MJHT FF:College days -sweet memories last part pg22 - Page 8

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SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
very niceupdate

continue soon

waiting for the truth.


thanks for thep m.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
tht is nice i hope sajan and mayur kay life main sab theek ho jaye i really want them together and happy not sad
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
wonderful update...
song sequence was so adorable...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Great part!! Songs wr beautiful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
wao great update first a big big sorry for late comment story tu kb kii parh lii thi but comment karna kah tym he nai mill raha tha post tu mai sb storys kii parh chukki hu bt i will comment one by one kyu kah mai itni achi update kah leya sirf gud yah great nai lekh nah chati thii becuz i know itni busy kife mai sah ittni achi post lekhna kah tym nikal nah kitna muskill huta hai bt the update was great the song sequence and the karwahchut and sagai both was gud mayank and sam sometym become immposible bt i know tym kah sath dono samjh jayi gha bt pyar dono karta hai nupu aur gunji sah per zahir hai is age mai shadi aur responsibility abi tu khud kitna chota hai pata nai bauji koa itni kya jaldi huti hai koi dono bhag tori raha hai yahi hai clg kah bbd set hu kar shadi karlahan gha what the prob bt filhall zahir hai sayank kah leya yeh rista prob ban gaya hai bt i know aga jah kar everything will become fine aur dono koa realize hu jayi gha awesome update mai baqi story mai bhi 1 by 1 update karun gii sorry again for so late comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Hi friends here is my last part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Last part
after 6 months morning morning someone was knocking door
fourof them wake up and comeout with half sleep find mayu at door
n-tum tumhein koi kaam nahin hain kya acha kaasa neend udadiya
m-meri news sunkar tumhare hosh udjayenge mere dadaji ne decide kiya ki main aage ki padai london main karoon
n-tum mujhe chod kar jaa rahe ho
m-hum dono jaa rahe hain
g-di aap mujhe chod kar chali jayengi
m- sorry gunjan par main nupur ko apne saath lejaaraha hun
in the college
gunjans tears shaked whole college
s-chashmish main hun na rona band karo
g-tum meri di thodi ho mujhe meri di chahiye
n-tu rona band kar main tujhe chod kar kahin nahin jaongi
m-mujhe chod dogi
n-agar zaroorat padi toh mere behan ke liye tumhein chodungi
mayur have a small quarrel on that.dia and suhaani convince gunjan for mayur happiness it was farewell party mayu promised nupur that he will accept their relation in front of everyone
all lecturers were praising mayu nonstop
sam goes to stage with mike
s-guys aaj main sabke saamne kuch aisa karne waala hun jo ab tak nahin kiya
all were confused he goes near gunjan sits on his knees forwards his hand
s-will you marry me chashmish
nupurs mouth was hung open
she smiles at same time confused forwards her hand
s-toh is weekend main shaadhi karlenge
g-kya
s-haan saare arrangements hogaye hain
g-par aise kaise achanak
s-tumhein nupur ke saath us jaana tha na shaadhi ke baad hum us main mere parents ke paas rahenge
she hugs him in joy
n-so sweet
m-idea mera tha
n-tumne mujhe bataaya kyun nahin
m-suprise karne liye
he goes to sajan and congragulates them
m-tumhein kya hua
n-yeh shaadhi nahin hosakti
m-iswaqt bhi filmy hona zaroori hain kya
n-filmy nahin serious merere shaadhi ke ek saal ho gaye meri bidaai nahin hui iski shaadhi noway
m-gunjan ki shaadhi aur tumhari bidaai same day hain
n-saare plans bana liye hain aur humein bataya bhi nahin
ria-aapki shaadi ho gayi hain bataya nahin
rohan-kaun hain woh khushnaseeb
m-uske baaju main 6 feet ka pati nazar nahin aaraha hun kya
rohan-aap
ria faints nupur gives angry look to mayu he makes innocent face
all recived almost a heart attack after this news
in the weekend sajan marriage was held grandly in presence of there collegemates,friends and elders in the evening gunur ki bidaai ho jaati hain with lots of tears gunur depart
at sajan house gunjan was waiting for sam
sam enters and as soon as he enters he recieves a call
s-tumne iswaqt kyun call kiya
adhi-suhaani phone nahin utarahi zara dekh ke bata
s-sogayi hogi subah baat karegi tum bhi sojao aur mujhe bhi sone do
sam moves forward towards bed he takes out her ghungat
s-tum shaadhi ke jode main aur bhi sundar lag rahi ho
he moves forward to kiss sam recieves a call again
s-hello
adhi-woh main suhaani ko baahar lejaane ke liye tumhari permission chahiye thi
s-itni raat ko noway
he cuts phoneand tries to kiss gunjan again his cell rings
in anger switches off the phone
he ahain tries to kiss this time gunjan cell rings he was about to switch off she stops
g-di ne kahaan sote waqt karegi
s-first night pe koi behan ko call nahin karta
g-di karegi unhein pata hain unse baat kare bina nahin so sakti
sam beats his head adhi calls again
s-ab kya hain
adhi-tujhe jaha lejaana hain lejaa par please phir call mat kar
adhi-thanks sam aur gunjan ko gudnight keh dena
s-aur kuch
adhi-aaj ke liye itna kaafi hain gudnight sam
s-gudnight
after that no disturbance only romance
adhi and gang burst out laughing seeing sams reaction
d-ok guys ab bade jeeju ki baari hain
uday eating snack
u-mayank ko kaun intelligent call karega
b-sahi kahaan isiliye tu call karega
uday had no other option has to call mayu
m-hello tune call kyun kiya
u-meri sweet se baat karne ke liye woh night snacks khate waqt main usse daily baat karta hun
m-pehle karte honge ab uski shaadhi hogayi toh tum usse baat nahin kar sakte
u-nupur ki shaadhi kabki hui tab daily main usse baat karta tha
m-honge par ab nahin woh busy hain
u-iswaqt kya kar rahi hain
m-meri seva kar rahi hain koi problem hain kya ab phone rakho phir call kiya toh phone main hi murder hojayega
he cuts phone nupur takes cell
m-tum kise call kar rahi ho
n-gunjan ko
m-iswaqt sogayi hogi kal subah baat karna
n-mere call ke bina use neend nahin aayegi
mayu beats his head to pillow gunur chat for almost 3 hors irritating sayank they atlast sleep on gunurs lap
gunjan tries to make sam sleep properly but she gets tight hug
nupur tries to kiss mayus forehead but mayu makes it lip to lip kiss
in the morning gunur wakeup and finds themselves in their husbands secure arms they remeber past two years a smile appears on their face
after a week gunur leave to us they remember the day they left morena with lots of dreams and each others support but today there life completely changed new dreams about future and caring husband for making them true
hope you like the end
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Lovely part..Loved it 😊
SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
nice ending.

but very rush ending.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ending
thanks for the pm.

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