Series of FF's on Arnav & Khushi : updated pg 165

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sanjananrvkr

@sanjananrvkr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

thanks for a great update. Look forward for the next instalment.

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Thanks ash,

by the looks of it, am gonna get pissed by their collective behaviors tomorrow in the episode and get down to rewriting it as always!!!

its time my new and improved Khushi stands astride a flustered Arnav fallen on the bed, and sings ...

laaee rangeen afsane
tu bhi sun le, deewane
aa dil mein hulchul kardoon
aa tujhko paagal kardoon
mere aankhon mein jadoo
mere sansoon mein khushboo
jab mera yeh tan lachke
yaaje na koi bachke, han ji bachke ...
[zum zum zum zum]
soorat hi aaise, maine paaye
kehete hian mujhko ...'

😉

bijli girane main hoon aaye...

Originally posted by: ashvez
@Chick...🤗🤗🤗...RAW with smoking ,smouldering passion!!Wallah!!!

Amazing Update...so much of growth in her character...how she is opening up with other buddies of her age.Trying to brush her skills so as to impress her Laad Governor.

U have put me on an edge...the two of u (Vrush & self) have come up with an amazing idea for a makeover.Lekin Mujhey Lagta hai..Arnav would not want her to change , now thats my take.

Aur ab kya hoga...OH mY!! she was in a party with Full Monty's...ab toh gaya bechara.Boy!! Oh Boy!!! he would boil in anger.He just came after a month's sabattical...with all her thoughts ...aur woh Gayab!! What frustration!!

Mera haal bura ho raha hai ...uska kya hoga.

@Chick...aisey Cliffhanger mein mat daal...ab ek hafta intezaar karvayegee na???

And Thank you so much for the PM.🤗

Ash.

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#553

thanks guruji...

we aim to please ... yeah, and the spoilers are even worse than the marriage track!! I am HATING them so much!

which brings me to the fact that i win argument of friday episode... HA HA HA ... koi indicating nahi de raha tha sala...

she toh really deserves his gaali now! for behaving so stupidly!!! and the worse is that he is holding La so tight with his right hand!!! bloody so and so... 😡

chal ab jaldi se online hona india aa ke... busy mat ho jana

❤️

PS: I too am a total ass freak 😉 😉 😉

and NO I don't mean gadha here

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Hey darling..

wow such imagination! But then from our talks i know..exactly what you are capable..of

and kya makeover hai meri..jaan...mein OS toh nahi likh paayee..and from the spoilers it looks like ms chamkili has convinced ms La to be back...ha ha!!

but...well.. about this update..shall tell you what i loved
"She forgot the time, the place and every thing else sane '"

i loved the detailing..the reflection in the mirror was absolutely visual treat... you see me a butt person!! so..imagine what all i imagined!!

now coming to harry potter antics absolutely smashing..the chamak challo and the guy strippers... kya baat hai meri jaan... ye toh... bole toh... fantasy time tha... you know...we should all meet and do this??

Arnav ko bula lenge!!

i love love love it and love you for this... now.. once i am mile high i shall dream of this...! the reflection in the mirror

kamini you are too good!!

Edited by romantic.chick - 13 years ago

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Nina90

@Nina90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

I just came across the story and its very nice; I'm hooked :) Please do update soon!

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Makeover idea...retaining Khushi's innocence...fantastic!!

OOO I wanna see ASR's face when Khushi goes git pit in english!

n hez angry that meanie...she needs to give him some attitude too...go Khushi!!

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

@Chick..Perfecto!!! Strip tease. @Vrush & Chcik...Arnav on the block.!! What a treat..Ab Vrush u have already reserved the taut "A"...ab main kya loon...😉Lekin I would always go for his eyes to start with...aagay aagay dekhtey hain hota hai kya.Lalach Boley Lappa Lappa...😆

Charley's & the Angels ...if ever u r planning to have Khushi to do her first move ...do look for the song Rasiyah...from Kurbaan. Its so passionate...and ... Erotic.The words...the saans...uff!!

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

@Chick...which spoiler is this??...LA already bck?? OH NO!!! and He is holding LA...yeh kab hua.

Edited by ashvez - 13 years ago

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Just saw the spoilers...ARRRGGGHH!!!

I would be more than happy to quit the epi on Monday.

@Chick..I guess u have to work overtime.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

fab update!!! omg they need to nlisten and talk to each other..badly!!!!

angry arnav doesnt sound good...or maybe it is ;)

xxx

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subtlesapphire

@subtlesapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#560

woahh, the fast half was INTENSE! wow, your sooo cruel chick. You end it right when its on very interesting part, hayeee. your sooo wonderful ! and thankyouuu sooo much for the pm, i know myself it takes ages PMing everyone! but seriously its sooo damn worth it, you make weekends fun again! keep going and dont you dare stop! lol😆