Sid - It's gonna hurt while it heals Pt 38 Pg 106 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 6

The change was anticipated. Things were too messed up. For a few days after Dr. Kirti took over charge all went fine but soon many felt the atmosphere in Sanjeevani deteriorating. The person in question for the change in atmosphere was none other whom he sort support from for his daughter. Everyday seemed to be a party or a special day being celebrated. Initially, both Shashank and Dr Kirti let it go. To a greater extent Dr Kirti even supported it for easing the tension in Dr Subhankar and her relationship but later things started going out of hand. Many accused both Shashank and Dr Kirti leniency for aiding repair to Riddhima's personal life. Every misconduct or lapse was compared with armaan's slippages in conduct. Though he was a decent doctor in fact one of the toppers of his time as an intern but everyone took leverage of his casual behavior to give an excuse for their own. At such times, both Dr Kirti and Shashank were tongue tied. Sanjeevani Mumbai became a laughing stock at all Sanjeevani meeting and soon the management decided it was high time to take action. Shashank due to his previous record was spared to a greater extent but was definitely asked to pull up his socks. They were considering bringing back Dr. Abhimanyu Modi but Dr. Banerjee of US Sanjeevani convinced the board to dismiss the idea and have only the DO changed and review the situation.

Due to all this, Shashank was already aware of Sid's appointment as a DO. He was a little scared. Natural for a father of a daughter whose past kept on interfering with her present. He wondered if this was going to be history repeating itself. He was already seeing a definite rift between armaan and Riddhima. In the initial days things seemed more than fine but soon things started changing.

At home she would be lost in her own world. Many of the nights he has seen Riddhima strolling on the terrace or her balcony or plainly standing there staring at the sky. If at all she was in a room, she would lay down flicking the night lamp on and off. Her work was suffering as she would most of the time she would be tired and drowsy. Patients are a doctor's first priority and they should receive their undivided attention. Riddhima was caught violating this fundamental rule. One day while working in the OPD she had tried shifting a patient to another doctor without any valid reason for not attending the patient. Shashank found Riddhima too edgy around armaan and he concluded this was the reason behind not attending the patient. She was trying to avoid interaction with armaan. Off late even the mention of his name unsettled her. He was worried of the consequences Sid's comeback would have on his daughter and her relationship with armaan.

He was hoping to manage some change before the order was affected, thus trying to buy more time to either delay or better still cancel the order. But while doing all this he did not want Riddhima to know any of it and so he packed his daughter off for a holiday. Knowing armaan, he would follow her. Initially Riddhima resisted the idea of a holiday but Shashank had a better plan. He sent armaan to Delhi Sanjeevani on pretext of some work and cleared ground for setting things right.


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Edited by DJ.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh so riddhima still confused...
bt i love this new story a lottt
brilliant DJ
waiting for next update...

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Posted: 14 years ago
I know i am a sweetheart😳 and though i really wished it could get over in 100 parts..how perfect would it be? the last part of the ff in 100 part but anyways 110 parts means i get to read more(i am reading ur ff..i know that you think i am not..i just read them little by little )Anyway coming back to this ff. i have already told you bro,you are brilliant🤗

I have already said how much i love this drunk sid idea of yours and how you have written it. In the second ff unlike your first one you haven't deified and i had no choice but to love that riddhima of yours and i seriously hated you fot that:p but end mein kya kare? i know you are helplessly in love with riddhima so had to forget my hatred for you. But this ff atleast in the first part Riddhima is a pure evil witch who is conniving ,vindictive and unfaithful . i wish i could go on but then i would be violation IF's rules(abusive language or derogatory expressions)😆 I mean she such an awful person. SH enever understood his love or his pain .It was only about her or Armaan's pain. I hate to see how sad sid is in this part

Drunk sid will open whole new dimensions of sid to your readers. His anger frustration .Mr.Mean modi will be back 😎 And i sincerey hope he isnt nice to Riddhima in this one. A few taunts will just make my day .That lady has ruined our Siddy boys life and she need's some one to give it to her. People should just stop treating her like the bhartiya abla nari who is always suffering.

I love how you have shown Sid's character. Some one who loves but doesnt want to. Some one who cries but doesnt want to . Some who is angry but cant find a way to show his anger.Some one who is lost and betrayed and hopeless. I hope some one enters his dark life as a ray of sunshine. He needs it,he certainly deserves it. The first part was awesome. I loved reading it. And since exams are near i can only afford to read one part on weekends :( otherwise i will have no time to write comments. And oh yeah my studies are going rubbish. i think i will be the firt ever person to fail in all subjects.

I love the title dj and lennie di. Its so true,aint it? Time heals all wounds,but its slow and unless the wound is completely healed up it will continue you to burn,pain,irritate or sting you. Till then you just have to put some medicine or bandage and unfortunately for sid that bandage or medicine is alcohol.

I cant think of anything else to write😆 .
Proud of the way you have emerged as a writer🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update DJ... I love the way you're unfolding this story... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Both parts were amazing
thnku so much 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part
lovin it
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragzie



Drunk sid will open whole new dimensions of sid to your readers. His anger frustration .Mr.Mean modi will be back 😎 And i sincerey hope he isnt nice to Riddhima in this one. A few taunts will just make my day .That lady has ruined our Siddy boys life and she need's some one to give it to her. People should just stop treating her like the bhartiya abla nari who is always suffering.


I am so with Pragzuu on this one...plzz bro for once forget ur LOBE for Riddhima maiya and show Sid being extra mean to her and taunting her😛 plzzz it would really really make my day!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good work so far DJ as always As for Sid, i like how you have got him and how he was with Shaks, and with Armaan and Ridz - he has to maintain he is the boss and so on, and he isnt here for fun and everything, he treats everyone the same - like it or lump it, is the motto lol

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