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lovelycutietedy

@lovelycutietedy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awsome dear...

from where do you get these weried ideas?????

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

yaar!!!!!!tunne pura phaad daala!!!!!!!!superb yaar!!!!!!!awesome!!!!!!cudnt e1 imagine such a concept!!!!!!!!!!

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@simi91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

congrats new FF

wow it's quite diff

waiting more to know

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

nyc part dear...!!!!!!!! 👏

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

congrats on the new ff...

hmm interesting...

continue soon

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

interesting ff
i m eagerly waiting for d next part
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

part 2
nice part...
hope Geet doesnt kick him...
cont soon...

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Waiting...

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

first, sorry...i dint read it then... actually power gone... and then i forgot

and when i read tortures, i recalled that i dint read it...

any way

i am totally flat on your character sketching

Raja Rani names are great

but what i have suggested were also not bad haan...!

whats the mystery behind Raja ji's early death is it going to be revealed later in story

his mother was a singer and her mother an actress...interesting

please post pictures of Sameera kapoor too...

you wrote

Suhasini Aunty clearly know without Geet requests and efforts , her son would never had accepted her and the little angel. Maan not only accepted but also doing everything possible as a brother for little Abigail's sweet cute demands and dreams

who is this little angel abigail...? and why maan had to be forced and requested to accept him...and that too by Geet... whats Geet connection with the Khurana Family and Suhasini Aunty... and if they already know each other, this well that she can request or force him to do something ...why they are fighting and behaving like strangers...

yaar i am confused...

what occasion he was talking about...?

and how come Maan know about khushi's family...?

please a doubt clearance and flash back type of thing needed

one more thing... if she is a le***** why his closeness is affecting her...?

Continue soon