Series of FF's on Arnav & Khushi : updated pg 165

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Posted: 14 years ago

this was a really nice piece. loved how the rain brought them together. the violins in arnav's head reminded me of the violin moment in main hoo na, lol

brilliant

cant wait for the PM of the next part!!!

xxx

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tina_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

nyccc...let d talkin begin ...awesome it is

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Hey RC!!

I'm lost for words darling!! This update was beyond excellent!!!

The rain sequence, followed by the kiss was a beautiful treat!!

I liked where it stopped. I think for the purpose of the narrative, its important for Arnav and Khushi to talk!!

Looking forward to reading their conversation!

😊

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princess84

@princess84

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

👏continue soon...😛

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Intense!! Loved it. I think payal Shuld be nicer 2 Arnav cuz he is her jeht like older brother inlaw!

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

i don't know what to say...the rain, the kiss, the violin, were all amazing...loved it very much...please continue soon

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Chickee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Zbegum
this was a really nice piece. loved how the rain brought them together. the violins in arnav's head reminded me of the violin moment in main hoo na, lol

brilliant

cant wait for the PM of the next part!!!
xxx

ha ha

that's exactly where it came from!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Updated my comments on page 31...😊

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Chickee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Damn...that was super romantic...the rain the dance, the kiss...stuff of dreams for a girl...Khushi is surly lucky to have this. And what a gentleman too...gotta love it!! Looking forward to their talk...what will he say, what will she understand...how will she react...etc...dying for the next update!!😳

Now...don't be like Vrush...and prolong this conversation like her honeymoon...😃😃

Heard that Vru..

All of us 'love ke maare' are dying to know about the honeymoon

Don't behave like the Cv's here 😉