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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome upd...
lov it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting FF... plz add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Sorry for late reply but met with an accident hence the delay
oh loved the update i wonder how will maan control himself
hmm... maneet scenes were cute
dekhthe hai maan ko jab pata chalega k sameera itne dino se geet k baare mein jhooth bolti aayi hai toh how will he react
i think maan will b the one who will realize his feelings first and then kisi bhi tarah usse geet ko convince karna hoga unke rishte k baare mein
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazin part..u ryt beautiful.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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(created by Piya)


Really sorry for the delay guys. Pls do read and enjoy the update.


Part 4

Maan was at the door when'''''''''.

Thaiji: Here have your tea and pls don't bother me with your orders every now and then. If you want something help yourself as I have lot many things to do.

Thayaji: I just asked for a cup of tea why are you cribbing so much and by the way its nothing new I drink a cup of tea every hour.

Thaiji: That was when I had my 'free ki servant' Geet whom you father and daughter snatched away and now making me work day and night. So, from now on either change your habits or do your things yourself.

Maan's blood boiled with the thought of Geet working like a servant for anyone. He hated Geet but he never thought of her any less from them(Maan, Annie, Sameera).

MAAN(thinking): How can they do this to MY Geet? Once I'll get to know what all was happening with that stupid girl here, I'm not gonna spare any one of them.

MAAN: Namaste Thayaji! Namaste Thaiji!

First shocked at his sudden appearance but immediately got hold of their nerves. They smiled''''

Thayaji: Are Maan beta! How are you? Hows everyone?

MAAN: Everyones fine! Wheres Sameera?

Thaiji: Shes in her room. Shes been eagerly waiting for you. Go!!

Maan left''''.

MAAN(thinking): What kind of people are they? Didn't even ask for Geet.

Maan entered Sameera's room.

MAAN: Hi Sameera! How are you?

Sameera: Hey Maan! I'm rocking! Thanks to you yaar warna Geet didn't left a stone unturned in ruining my life.

Maan's anger rose with her words but he controlled'''''''

Sameera: Achcha listen! I need your sign on these papers.

MAAN: Sign?? Whats this?

Sameera: Wo papa asked me to take your sign on these to make you the legal owner of Geet's properties as you are her husband now.

MAAN: No, I don't want all this. Ask him to give these papers to Geet only.

Sameera: Arey stupid!!! See she behaves bossy, arrogant, proud with us because she knows she has so much property under her name but if you get hold of everything you can crush her under your feet. What do you say?

MAAN(thinking): Right now!! I want to crush YOU under my feet. You made a fool of Maan Singh Khurana all these years but now''''..

Sameera: Maan!! Where are you lost??

MAAN: No Sameera I can't cheat someone.

Sameera: Maan shes not SOMEONE shes Geet reason of Rano Aunty's death.

Even those words didn't have any effect on Maan.

MAAN: No, whoever she is I can't do this. Its against my principles.

Sameera: But'''''..

MAAN: Sameera I'm very tired, pls get me a cup of coffee.

Sameera: Ya sure.

Sameera went out, Maan followed her''''''

Sameera(shouts): Geet!! Geet!!

Maan: Shes not here I left her with Meera. Pls bring my coffee soon.

Sameera: Oh! Ya I thought she must be here to I should meet her. You go freshen up I'll bring coffee.

With that she ran away from there but Maan kept following from a distance.

Sameera: Ma! That maharani Geet is enjoying herself with Meera while my dear friend Maan has given me order for my special coffee. Now from where should I bring that special coffee? How can you be so lenient with her Ma? I think Maan se shaadi kar ke Madam mein bhi Maan aa gaya hai so remind her ki nothing has changed, here shes still our dear servant.

Thaiji: Haan beta let her come then I'll take her class. How dare she ignore everything and enjoy herself.

Sameera: I don't have time to wait for her I've to take coffee for Maan soon so pls go and find her.

Thaiji: Instead of going and searching for her in the whole colony I'll better make coffee.

Sameera: Ok Ma! As you wish! I've to talk to papa. I'll just come.

Sameera enters Thayaji's room while Maan stands just outside.

Sameera: Papa! Maan is not ready to sign these papers.

Thayaji: WHAT??? Now what will happen? I told you it's a bad idea to marry her off but you convinced us for your own selfish reason saying you can easily handle Maan. Now what happened? How did you fail? If that Maan doesn't sign the papers I'll lose all the property for which I've kept that girl with me.

Sameera: Papa don't worry Maan doesn't know that these properties are transferred automatically in his name after marriage while Geet doesn't have any clue about it. So, we can use everything for ourselves without their knowledge.

Thayaji: I hope this plan works otherwise keeping Geet with us all these years will go in vain.

Sameera: Of course it'll work papa. See we all know how naive our Geet is and Maan ko to main bachpan se hi ullu banati aa rahi hoon.

That was final blow to Maan's building anger. He wanted to see them begging for their life to end. He was shivering with anger when he turned around and his eyes fell on entrance where Thaiji was twisting Geet's hand to her back and Geet had tears in her eyes. Without any second thought he ran and held Thaiji's hand.

MAAN: ENOUGH!!!!!!

Thaiji and Geet both were shocked''''

Thaiji(mumbling): Ma'''''.Ma'.an be'.ta''''..

Maan showed his palm to shut her up while Sameera saw everything and immediately called someone''''

MAAN: I never thought you people can be so cheap. I loved and cared for you all like my own family and here you are torturing and using a girl to get her property??

Sameera: Maan why are you dragging yourself in this waise bhi you don't like her and want to get rid of her. You just sign the papers and go from here we will take care of her. I know many guys who want to get her.

Maan's eyes were blood shot and his every muscle contracted with anger. He roared''''..

MAAN: SHUT UP SAMEERA!!!!!!! A single dirty word for MY Geet and you will be dead right here.

Geet who was still trying to grasp every information she got felt like she was dreaming and couldn't contemplate it was a nightmare or a beautiful dream where her hero was fighting for her and calling her his when she felt something cold touching her forehead and turned to see Brij holding a gun to her forehead. She instinctively screams''''''''.

GEET: MAAAN!!!!

Brij: Maan Singh Khurana sign the papers else she will be dead next second.

MAAN(with smirk): You can't kill her. There is definitely a catch else she would have been dead long back.

Knowing Maan since childhood Sameera knew he would not give in so she got hold of a gun and held it to Maan's forehead and asked for Geet's sign on some papers. She signed them without any delay.

Sameera: Thanks dear sis but since your husband didn't sign papers we have to complete lot many legal formalities for this transfer so till then be our guest.

With that said they were taken to some dusky place in the outskirts of the town. In all the haste nobody noticed the two people following them from a distance'''''''''''.

Phew!!!!!!!! finally I updated!!!!!!!! I'm really nervous with this part...hope i did justice to your expectations. Do let me know through your comments and pls don't forget to hit the like button.

PREV - PART 3

NEXT - PART 5

Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome update dear continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Really really loved it plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
really amazing
awesome update
really nice concept...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
read in one go
finally maan find out the truth
wonder what i'll happen next
waiting
thank yu so much

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm part...jus lvd it ...fynly maan knows d truth...n thanks 4 pm

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