'Bodyguard' I - Page 7

hahahahaha! 😆 i cn't stop laughing! that was so much fun! even though shilpa needs a reality check. continue soon

Awesome version of MAANEET

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Hi dear the ff starting is good. Is it ff or os?

U did awesome job this this part. Riddhima's childishness, craziness everything u showed well in your writing.

Now coming to the detailed comments''.

(red colour your dialogues and blue my comments)

"hey god. You listen my every wish'plzzz listen thisone too'pakka ye akhri hogi hehehhe'hmm mujhe ek body guard plzzz''aur wo bhi ek handsome hunk..not chilka type..plz plz plz god'..apni pocket money Prasad chadhaungi"Said this she jumped from her bed and run towards the kistchen where her mom cooking some pulao for her favorite daughter.

sooo cute dear. well done. I love it.👍🏼👍🏼👏

"Riddhima kiya hua bachhe'ab kaunsi movie dekhli" padma chuckled. no one knew her daughter better then her mother"

u r right girl... no one new about a daughter better than the mother.

"Mom plz dedo na ek bodyguard..mujhe chahiye"Riddhima pouted while grabbing the corner of her mother dupatta..

wow sooo cute... it reminds me of my daughter.

" ohh really baby wo to parents teachers meeting main pata chalega" padma smirk ..she knew Riddhima weekness.Riddhima face turn into a horror..Before padma could say mor..ridhima run back to her room.

⭐️

She pouted her lips and said to her god" ye kiya kya aapne..ek hi to bodyguard manga tha'upper se PTM ki damki dilwaadi'plz god sunlona'.ek bodyguard plz..aur han plz save me from PTM" Said this she opened her notebook and start doing her"

so dam funny.

U well described about the teenage.

totally the update was

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thanks for the pm dear.

and dear i think u should open 3 thread for 3 versions because it is confusing to read all together

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg

Heeey

Awesome start

Geet is naughty loll

Cont sooon

Harneet <3

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

fabulous update
awesome
cont soon

Originally posted by: illa8

omg i really love the concept and the first part plz continue soon maybe even today if u can ...this is like the best fan fiction ...continue soon plz plz plz =)

awww honey sweetuuu thnx alot for the comnt...love it dear...well today is not possbile bcz i have some guest who are coming for dinner tonight si kinda busy with themm...stil i try to update

Originally posted by: amreenshameem

Pm me
Cont really soon pls