why did you bring the coffee??

Not a problem sir.

I just don't feel like drinking it Geet

Why not??

My head is aching.

Did you have lunch??

No , I was busy in this work

Work??

Working doesn't mean that you skip your meals!!

Geet woh actually??

Maan please !! If you'll not have your food and go on working your head will suely ache na!!

Why didn't you have your lunch .

Geet kaam ki wajah se yaad nahi raha

What?? Yaad nahi raha??

I'll have it after some time na Geet!!

Maan ,tum bhi na!!

I asked you about your lunch and not your dinner plans!!

Geet stood up to go out

Geet where are you going?

Just a minute Maan

But Geet...

Maan !! said Geet in a higher pitch while showing her eyes to him.

Maan shut his mouth and didn't utter a single word .

Geet soon came with some fruits .

She cut them and kept them in a plate.

Eat.

Maan looked at her

I said eat!

Maan ate the fruits without speaking.

Thanks Geet , Maan smiled.

Thanks?!Geet narrowed his eyebrows

Accha no thanks!! Maan said after looking at her narrowed brows

She quickly passed a smile .

Geet I'm sorry ,I was rude to you in the morning.

Rude?? No Maan not at all , I was late today and I definitely do not expect a sweet welcome after my mistake.

Geet you leave..I have some more work to complete.

Geet smiled and left his cabin.

She again opened the door and Maan looked at her.

Kya hua??

She smiled "Kuch Nahi ,carry on"

She again closed the door leaving a smiling Maan behind.

How remembered her smile ,that lovely, pure smile which always makes him happy .

She again opened the door and peeped in his cabinmshe looked at him with a cute smile on her facd

Waise Maan tum gussa karte hue acche nahi lagte

She chuckled and again closed the door.

Maan couldn't help but smile on her cute gestures.

***

Maan reached his house , and the whole family sat together for dinner.

Papa I want to talk to you about our new project...There's...

Maan and Sudesh ,this is a dining table not your office so you people better stop discussions here ,we all are here to spend quality tim with each other.

Sudesh ,sorry Maan no more discussions ...upar se orders hai ..I can't do anything...I have to follow them.

Oh...Waise papa aap dadima se bahut darte the kya bachpan mein ,Dev giggled.

Darte the nahi abhi bhi darta hun , we people are not like you ,humein kabhi itni freedom nahi mili jitni aapko mili hui hai

Jab chaha ..bahar chale gaye ,jab chaha aa gaye

Papa ,how rude?? You are toh speaking like I'm a spoilt brat ,Dev said with an innocent face.

Not you I'm talking about Maan and his college days

Wait a minute ,isme main beech mein kaha se aa gaya

Very bad bhaiya ,you were always here ,where did you go??

Dev...tum toh kuch bolo hi mat

Dadima :Hey bhagwan ...you three na!!Kabhi jabhi humein lagta hai ki hum teen bacchon ke saath rehte hai!! Pata nahi jab is ghar ki bahu aayegi to kya hoga?! In sabko kaise sambhalenge??

Dev: Dadima aap bahu laana chahti hai ya teacher??Aur yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki meri bhabi bhi hum sab jaisi ho.

Just then Maan's phone rang he saw Geet's name on the screen ,he excused himself and went to attend the call. 😆

****

Precap : Geet realising Maan's presense in her life😍

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love Maans gussa😃 geet acting all wifey😛 can't wait to read more..
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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