Series of FF's on Arnav & Khushi : updated pg 165

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aakriti

@aakriti120

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Posted: 13 years ago

#991

wow...

arnav finally confessed...very interesting...

cant wait for the next part

thanks for the pm...:)

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Hanieya Rehman

@Haniibee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#992

YAY!!! He confessed!

Me so happy!

Hahahahhaha

I could feel the awkwardness in the air...

UPDATE SOON!

Thanks for the PM!

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#993

aare my love lorn ones!

kaun kehta hain ki chai is for peena. maybe chai tak pahuche hi na 😉

@ Nags - I agree, we need him to get on K's case badly now, to make her own up ... itni jaldi nahi, right? 😉 thoda sa cornering in empty corridors, thoda sa brushing past, thoda sa ignoring, staring uff uff ufff ... i may drop everything and start writing at this rate!

If I did not have 1001 things to do for Diwali, I wud have obliged with another weekend update.

but as I say, fikar not ... who knows, you may even get one 😉

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#994

Hello! I'm a new reader, just started today (and finished) actually. Just wanted to say that this is one of the best stories I've read on ArHi! <3 I'm kind of..no, definitely in love with the changes you've made from the original plot and characters! I actually think I like your story more than the show itself!

The last update was amazing, especially the last two sentences. The guy just confessed his love for her, and she..asks him if he wants chai. Khushi is one in a million! :D She's my favorite character though, so I love anything and everything written about her! And I really really like the fact that she's learning how to speak English..it's making her more confident! (:

Is there a possibility of Aman coming back? or was he just there for a while? I really liked his character as well!

and now I have to go to bed, so I'll comment when you update again (which I hope is soon!).

-Nitya

p.s. if you have a PM list, can you please add my name to it? If not, then I'll just have to stalk this thread every couple of days to check for updates. 😆

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Chickee

@Chickee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#995

Why thanks Nitya 😃

Good you mentioned it, I have been missing Aman too and wanting to get him back ...

So there you are, he will be back in my next update ... YEH WADA RAHA!!

Sent u a buddy request to send u PM's easily

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: romantic.chick
Why thanks Nitya 😃

Good you mentioned it, I have been missing Aman too and wanting to get him back ...

So there you are, he will be back in my next update ... YEH WADA RAHA!!

Sent u a buddy request to send u PM's easily

woot woot! I'm excited now! I never liked Armaan (from DMG) much, but I like him as Aman..if that makes any sense 😆

and no, thank you. I'll go accept your buddy request now.

oh! and almost forgot. There was a part in the story where you made Khushi say "what the..?!" I don't know if you purposely made her do it to show that ASR had an influence on her, or if it was just random/without purpose, but I loved that part! I suddenly got this image of Khushi actually saying it in the show..and watching ASR react to it.😆 Just thought I'd mention that as well.

Edited by stillunwritten - 13 years ago

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#997

At last arnav ji ne to bol hi diya ki vo apni princess ko kitna chahte h. Haay...i was waiting for this moment for a long time. Ab khushi kis cheez ka intezar kar rahi h ab to uske laad governer ne bhi bol diya . But i know arnav usse bulva hi lega. Just waiting for next part. GREAT update. Thanx for pm.

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-Janet-

@-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#998

(Usual disclaimer: stuff you know, but mostly for public consumption!)

Haaaye! Bol diya I love you! Note to everyone - do not fret, she is NOT allowed to end it. Jab tak mai zinda hu, fikar not!

Yaar, I love this bit where he realizes that she probably has feelings for him to. Chicky, you know that's my favorite bit. Even in the serial I keep telling you ki I hope he tries to make her realize and admit. Well, the seduction scene is a good first step.

Toh apne FF mei toh voh sab karva Arnav se jo mujhe dekhna hai :D :D :D :D

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subtlesapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#999

OMG chickkyyy!!!!!!!! finally!!!!!!! aab humare dil ko mil gayee rahat! God when i read I LOVE YOU AS YOU ARE, DAMMIT!' My hands shot up to my head, and my mouth was open, i was literlly like OMG did he just say that???!!!! love you chicky, and I love the upcoming track! how he will make khushi confess! no words! baas aapne haat hamesha Keyboard peh rakhna, aur screen hamesha India-Forums peh! well done!

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arshia

@ashvez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1000

@Chick...Amazing Chemistry...how beautifully you are bringing them together.I loved the way he fasted and she is all confused on WHy he fasted for her. Aur phir woh BEd wala scene..his snarky comments...awww...maan!!! "MAIN KAR DOON..." ( Was such a HOTWA)!!!.That sure had to make her run for her life. Ha!! The jealous ARnav. UFF!! Love & jealousy with full on passion.

Bechari Ko Bolney bhi deta nahin!!!

And then the...Confession...!! U know Chick..I think the only way u could make ARnav confess is through Anger & Jealousy...it suits so well to his character.nai???A jealous Arnav is so vulnerable...!! I want to hug him for LOving her the way she is.Banda !! Tu Chha Gaya!!

I enjoyed the way Khushi defensed herself and was not getting intimidated by his anger...Girl Power!!!

And I wanna give u 🤗🤗🤗🤗 for such zabardast updates.Love is so much in the air...Show mein Bhi aur Charlie's angels ke updates mein bhi.I have that warm nestled feeling all over me.I am Loving it!!!!

Ash.