Sid - It's gonna hurt while it heals Pt 38 Pg 106 - Page 33

Originally posted by: payyal

kk no more comentz 😳

Ohhh No No No ... please comment but lets not chat here ... You see we are wasting IF space and its against rules to chat here for that we have chat clubs or pm service 😳

But please Comment 😳

LOL SID TOH DEVDAS BAN GAYA HAI

OMG! my expectations are growing higher n higher * rubs hands in anticipation*

DJ...,

Firstly sorry for late comments. There are already 21 parts. But you know me. I am the same bad lazy person. But I am reading all your parts regularly ...


Secondly and more importantly. Excellent effort. 👏. This is so different from your previous one and all I can see is your efforts in excelling in writing skills. I like it. You are experimenting with yourself and I can clearly see it and I would like to say, you are doing very good. ⭐️. The previous one is elaborative, written with lot of thinking, planning while this one is crisp. I guess you are satisfied with the previous one as well as not satisfied (somewhere wanted to do something different) and hence this trial. I like the drunk Sid and this character extension also looks very natural and I am thoroughly enjoying it. But please update the other one also, because that one is excellent too.. 😃

hey Dj you are giving out a beautiful piece of writing

nice update DJ, Please continue soon with a new update...:)

OMG this part was beautiful , painful & heart breaking </3

Why r u doing this to my poor baby ?? :( he became a total devdas :( I feel soo bad for him :'(

Ufff Maiya did she really thought Sid will b living a happy life after what she & her phoreverrr aashiq did to him ?? Like really ??? I feel like strangle dem to death :x

Loved how u described Maiya's emotions & thoughts in the bar scene . Beautiful piece of writing <3

can't wait to see how Siddy boy will treat his dhokebaaz ex wife ;)))

Continue superrr superrr soon...

gosh im nt liking hw maiyya following sid,,,,,

thnx a ton 4 da pm n da reply. . Its so nyc of u. . . M actualy ur old silent reader i did read ur other ff also. . . . M mising juhi a bit in dis 1.anyways ur update was superb, awesum plus perfect, da way it shud b. . . . . U wont believe bt i jst cried seeing sid n so mch pain n my sisterz r caling me psycho lolx . . . . Bt ur ff s sch dat it moved me to tearz. Superb update. . . Plz do write soon. . M eagerly waiting 👏