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Posted: 13 years ago
Those kameenas are really kameena. Oh poor chameli. Finally they escape, and maan got there. Cant wait for them to meet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor chameli😭
Brahmanand😡 grrr...
finally Maan is landed 😍
thanks for the update
hope you update soon
waiting for Maaneet



Edited by abina03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 41: Enraged or Victorious Smile

10 October 2011

17:52


( Warning Its a very Boring Part ..please dont read , just skip and press like ..

i have tow rite because i want to complete my first FF , for the flow ... Sorry to bore u all

its contains how Maan revenged , actually amruth did all .. Sajjan and whole Village ...Ok press likes ...pleaseee)


Once he was sure Geet had survived that incident and was in Sajjan haveli ..New life has come to him..

Now no one need to tell Maan what to do Next , but have to be careful ..

He deployed more men around to search and got all information wanted instantly , it was very easy he caught 2 three gundas ,sajjans men ...Body gaurds Muscle power just one punch below the ribs made them tell all the truth ..nothing but truth ..

How doctorni kidnapped ... Raped ... Tortured without food ..and finally with the help of a tribal girl servant how she escaped

All happened in Sajjan Haveli ...Maan Just recovered from A coma State can not bear all these ,he collapsed feeling the pain of his sweet heart ... When he gain conscious in the evening .., His Mother with him ...asked him to find Geet , She said now leave all thoughts and find Geet as soon as possible ...before the others catch them ..So its high time he need to be controlled and get in to action rather than feel and lost ...

""And the Matters here ...I will settle . I already started . I will teach those bas***ds what to mess with my Bahu ""

Yes indeed , She already started her revenge in tru modern Kshatriya way , The ShoolSena Members the bogots of the villages houses were on fire , Income Tax ride , police Ride on various cases.. The black Money , The Illegal land Transfer matters , counterfeit , Hunting In prohibitted area and illegally keeping stuffed wild animals , above all most persons hoses for the complaint they filed for Robbery in plain day light ... ( Some masked people broke in and robbed their house they took all money they had as if they were sure where the money is , yes the same money they had that they got from selling their land to Khurana Construction) .. They started to suspect each other .. Its only them know they had money .Then fights ... And Then series of Arrests .. For teh honour Killings going on in that village for last 10 years ..

All within 24 hours ... Maan and Amruth continuously on calls and the Haveli They brought became a HighTech Control room ...They were able to trace Cheenu ..who was seen around the Hospital where all sajjan family admitted ..seems he wanted to see his mother , Mother an son rejoiced

But then one of their Detective rushed to them ...

"Madam .."he shivered ...

Maan angrily .."What Happened Speak Dammit ""

Cheenu Committed Suicide !

They were in search of Geet , Cheenu and Chameli (they dont have any picture sadly)

Then they spotted him in Bhuvaneshwar near The hospital where Alka was admitted after fainting at the airport , before Maans men could find him , he was seen dead

It says his mom dead and because the boy cant bear his mothers death and immediately jumped out of the Window ...Where his father was in ICU , When this happened His Grandmother was around ..and she paralysed ...

Maan sat down ..his last hope to find Geet ..

They all moved to Bhuvaneshwar , they understood nothing more left for them in Junglepur

...

Truth also revealed soon , but unofficially , Sajjan was mad at the events turned , his almost dead Son in pool of blood and missin culprit that too a n untouchable cast above all women he was mad ,,

He immediately understood his own Grandsons hand in it , and the enw of Alka Landing made him mad , he decided to teach Mother and son a lesson and captured Alka from Airport itself and spread the news she is hospitalised ,

He was sure Cheenu cant do anything without Alkas help and he would try to contact her at any cost

Alka was sedated and Cheenu somehow manged to sneak in to his motehrs room and there he confronted Sajjan and Mrs Sajjan .. There they all had fight and out of rage sajjan thrown Cheenu out of window ,,,,,,,, !! And in her protest to save her son alka died and in her effort to help her husband Mrs Kameena Injured and paralysed ...

Now Maan needed Sajjan to answer His ..

He moved all strings to Make put him jail and some Adjuctment with Politicians ..Maan Confronted him in jail ,

Sajjan Seeing maan , by then crooked Sajjan figured out maans involvement in it that for the Doctornee Only ...

He Laughed out Loud like a Mad Man ,

Maan punched hid nose to bleed hold his collar ...

Jithan bhee Badas nikalna hi nikal le ..

The more maan punched and hit Sajjan , the more loudly he laughed ... Amruth Hold Maan ..

He is a psycho Maan , an whispered we cant break him that easily

And he dont have a clue where Geet is , he is Just making you mad and drive u crazy and u do things that goes in his favour ..

Amruths experience once again guided maan

Amruth Turn Sajjan ...

I wish You Get out of this Jail the soona and see whats waiting for u at JunglePur

She smiled cheerily hold Maan hand

We dont left anything to do with this creature ...lets go and bring our Bahu Home

Gracely walked away ,

Sajjan scratched his head , he dont have a clue what Amruth said ...

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Sajjan spend all his savings to get out of the case of murdering his own grandson .. Finally he managed to get bail , he had no clue whats waiting for him at Junglepur , and whats going to change in 2 weeks ...

By then Brahmanand now in wheelchair because of the spine injury and paralysed Mrs kameena is discharged from Hospital ,

As soon as Saajan got bail he went hospital , when time came for him to take his family back he paid a visit at his wifes who is nothing but a burden now and ...

He left Bhuwaneshwr , headed to Jungle pur .. With his wifes deadbody and Handicapped son ..

he ran out of almost his money to turn the case , he need to spent lots and lots of money .. Sold out almost all property he owned as Brahmanands benami at Bhuwaneshwar now only Jungle Pur is his only escape where he was sure .he is the King

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Edited by magicia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love sis its not that boring as u said
its good
thanx for updating
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 42 . Search ...And A Skip Of Tongue

21 November 2011

17:03

    Angelic Analyst

  1. Oh my love where are you 
    I am dying to be with you 
    The thing which we shared 
    In my life, in my home, 
    On OUR bed 
    Doesn't it matters to you 
    Is it meaningless for you? 
    The four years of our togetherness
    You apart me from your life 
    And after that unlimited years of pain, 
    This is the only fact 
    In which im living 
    I am believing
    I want to live like 
    A happy man with all the happiness 
    But the one pain that you are not with me
    Is bigger than all the happiness
    When you are with me 
    I was not more than a live dead body 
    I start reacting on your words 
    On your touch'''''''.
    What more 
    You want from me
    Of Proof of your love 
    Please come back 
    I begged it to the god 
    For my life 
    This is not a life without you 
    Oh my love please comes back 
    I want my life to be with you 
    And can't live without you
  2.  

     

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Edited by -Magicia- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 41
The history Geography of Sajjan's Family came upside down in this...
well this is what these monsters desrved
for their cruel, disgusted and inhuman activities
but am sad for Alka and Cheenu... they surey didnt desrve this...
the Cheenu should not died... he was like keechar main kanwal...
ab Chameli ka kya hoga..!
Alka and Cheenu just got punishment of being related to these monsters
I cant believe Sajjan killed his own Grandson...
No doubt Amruth is a genious... master mind
Had she ever worked for some Intelligence srvices before...
Ifnot... She should try for them..
She should be more than wellcomed...
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 42

finally Maan in full action... leaving no stone unturned to find his Geet and wow... Armaan and Maan... two hotties in unison for Geet dhundo mission... Armaan is a true Friend I dont believe they even go to that Kalinaath Sister Tressia... unbearable attitude... What Realization... explain...????
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant parts
loved them
continue soon
Sajjan and his family received well punishment
but feel sad for cheenu
it's unexpected
maan met aarman
continue soon
jaldi jaldi aur part post karo
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved both d updates dear...
I jst hope soon Maan will find out Geet...
Plz update soon...
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update magicia...
finally sajjan punished...
i am waiting for the magical moment when maneet will meet😳
keep writing
love u and ur ffs
reva

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