'and then she said it'~4* thread5 link: pg 151

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Rucha

@coffeearoma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Wow...i mean just wow!
that update was hawt or what?? SEXY MAN!! loved it!!!
rucha

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Deepa

@harshdb

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#672

romantic, beautiful part. atlast arman understand he is in love with her... thanks for the pm & part

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

i ABSOLUTELY LOVED the part :)))) awesome job!! and thanks for the pm

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Sush Darling ,superb ,mind blowing,exquisite,fantastic update .Loved it .starting from song .l love this song forever . one of my favorite no. too.Well Ridhima took initiative ,that would be so hard for her to step ahead but she did it for herself for him ,To suppress your past nd plunge in it ,to avoid it is not an easy job still she did it . It might be coz of her trust on him nd more over her guilt to deprive him from rights he have on her as a husband ,nd more important is her love .she wanted him in her past life . 'tum pehle kyun nahi aaye Armaan ' Gosh my heart skipped a beat .How lonely she was all alone,lonely trying to survive nd failed miserably ,trying to commit suicide ,searching for love . Life is a B**** i swear its too hard on some people.
Armaan is in love with her . I am glad he is . I just want him to be her hero . to save her from every pain ,hide her in his loving embrace ,remove every trace of her agony ,take away her loneliness, help her to come over her fears. i really wish him a luck nd well wishes to get her love in return.
i am sorry dunno where my mind is nd what crap i had written. but one thing is clear i love this ff.

~ What Would I Do ~

What would I ever do,
What would become of me?
If I should ever lose you,
What would my life then be?

Would I go out to find
Someone to take your place?
Another one so very kind,
If that could be the case?

Would I then regret
The words I failed to say?
Or wish I could forget
Something I said one day?

Would I wish that I
Could once more hold you tight,
One more chance to lie
Within arms that felt so right?

If you were no longer here,
Knowing I'd never again see you,
Would I cry many a tear,
As my heart broke in two?

I never want to know
What I would feel or do.
Please, always stay, never go.
For I will forever love you.

You are so much a part
Of all I think and do.
Your spirit fills my heart,
In my life I want only you.

So, take care my dear,
Take no chances at all.
I can not live with the fear
That God your name would call.

So, what would I ever do
If you should leave me?
You know how much I love you.
For you are my life you see.

thanks for pm.
love n luck forever.
ritu

Edited by janu1610 - 13 years ago

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

its just awesome
amazing love the way every thing happen
truly amazing
thank for pm
swetha

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fathima

@fatzfathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

1st of all i was surprised to c a pm frm u informing about d update..well i was expecting an update but just an instalment...n tis was really a surprise n tat too such a part..!!!! 😳😳😳 wooow it was a double treat... ❤️🤗

loved d part.. was d broken marriage a reason for her depression tat eventually lead her to attempt suicide twice???😕 well i think her not allowin her ex-hus anywer near her was a reason for her divorce ten... 😔

"Why didn't I meet you earlier, Armaan? Why didn't you come into my life then?" ohhh tis was very touching n emotional...tis clearly says she has fallen for him so deeply...😳

the moments in d cottage was beautifully wriiten..u really write intimate scenes very decently n lovly..😳 n i simply adore d way u write it...😊 i never expected to c tem consummate teir relationship so soon..neverthless it was good to c armaan finally realising his feelings n tey becomin hus-wife in true sense...😳

a well written wonderful part👏👏👏

Edited by fatzfathi - 13 years ago

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Arushi Saxena

@..Ashi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

simply beautiful
and not to forget..HOT ;)

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Hi Sushmita,

Thanks for updating the FF. I have some comments which aren't in line with the other readers, I hope you do not mind getting different opinions.

On the last part, when Ridz spoke about her past, I didn't expect that, I did expect she might say some things, but not everything, as don't think its easy to open up about such things, but I was like maybe Sush has thought about this already.

Then, on yesterday's update when they actually 'did' it, I was like no, this is not happening, she just spoke about her insecurities couple of hours back & here they were doing it, when Arman himself said he wasn't sure if she loved him, he said he would wait for her, then why didn't he? her being married before is enough to go through with it?

I expected when this would happen when they confess their love to each other & that would be the last chapter, somehow the essence was lost for me...

am sorry if you felt bad about my comments...