MG FF-Shackles of Love: Pt5 pg 141 12th Oct - Page 108

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: udeshi91

very heart touching update dear

loved it how meera helped maan
maan tried to find geet in every where he knew , but he coldn't find her 😭
loved your song selection for maaneet it is one of my favourites 😳 can't imagine what kind of a pain and guilty he was going through while reminiscing about her 😭 his every thought and action depicted his frustation and agony maan's dream 😭 he was so happy when he thought she was there but alas within a fraction of time he lost his dream when he came back to the painful reality it remembered me this ''
there is one pain i often feel , which you will never know. it is caused by the absence of you ''
maan is repenting for his hasty action and rude words now 😕
hope maan will be able to find geet soon
meera came to meet maan 😲
eagerly waiting for next part now
thanks for the pm
please continue soon

hey udeshi😃
glad i managed to touch ur heart
meera is a gem of a person..who does it selfleesly...not expecting anything😳😳
and the song...lovely isnyt it..i listen to it 23/7😉😉
pain is such an emotion na ke anything can evoke it..but to feel someone elses pain is the worst pain.
maan will defo find geet..dont worry😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

thanks G...

i know u are very impatient...
chalo next update me GEET KA INTRODUCTION...just for u!!!😳😳😳😳😳

am not impatient... i dont want maneet to meet yaar... i just wanna see some of Geet...means actual geet...not geet in maan's thoughts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aashu lovely update👏👏👏👏👏

I felt meera's pain when she found that maan is married and is geet's husband.😭😭😭 So sweet of her to agree to help maan find geet.

Lool MKS is back by the way he is telling adi off for taking his time to answer the phone. Love his attitude, especially how without asking meera he assumed that it is ok for adi to call on her mobile until his new phone comes. 😆😆😆😆

Oh no why does maan think that he is not a good person😭😭😭. Lool loved meera's answer that she is only asking for his friendship and not janam janam ka rishta. Me glad that they are friends. 😊

Oh no its been a month and geet is still not found. I can imagine the torture and pain maan is going through every day, hour and second of being apart from geet.😭😭😭😭

Oh no none of geet's family knew where geet was. How dare darji be so rude about geet. love how he stuck up for geet in front of darji and said that its all his fault and not geet's at all.

So darji is behind geet being kidnapped. Good that maan suspects darji, tjji and mama and mami of something fishy. Maan must be hurt more after finding out his wife's troubled past.

Me love song and it is so true that it does portray how maan must be feeling.👏👏👏👏👏 Love the way you have described how maan remembers geet, hears her saying how she loved him again and again. He feels guilty that he never said ILU back to her. 😭

I was so hoping that geet would be found but no one had seen her. He is in so much pain at the way he has behaved with her and really wants to find geet, tell her how he feels about her and make things right between them.

Maan is really angry at himsefl and only geet can calm him down and make him happy again. It was so sad at the way he was looking at geet's picture and tracing her features.

Loool geet must look so cute in adi's glasses. Love the way you have described the pain and torture maan feels thinking about geet. He sees geet everywhere and is hurting himself so he can escape from her memories.

Loved this dialouge "Geet…..! Kaha chali gayee ho tum mujhe chod ke! Wapas aa jao Geet. Please wapas aa jao. Mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakta Geet. Please wapas aa jao!"

Its like he will not survive geet and aashu bahut mat tadpaoo hume, let maan find geet. 😊

Love how he feels her presence and imagines how hurt she gets seeing him hurt. She cares more about his pain than hers. 😊

So sweet that he hears her say ILU to him over and over again. Meera is going to pull his ears for when she finds him passed out in the living room.

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was an amazing update
loved it to the core
excited for the next part
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm..!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

am not impatient... i dont want maneet to meet yaar... i just wanna see some of Geet...means actual geet...not geet in maan's thoughts...

😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
good u specified..😆😆😆😆😆
hmm..geet ka adha adhoora POV in next updtae..pakka!😃😃😃😃
maaneet meet...no ways😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

lovely story and concept..

thanks shhruti😃😃
glad i liked it😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divareena

aashu lovely update👏👏👏👏👏

I felt meera's pain when she found that maan is married and is geet's husband.😭😭😭 So sweet of her to agree to help maan find geet.

Lool MKS is back by the way he is telling adi off for taking his time to answer the phone. Love his attitude, especially how without asking meera he assumed that it is ok for adi to call on her mobile until his new phone comes. 😆😆😆😆

Oh no why does maan think that he is not a good person😭😭😭. Lool loved meera's answer that she is only asking for his friendship and not janam janam ka rishta. Me glad that they are friends. 😊

Oh no its been a month and geet is still not found. I can imagine the torture and pain maan is going through every day, hour and second of being apart from geet.😭😭😭😭

Oh no none of geet's family knew where geet was. How dare darji be so rude about geet. love how he stuck up for geet in front of darji and said that its all his fault and not geet's at all.

So darji is behind geet being kidnapped. Good that maan suspects darji, tjji and mama and mami of something fishy. Maan must be hurt more after finding out his wife's troubled past.

Me love song and it is so true that it does portray how maan must be feeling.👏👏👏👏👏 Love the way you have described how maan remembers geet, hears her saying how she loved him again and again. He feels guilty that he never said ILU back to her. 😭

I was so hoping that geet would be found but no one had seen her. He is in so much pain at the way he has behaved with her and really wants to find geet, tell her how he feels about her and make things right between them.

Maan is really angry at himsefl and only geet can calm him down and make him happy again. It was so sad at the way he was looking at geet's picture and tracing her features.

Loool geet must look so cute in adi's glasses. Love the way you have described the pain and torture maan feels thinking about geet. He sees geet everywhere and is hurting himself so he can escape from her memories.

Loved this dialouge "Geet'..! Kaha chali gayee ho tum mujhe chod ke! Wapas aa jao Geet. Please wapas aa jao. Mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakta Geet. Please wapas aa jao!"

Its like he will not survive geet and aashu bahut mat tadpaoo hume, let maan find geet. 😊

Love how he feels her presence and imagines how hurt she gets seeing him hurt. She cares more about his pain than hers. 😊

So sweet that he hears her say ILU to him over and over again. Meera is going to pull his ears for when she finds him passed out in the living room.

hello...darji is not behind any kidnapping...
who is kidnapped??
ree...geet left him on her own..
i thoti made that clear😕😕😕😕
meera will def pull his ears and give him a good talking down😡😡
thanks ree...
glad u liked it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1

that was an amazing update

loved it to the core
excited for the next part
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm..!! :)

thanks dear😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukon

Awww...My heart is aching with the pain that Maan is gonig through ..😒 Please reveal Geet's where abouts and unveil the mystery as to what happened between Maaneet .. Please please please .. update soon :'(😭😭

well geet ka whereabouts in next update...😳😳 maybe😃😃😃
😆😆
glad u can feel maans painOuch
that was the intention😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

thanks dear😃😃

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