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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#381

ani...me is back on htis auspicious day...eid mubarak...may u get loads of happiness in ur life...and everything u ever wished fpr...
mujhe pc mil gaya,...bro wanted the bike..i dont know what he did with pc...dekha padega cookies delete karne padenge...lol

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nehaagarwalv

@nehaagarwalv

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#382

This Devil has a heart that cares about Geet a lot. That is y he did nothing. Very minor punishment for the crime of almost killing him 😆 Superlike👏. he loves her tooo much. Already informed her parents that she is late. He is tooo good 😍 Waiting for ur next update make it soon and make it hot 😉. njoyed reading it

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#383

@ annie. how r u and how did ur eid gone. hopefully u enjoyed it alottt.

now come to the point😆😆😆😆😆 u know the main point😉😉😉😉

update kab kar rahi hooo😆😆😆😆

u know me pakka devil😆😆 kuch bhi ho jaayee ghooma phira ke baat wonhi update pe aa jaati hai.

chalo ab kuch ghasi pitti shairi se tumhein bore karti hoon

woh thi eid ki tiaario mein masroof
hum janha baithe kar rahe the us ki udeek
use bhi hamari parwaah thi
par woh thi apni majboori se majboor
chalo ab tumne eid ka maza le liya
to apni position pe wapis aa jao
or ek ke baad ek update ki line lagao

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SilentMelody

@SilentMelody

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

@ JASRAJ
hey jas...very good...
ur shairi is very nice alwz & not at all ghissi pitti...

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SilentMelody

@SilentMelody

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

TO ALL MY LOVY DOVY FRNDS

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SilentMelody

@SilentMelody

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

hey anii...chamia...
what an update yaarr...
mind blowing...
this maan is an exceptional case srsly...
at 1 moment u will hate him & at next u will love him...
totally confusing...what he is upto at next moment...y can never figure it out...

Yes I am evil.. I am much worse than them ..But don't you dare compare my love with their lust.. Yes I am a monster .. I am ruthless .. but I am yours now..yes my love is different.. rude ..selfish.. evil but its all yours.. ONLY YOURS...
wow...maan really loves her ...only her
& he showed her difference in totally evil & different way...
bt im glad he succeded ...
& geet felt the difference...

And oh yes about the similarity.. I am Not going to rape you.. if I would have wanted it.. I would have don't it long time back.. but this is not my intention as of now.. Especially when you made the promise that you would try to love me if I don't break the line

lovely...maan is somewhere good at heart...& loves her purely...

banda sai ha han...

But still I have another punishment for you..

Hmm.. I want to sleep with you.. he told her casually..
Yes sleep with me.. I won't cross my limit.. Just sleep with me

lo phir aagaya devil...
ajib ha ye bnda b...
har haal ma usse apni hi baat manwani ha...

anii ye jo tm hamain confusion strokes de rahi ho uska elaj b kro...
bevadian to ban gayi han sab ab pagal na ho jayain...
aisa na ho tm ander jao aur hum sab metal hospital...
with 1 question:maan acha tha ya bura...
kbi acha...kabi bura...
akhir tha kya...

bt anii hatts off to u for creation of such character like maan...
hatts off to ur evil mind...
u r so intelligent...
good going dear

& simi's poems...very nice...

Edited by ranjeeta1410 - 14 years ago