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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally they became one, but Maan was under sharrab ki nasha, I am scared of his reaction once he will be normal!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome update
luvd da jelous maan
plzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVEEED IT!
i'm scared of what Maan's gonna say though when he wakes up!
i can just picturee his ego taking over and him saying something so hurtful!
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abgina so beautiful update
geet is so cute , can't believe maan is so jealous just want to see his reaction when he wil be his full senses. so beautiful done.can1t wait 4 next.



Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part...

luvd it completely...

pls continue soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo sorryy for the late reply...😭 forgive me... the update ws ummmahhh...❤️ terrific... loved every word of it...👏👏👏 LOVE U FOR GIVING US AN AWESOME UPDATE🤗...cnt w8 fr the next part...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome FF pl add me on your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful story!pls add me to ur pm list and give me a pm whenever u update the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago


(created by Piya)

Really really sorry for the delay guys and thanks a ton for bearing with me.

Thanks a million for all of your love and support!!
Your comments and likes really make me feel special and motivates me to write more for u all'.
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THANK U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!!!❤️🤗



Part 10


Geet woke up before Maan and a shy smile crept up on her lips seeing Maan holding her tightly in his arms. She lovingly observed his handsome face for several minutes. Then she very slowly removed his hands from her waist so that his sleep is not disturbed. Taking her clothes she went inside the washroom.

Feeling the emptiness beside him Maan woke up with a slight smile on his face as the flashbacks of last night went through his mind but soon the realisation of what happened struck him and the smile was replaced by rage that was reflecting through his red eyes.

Standing in front of the mirror Geet was blushing profusely as her eyes fell on the marks he gave while claiming her forever. His words "you are mine...only mine!" echoed in her ears giving her heart immense happiness that provided an angelic glow to her face. Her eyes were shimmering with overwhelming emotions she was going through.

Maan ran his fingers through his hairs in frustration.


MAAN: What the hell did I do? How could I and why didn't Geet try to stop me?

GEET: Babaji thanks is a very small word in front of the happiness you bestowed upon me. I don't have words to thank you.

MAAN: I knew I was attracted towards her but never thought I will end up doing something like this.

GEET: Babaji I felt something different in Maan's behaviour towards me but never expected my feelings to be reciprocated by him. Ye to maine khwab mein bhi nhin socha tha k wo apne dil ki baat aise byan karenge.

She shied on her own thought.

MAAN: I can't lose to her for this mere attraction. I won't let her live with the satisfaction of truly being my wife. I can't forgive her ever. I'll shatter all her hopes.

GEET: Babaji jis chahat ke poore hone ki main kalpana bhi nhin kar pai aaj apne wo poori kardi. Geet ki har saans to pehle hi Maan ke naam ho chuki thi aur ab Geet poori tarah Maan ki ho gai. Aaj Geet ne sab kuch pa lia babaji. Sabkuch!

Her eyes twinkled with tears of happiness.

As Maan's eyes fell on her wet form coming out of the washroom he felt numb seeing glow on her face that was giving an extra edge to her beauty. Lost in the strong pull of her breathtaking beauty, Maan started moving towards her.

She was blushing seeing her effect on him.

He pulled her towards himself by waist and pushed her hairs at the back of her ear. He kissed away the drop of water on her earlobe.


She stopped breathing with that contact and closed her eyes.

He started to kiss the water drops all over her face and neck.

Her whole body was on fire by now and her breathing became heavy.

He removed the water drops from her lips with his thumbs while his lips were moving closer to hers.

She was lost in the feel and aroma of her husband.

Finally they were madly kissing each other lost in the world of their passion.

He moved downwards leaving her lips. He was kissing every exposed skin of her's fervently.

She moaned his name passionately.

That brought him back to reality and he jerked her away from himself.

She was looking at him dazed and confused.


MAAN(shouting): Stay away from me!! Samjhi tum??

GEET(almost whisper): Maan??

Maan reading the question in her eyes...

MAAN: Oh so after whatever happened yesterday night you have assumed that I have forgiven you and we will live like happily married couple? Geet! Isn't that too much too much to expect when you clearly know how much I hate you?


GEET(with teary eyes): Par Maan...

MAAN: Geet we share the same room so its obvious for me to get attracted by your beauty as I'm a normal man not a saint. Its natural Geet! I'll do the same if I share the same room with any other woman so its nothing special.

He didn't know why but he felt like his heart broke into million pieces while saying those lines.
Her tears were unstoppable by now and her heart was bleeding.


MAAN: Waise I would like it if we repeat last night everyday (he winked). Actually being my wife its your duty to fulfill my wishes. Will you?

Not able to bear his words anymore she ran away wiping her tears.
It took every ounce of her control to stop her tears.


GEET: Mom m going to college.
Gauri: Beta have your breakfast first.
GEET: Mom I've a competition today and I'm already late. So I'll have breakfast in college.
Gauri: But beta...
GEET: Pls mom...
Gauri: Ok beta but don't skip your breakfast.
GEET: Ji mom! Thank you! Bye!
Gauri: Bye beta!

Controlling her tears that were threatening to fall she ran out of the home.
She kept walking out of the gate lost in her pain.


Driver: Baby car yahan hai...
But she was numb to her surroundings...
She kept walking with tears continuously flowing for more than an hour when her eyes fell on a deserted park. She sat in the park. Her tears were nowhere near stopping.


GEET: Babaji why did you do this to me? I had already accepted the fact that Maan will not love me ever and was living with it. Then why all these circumstances that illuminated hope in my heart...why all that happened yesterday that made me forget everything and only made me think that he loves me...why babaji...why??

Geet's heart was bleeding with pain. His every word echoed in her ears and her heart was excruciated with each word.

GEET: Aj tak maine apse koi shikayat nhin kari babaji phir ap har dafah mera imtihaan kyun lete ho? Maine aisa kaun sa paap kar dia hai ki is zindagi ko jahannum se bhi battar bana rahe ho babaji?

She was continuously crying and questioning her babaji...
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Maan's heart was agonised after using those harsh and painful words in front of her. The pain that replaced the twinkle in her eyes was tormenting him every second. He was not able to think about anything but her when her phone that she forgot to take in the morning rang...

MAAN(thinking): Geet didn't take her phone? May be she forgot because of whatever happened. It must be Geet only. I should talk to her. May be listening to her fine voice will help me concentrate.
MAAN: Hello!

Gunjan: Hi this is Gunjan. Can I speak to Geet please.
MAAN: She is not in college?
Gunjan: No she hasn't come till now and we have a very important competition today. Please tell her to come soon. Thank you! Bye!

She cut the call with that.

MAAN: She isn't at the college? But she left so early...she is not even acquainted with Delhi. Where the hell is she? Oh god! What if...

He was not able to think further. His heart started beating erotically in fear of losing her.
He immediately called her driver.


MAAN: Kaka Geet apke saath hai?
Driver: Nahin beta pata nahin baby ko kya hua, main pukarta raha aur wo chali gain. Main to ghar par hi hoon. Kya hua beta?
MAAN: Nahin kuch nahin kaka.
MAAN(thinking): She didn't even take her car. I hope she is safe. She can't go far walking and her bag is also here so she doesn't have any money with her to take auto or taxi.

He ran outside and started searching for her like a maniac in all nearby areas.
His heart was falling apart with each passing second. He was cursing his inability to find her.
He came back home and again went out in his car to search for her.
He was searching madly for her on Delhi roads when his eyes fell on a dupatta that was waving with the wind from behind a tree.

He ran towards it and his gaze fell on her body lying unconscious beside the tree. His breath was stuck in his throat with the sight. He knelt down and checked on her. He immediately lifted her in his arms and ran to the car. He lay her on the backseat and sprinkled some water on her face.

She got back her conscious slowly.
He instantly hugged her...


MAAN: Why did you go like this Geet? Agar tumhein kuch ho jata to?


Hope I lived upto your expectations!!!!!!

I'm really nervous about this part guys'''..if anyone feels that I wrote something objectionable pls do tell me I'll edit it'''''''.

Pls do let me know what you think about the update'''

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Pls do comment''..they make my day!!!


Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee
i m the first one
great update...

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