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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...shaym lockedin the house...good for him...and arhi scenes were rally nice...

thanks for the pk..
continue soon...:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautifully written.
loved the update.very romantic .loved how arnav read her mind.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love ur writing
I wish u were the real writer of IPkKND
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aare wah Naddiya!
Sorry yaar I could not read it earlier!
Accha, what a fab idea of locking Shyam, go Arhi go!
And the romance, uske kya kehna
Naughty Arnav!!
and please don't tease my wife????!!?!?!?!?!
Wah re wah!
Loved it!!!!
thanks for the pm honey bunch!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Khushi: sub aap kia mistake ha ..as the both ran to the hall

Arnav: meri ? why what have i done ?

Khushi :ab Di ko roka

they reached the hall both breathing heavily

Anjali : marathon race horahi ha kya

Arnav: khushi pani

Anjalli: huwa kya ha tum dono ko

Arnav: Khushi na bol lets run see who reach to di first

Anjali chota it is hope not a play ground ,waise what will winner will get

Arnav: he saw Khushi coming "di khushi itni cheater ha she does not give me winning prize even i win"

Khushi: heard his sentence she in shocked drop the glass

Payal: kya huwa ?

Khushi: kuch nahi

Arnav : smiled

Anjali:chota aap zara album aur Dvd tou lekar aai

Arnav: oh didi jija ji took that from me on anniversary day

buaji: betya koi aur nahi ha

Mami ji : hello hi bye bye why you are so excited to see our damad ji, abhi hum call karta ha and ask him to come ..

buaji yeh achi baat ha

Anjali: mami ji he is out of town ,i will ask JP to get it from my room .

Khushi and Arnav looked at each other

Khushi: di i will show payal ji the pic come with me ji ji she with eyes ask Arnav to make buaji busy .

Payal :khushi kya baat ha why you are so worried

Khushi: di jab aap dekho gi tou aap bhi hojao gai.. khushi jaldi jalo buaji na aajai

Payal : ha kya

Khushi: go in and see picture it is on the wall , i am guarding

Payal walk in she saw the picture " khushi yeh tou shyam ji"

Khushi: pata ha , ab chalo she pull her out of room and locked it

Payal in shocked " what he is doing here ?"

Khushi: not here in our home Arnav and i want to find this .

Payal: arnav ji ko pata ha

Khushi ha chalo ji iss se pehla koi aai

Payal: khushi tum ko pata ha he is in home , oh he was in his bedroom

Khushi: pata ha jiji Arnav na lock kardiya ...

Payal kya

Khushi: jiji hum dono ko pata tha , when you go home open the door?

they both walk to hall


At Khushi place

Shyam : try to open the door but it was lock from out side " buaji " he shouted but there was no reply ,"yeh sub loge kahan chal gai " he try to call on home number but his cell battery failed . "ab yeh bhi hona tha " he sat on bed " khushi ji aap ka leya kuch bhi " started reading his books.


AT RM

Anjali in kitchen " payal aap na chota ka jija ji ko dekha "

Payal looked at Khushi "ji"

Anjali: today i am missing him alot , you know he had not met Khushi yet ,

Arnav: pat her shoulder "di he will meet her "

Anjali: i chota aap ko pata ha aaj hum na call bhi kiya per he didnot picked ... lagta ha cell band ha , i am so worried."tears roll down her eyes

Khushi : di please dil chota na kara ,chala aap she asked Arnav to take her .Arnav took her out

Akash kiya huwa di ko

Payal : woh miss kar rahi ha

Akash oh mein dekhta hn.

Khushi: jiji jab tak hum yahan ha woh kabhi nahi aai ga . she just felt sad

Payal: aaj tum ghar chalo

Khushi: yeh thek ha Anjali di tou khush hojai ga ...

Arnav heard her as he enter kitchen " aap ko buaji bola rahi ha "

Payal: khushi mein aati hn.

Khushi: suna

Arnav: kya

Khushi: agar hum ghar chala jai tou

Arnav : walk towards her " tou kya " he fold his arm

Khushi: woh aap ka jija ,why you are looking e like that?

Arnav: stop using your brain that much .Di will be fine & if he want to come back he should come in front of you, i want to see for how long he will hide .

Mami ji : hello hi bye bye ...honey moon in kitchen.

Arnav: mami i came her to get water

Mami: that i know , you took so long hum samjhe shayad .

Arnav:walk out

Khushi: shyly bit her lips

Mami ji: romance hogaya ho tou dinner ready kardo

Khushi: ji bus 10 min she told JP and walked out ...

Anjali: aao aao khushi hum chota se bol raha tha ka tum ko honey moon per lajai

Khushi hum kaise ja sakta ha aap ko chor kar

Arnav: just ignore her..

Anjali: kya bol rahi ha aap ,chota hoga na aap ka saath

Akash bhabi bhai ka paas time nahi hota, he him self said .dont miss the chance

Anjali : bus thek ha kal aap dono jaraha ha .Akash ticket book karwa da.

Khushi sat next to him as hat was the only place left " jab hum na bola tou hum ko danta "( when i said then you scold me)

Arnav: tum na kuch aur bola tha( you said something else) that i didnot like.

Anjali: cleared her throat "bad manners chota no murmuring "

Arnav: di

Mami ji :chalo chalo dinner is ready ...

Everyone had dinner .

Nani: Khushi beta aapka ma babuji aap ko la jana aai ha

Arnav why? he looked at Khushi

Nani: they want a proper shadi.

Arnav: we are married

babuji: beta i had dreamed of khushi marriage

Arnav: you call me your beta right

Babuji: hmm

Arnav:come with me " meri aur khushi kai shadi hogai ,dil se rishta hona chaiya ...hogaya ab hum jiji kai kara ga "

Babuji: beta

Arnav: hold his hand i and Khushi had not mind at all.

Nani: see i said same Chota will not agree..

Babuji : ok as you wish .. ok we should better leave now.

Nani ;chota jao chor karo aao.

Akash nani bhai ko chora mein chor aata hoon.

Mami ji: poke him driver ho kya

Mama ji "manorma"


they all fare well them ...Akash drop them home..Payal made sure he went from out side ..

Buaji: uff aaj tou bara maaza aaiya

Payal: Khushi is so happy i am glad ..

Shyam : heard noise he knocked at the door

Buaji: bhoot

Payal: buaji: yeh shyam ji ka kamra ha.

Buaji: oh she locked at the door which was locked from out side ... "who locked him ?"she open it

Shyam: ji aap log kahan gai thi hum ko lock kara ka .

Buaji: yeh titilya bhi na hum na nahi kya Khushi na kya tha ...

Payal hide her smile ...

Shyam: jis na bhi kya , mera mobile ka charge bhi khatam hogaya ... he just got angry and walk out

Buaji: babua naraz hogaya ...

Payal : just ignore and walk to other room.


AT RM

Arnav: watering his plants "hum aap se kuch poch raha ha "she was walking behind him she poke him. i am listening with ears you dont need to follow me , waise if you like to be with me like shadow i dont mind.

Khushi: aap se to baat karna mushkle ha., she dialed home number Payal picked up "jiji kya huwa"

Payal "he is very angry his cell charging finished and the adopter was in room "

Khushi: aur cheat kara meri didi ko mein thek kar dogai ... ok jiji baad mein baat karo gai.

Arnav: kya huwa he walk to her

Khushi: why i tell you now ?

Arnav: bolo na

Khushi: why ? for half an hour i am roaming behind you and asking you are not listening me, why i tell you now .. she was about to leave the pool side Arnav grab her hand

Khushi: chora someone will come

Arnav: no one will come pull her back to him

Khushi: acha hota hum ghar chala jata ,aap tou hum ko tang he karta raha ga..

Arnav: iss leya to roka ha agra tum chali joa gai tou mein tang kis ko karo ga..

Khushi : just felt help less she given up .."jiji told that he is angry and he went out "

Arnav: i didnot asked whisper in her ear

Khushi: abhi tou bola tha aap na

Arnav" i want to start were we left in after noon before lavanya came in bed room remember"turn her towards her

Khushi just hold her breath.. 'not here someone will come"she looked in his eyes

Arnav:" really wait lets go in let me close the pipe" he just left her hand

Khushi: me free waved her hand she ran in ...

Arnav: khushi.. he ran behind her...but khushi was lost in the corridor... he search everywhere , she was not any where "yeh kahan chali gai" he heard Anjali , La laughing peep in

Khushi was standing on bed imitate him her back was towards door ... La and Anjali warn her with eyes as the saw Arnav but she was too busy in making fun of him ..

Arnav slowing walked and hold her from her waist she fall back .Anjali closed her eyes and kept hand on LA eyes

Khushi looked back she just bit her lips but she was too late to escape this time as Arnav had tightly capture her she was in his arms , he just walk out of room with her to his close the door behind drop her at bed

Arnav"ab bolo"

Khushi:" i was just kidding"she jump out of bed

Arnav: but i am serious .. he hold her hand pull her back

Khushi: please

Arnav; there you said someone will come but here no one will come tight his grab around her waist

Khushi: looked at his shirt button ,,bit her lips

Arnav : whisper "i want to thank you for how you cover up today"

Khushi: looked at him

Armav softly kissed her without waiting for her answer whisper "i think this is the best way to thank you, as you are non materialistic "kissed her back this time passionately.he felt he got positive response from her too .as she hug him back and whisper "if she is your di then mine too why you are thanking ?we are not one ?mera bhi HAQ ha "

Arnav didnot have answer to her question just kissed her ...


to be cont... do comment as it support me ...should i end this in next 2 parts ?


Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tooo goood yar,,just loved it..it was a full masala entertaining epi..all family memb...everyone.,the best one of ARHI momoent...but loved it thoroughly..love the way u write..i read it thrice..still want to again.
Edited by sarach - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was too good!!!
lovd the romance!!!!
happy that payal also knws shyam's truth!!!!
no pls...dunno end it in 2 parts!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
no don't end...loving the story line!
please continue for a few chapters...
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Posted: 13 years ago
brill part! arnav is too cute!

2 parts? well, it depends how you feel as your the writer. i'm happy with whatever you produce as i know thats gonna b good!! :)
xxx

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