Shifting Sands Chapter 20 posted/pg 146 - Page 72

Originally posted by: piyasingh

This is My frst commnt after reading almost all commnts nd discussions going on here...🥳

The one thng is comng 2 my mind again n again is ""i thnk geet also like maan"", she alwaz show her attitude 2 him, may b she is also fighting wid her feelings jst like maan... nd dont want 2 show him her feelings... 😕

u dont want 2 reveal geet pov here, its ok.. v will wait, bt i thnk u r not writng abt her pov bcoz jaise hi uska pov humare samne aayega, geet ki sari andar ki feelings b samne aa jayegi, nd u dont want us 2 know dis now...haina..??

MAAN wat shd i say abt him...?? he is a typical man, jo pyaar to ker sakta hai geet jaise ladki se, bt shaadi ke liya wahi MARRIAGE MATERIAL chahiye... u know wat dis story is same as my frnd's story... she is jst like geet... nd her bf is like a typical bf wants a marriage material as his lyf partner... 😡

Only 1 request plzz dont let maan marry sm1 else... otherwise its going 2 b very difficult fr maaneet 2 show dere feeliings fr each other. later...🥺

very very nice story,, i liked ur all ff, nd abt dis ff i wanna say ' i like geet's nature, her attitude, her straight forwardness, etc..etc... nd i m likng maan's jealousy too...😉😃

i wish u could update twice in a day...😆..i know its imposiible... bt dear kya jadu hai tumhari ff me, padker man krta hai aur pado..😍

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REALLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART...😃..ALL THE VERY BEST FR NXT PART...👍🏼

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

"Dadima...you were right about Geet, I am ready to marry where ever you say..."

oh how can I explain this line of Maan breaks my heart...typical man passing judgement on girls character when she slapped his ego by pointing out his own.

Geet is stunned and eyes moist because one more person is added to the list who only see outer appearence but don't want to see inner soul... she may have come there to say sorry to him for hurting him because she is pure from heart..she didn't want to say any rude words to him...but here Maan when now he can't get any help from her...he is throwing her out by accusing on her.

Mind-blowing update...thanx for pm

Originally posted by: goldenball

Today you stole my heart with your analysis...Very close...