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Gauri was getting really worried about Geet... By now she was 100% sure that all her excuses are lame and the real reason behind her sadness was something else...
Gauri: Pratham tumne ghaur kiya hai aajkal Geet kitni udas rehti hai?
Pratham: Haan dhyan to mera bhi gaya hai par tumko pata hai iski wajah??
Gauri: Nahin Pratham tum to jante ho bachpan se hi apna dard bantna nahin seekha meri bachchi ne. Meri masoom si bachchi ne paida hote saath apne maan baap ko kho dia phir jo dada usko yahan itne pyar se leke gae wo bhi chal base. Sach bataoon mujhe Manjeet bhaisahab(thayaji) pe bilkul bharosa nahin tha par Gurwinder(geet's darji) uncle se kie hue wade ke karan hum Geet ko yahaan nahin la sake. Isilie jab Maan Geet ki shadi hui main bahot zyada khush thi ki ab meri bachchi mere paas rahegi aur main kabhi kisi dukh ko use chhoone bhi nahin doongi. Par main haar gai Pratham, isse achchi to wo hoshiarpur mein thi.
Pratham: Gauri tum aisi baatein kyun kar rahi ho? Hum kal Geet se baat karenge aur sab theek ho jaega tum aise disappoint mat ho.
Gauri: Pratham tum jante ho na kitne bharose ke saath mohinder bhaisab ne nanhi see Geet mujhe saunpi thi...mujhe aaj bhi wo pal achche se yaad hai...
FLASHBACK
After the severe heart attack Mohinder lying on his hospital bed... Geet was in Gauri's arms and Mohinder was touching the baby with all the love he had... Tears were non stop flowing from his eyes...
Mohinder: Bhabhi mujhse bahot bari galti ho gai. Main Rano ki maut ke gham mein ye bhool gaya ki jis bachchi ka chehra main dekhne se inkar kra raha hoon wo usi Rano ka sapna hai... Hum dono ka sapna hai... Is gunah ke baad to main jake Rano se nazrein milane layaq bhi nahin raha... Par Bhabhi meri Geet ka khayal rakhna, use kabhi udas mat hone dena aur use batana ke uske maa papa usse bahot pyar karte the...
Rano ko mujhpe kitna bharosa tha ki main hamari bachchi ko hamesha khush rakhoonga aur jab wo mujhe saunp ke gai to main gusse mein apni hi beti ko uski maut ka karan keh baitha...ye bhi nahin socha ki ye sun ke Rano ko kaisa lagega... Main is masoom ka pita banne layaq hi nahin hoon shayad isiliye Babaji mujhe apne paas bula rahe hain aur is masoom ko apki jholi mein daal rahe hain... Isko kabhi hamari kami mehsoos mat hone dena Bhabhi...
Gauri was going to say something but Mohinder started choking and then his eyes were closed forever...
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Both had tears in their eyes remembering one of the most painful moments of their life...
They both silently prayed for Rano and Mohinder's peace.
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But the person who's tears were not ready to dry was standing at the door... Maan's world collapsed hearing Geet is Rano's dream and thinking what he had done with that dream... He has not only broken his Rano mom's dream but shattered her to pieces that is not possible to mend...
He stood by the door shedding tears and trying to hear what more his parents have to say...
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Gauri: Jante ho Pratham jab hamein pata chala tha ki Rano ko beti hone wali hai hum aur bhi zyada khush ho gae the socha tha ab is dosti ko rishtedari mein badlenge. Rano to khushi ke mare pagal ho gai thi wo to tabhi se Maan Geet ki shaadi ke sapne dekhne lagi thi. Pata hai wo kehti thi ki 'ab to mujhe apne bachchon ki koi chinta nahin hai. Mujhe yakeen hai ki mera Maan to ise(touching her stomach) ko palkon pe bitha ke rakhega kyunki Maan apni Rano mom se bahot pyar karta hai aur ab samjhane ke baad is aane wali mehman se bhi aur ise main sikhaoongi ki Maan ko duniya ki har khushi de, use sabse aage rakhe aur use kabhi dukh na ponhchae...aur Gauri agar isne Maan ko zara si bhi thes ponhchai to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga'.
Gauri smiled slightly remembering her friend's child like excitement while planning all that.
Gauri: Aur shayad isiliye jab Maan ne Geet se shaadi ki baat ki to main bahut khush ho mujhe laga Babaji ne Rano ki sun li aur maine Geet ki khwahish pata lagane ki koshish bhi nahin ki. Par Pratham mujhe lagta hai humse bohat bari galti ho gai. Maan Geet ko khush nahin rakh pa raha hai warna aur kya wajah ho sakti hai jo use andar hi andar khae ja rahi hai?
Pratham: Gauri tum bohat zyada soch rahi ho. Hosakta hai Geet ko ye baat kha rahi hai ki humne unki shaadi publicly announce nahin ki hai aur shaadishuda ho ke bhi use bahar ek kunwari larki ki tarah jana parta hai... Geet jaisi larki ke lie mangalsutra aur sindoor ki bohat qeemat hai aur shaadishuda hoke bhi bina un sab ke rehna use bura lag sakta hai...
Gauri: Haan ye bhi ho sakta hai. Waise bhi wo janti hai ki kisi ko na batana ye Maan ki marzi hai aur Geet Maan ke khilaf kuch nahin kahegi. Shayad isiliye wo hamein bata bhi nahin pa rahi. Ap kal hi Maan se baat kijie aur hum isi hafte mein party rakh ke Maan ki shaadi ki official announcement kar denge. Main apni bachchi ko aise udas nahin dekh sakti.
Pratham: Theek hai meri jaan itni hyper mat ho sab theek ho jaega.
She hits his chest lovingly while frowning.
Gauri: Chaddo aap bhi na bachchon ki shaadi announce karne ki baat kar rahe ho aur khud ko hi romance soojh raha hai.
Pratham: Are to kya bachchon ki shaadi ke baad maa baap romance nahin kar sakte. Mujhe to shaadi ke naam pe apni shaadi yaad aa gai.
They kept on talking for sometime...
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Maan was devastated after hearing everything. He wanted to punish himself, destroy every bit of his soul the way he destroyed Geet. He despised himself for breaking Rano's, his parents and lastly Geet's trust to bits. He was walking towards the gym while his tears were nowhere near stop...
Maan(thinking): Ye maine kya kar dia?? Main itna selfish kaise ho gaya ki kabhi ye bhi nahin socha ki main to Rano mom ke saath itne pal guzar chuka, mere paas yaad karne ke liye yaadein hain par Geet uske paas to kuch bhi nahin hai usne ankhein kholne se pehle hi apni maa ko aur bolne se pehle hi apne papa ko kho dia. Kabhi nahin socha ki uska dard mujhse kahin zyada hai phir bhi wo muskurati rahti hai apne dard ko chhupa ke aur main usko khush karne ki bajae hamesha dukh deta raha. Rano mom ko kitna bharosa tha ki main unki Geet ko palkon pe rakhoonga par palkon to dur maine usko chand pal ki khushiyan dena bhi gawara na kiya. Maine har rishte se apna haq kho dia hai. Main kisi ke pyar ke qabil nahin hoon aur khaskar Geet ke. Main to Geet se maafi mangne ke qabil bhi nahin hoon. Main ek nihayat hi khudgarz insaan hoon jise apne saamne kuch nazar nahin aata...
He entered the gym. Lit fire in fire chain and started doing fire stunts... He was using every bit of his power in every move...
He was feeling the fire's heat when it neared his bare skin but the physical pain was nothing infront of the torments he was going through... He kept on hurting himself with the fire for more than half an hour but it wasn't enough for him. He brought huge slates of ice and started breaking them with bare hands...
The force he used on the ice got a cut on his hand. Blood oozed out of the wound but he didn't stop injuring himself badly.
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Geet was getting restless in her room.
GEET: Babaji ye Maan kahan reh gae? Wo to paani lene gae the. Paani lene mein itna time thodi na lagta hai? Mera mann bahot ghabra raha hai main jaa ke dekhti hoon. Bas door se dekh ke aa jaoongi.
Geet went to the kitchen but it was empty. Same with his study then she went to the gym and the sight tore her apart...
Maan had burn marks on his bare skin, blood was oozing out from his hand and he was sweating profusely but still not stopping...
GEET(screamed): MAAAN!!!!!
His head turned towards her. She came running to him and stopped near him. He fell on his knees in front of her circling her waist crying like a baby while his head rested on her abdomen.
She instinctively moved her hands to his hairs.
She didn't know the reason of his sudden breakdown but she knew she had to sooth him and bring him out of this state...
MAAN: Geet main bahot hi gira hua aur khudgarz insaan hoon. Main kisi ke pyar ke qabil nahin hoon Geet... Main bahot bura hoon... Bahot bura...
Geet was continuously nodding her head negatively...
Geet was very confused by his actions... She couldn't understand what happened that broke him so badly... She just tried to sooth his pain by ruffling his hair slowly... She was going to say something when she felt dizzy and started losing her conscious...
Maan felt her weight on him and immediately got into action. He lifted her in his arms and took her to their room. He called Annie after laying her on bed.
He was trembling with fear of losing her all the while Annie was checking... After Annie finished checking...
MAAN: Kya hua geet ko? Ye theek to hai na?
Annie: Bhai tension chhodo mithai lao...
Maan staring her as if she is some alien...
MAAN: Annie tu pagal to nahin ho gai??? Yahaan Geet behosh ho gai hai aur tujhe mithai chahie????
Annie: Are bhai ise kuch nahin hua aap papa banne wale ho..!!!!!
Maan with confused expressions...
MAAN: KYA???
Annie: Bhai aisa reaction????:-( Ap papa banne wale ho!!!!!
It took time but the incredible news hit his brain...
MAAN: Sach??? Oh Annie I'm sooo happy...
He instantly hugged his sister in happiness...
MAAN: Thanks Annie...
Annie: Bhai thanks mujhe nahin Geet ko bolo after all good news to usi ne di hai maine to bas sunai hai...
Maan instantly looked at her and was reminded of his every action that made Geet suffer for no mistake of her's...
MAAN(thinking): Geet mujhe pata hai main kisi rishte ke layaq nahin hoon... Main kabhi tumhari aur baby ki zindagi mein interfere nahin karoonga par tum dono ko dur se dekh sakta hoon na?? Main janta hoon tum to mujhe kisi baat ke liye mana nahin karogi par yehi meri sazaa hai ki main tum dono ko dur se dekh kar tarasta rahoon...
Geet slowly opened her eyes... Her eyes fell on Annie who was sitting beside her grinning madly... She tried to get up but Annie stopped her...
Annie: Leti raho Geet pls no need to stress yourself... Tum mama banne wali ho yaar...
Annie hugged her while giving her the beautiful news... It took some time for the news to seep through her but slowly a shy smile covered her face after a long time...
Maan was looking at her from the corner of his eyes... His badly wounded heart soothed with her smile... He didn't know since how long he was longing for her one smile...
Geet felt out of the world... She slowly touched her abdomen trying to feel the existence of the life that was within her... She was amazed with the feel... The sparkle that touched her eyes while feeling the new life made Maan skip several beats...
He felt like taking her in his arms and kiss those diamonds to share their happiness together... But controlled himself knowing he has already lost all his right on the two most important people in his life from now on...
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Really sry namita25 Geet getting pregnant was important for the story i originally thought about
so couldn't change it but i hope u like the track!!!!!
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Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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