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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

excellent update...very emotional...😭😭
😭😭😭hope next part will be 😳😉

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

😡😡

😭😭

👏👏

n yes...I HATE UUU...

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
mehu...
the much awaited words....I HATE U

i am not going to write anything coz i am so angry that had u been in front of me..mein tera kheema ban deti..
my only emo is 🤢😡...
i am not talking to u😡

reva

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

THANKS, Reva ! 😉

I was so low, ask Swati ! And you just cracked me up ! 😆

Before few moments, I was like 😭 and 🤢 and and 🥺 and 😔 and 😒 and

AND, NOW,

I am... 😊 and 😛 and 😃 and 😆 and 😉 and 😳 and and 🤗 and 🤣 and 🥳 and ☺️ and again...🤣

Thank you so much, Reva ! 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Swati, are you looking at this ? 😉

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
😡😡

😭😭

👏👏

n yes...I HATE UUU...

Wese, Jyo...I have explained the LOGIC of I HATE YOU in this part only ! 😆

So, THANK YOU Very very very very much, for LOVING ME !!! 🤗

And, this applies to ALL who said, saying or will say, I HATE YOU !!

Anybody, listening ? 🤔 Reva ? 😎 😉

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: maanddy

I know...I know...In fact, I am coming back to my Madz Avatar ! As, my sis and her lil son came !

Trust me, I am in love with him, he is so cute that I forget each and everything when he smiles !

Whenever I am in bad mood, I call him, coz his one smile and I am like...Gone ! I forget every problems of mine ! 😆 Have you seen his snap on FB ? 😕

Great!

He is indeed adorable...just checked his photograph...shooo cute!😃

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: maanddy

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

THANKS, Reva ! 😉

I was so low, ask Swati ! And you just cracked me up ! 😆

Before few moments, I was like 😭 and 🤢 and and 🥺 and 😔 and 😒 and

AND, NOW,

I am... 😊 and 😛 and 😃 and 😆 and 😉 and 😳 and and 🤗 and 🤣 and 🥳 and ☺️ and again...🤣

Thank you so much, Reva ! 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Swati, are you looking at this ? 😉

Yes Khurani!

I am looking at this!

Glad that you got your so-called dosage of I hate you to cheer you up!

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Seems everyone is busy HATING me ! 😭 So, I must run away ! 😭

Bye ! 😉

Thanks ALL ! 😊

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-AlwaysDamon-

@-AlwaysDamon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

" 'Will you marry me, again...NOW?' he asked her, he was already on his knees.

She smiled through tears, and tried to say yes, but she could not as the voice was lost in her throat. She was amazed because it was the strangest request from him; the place was not even in proximity to be called as marriage hall or a peaceful place. It was a crime scene. She was amazed as he knew it all and even after that, he asked for it. She was confused then, because there was no priest there, they have no vows, just nothing. But when she looked at him in his eyes, she was ready, because as he always used to say, a marriage is a private affairs, only and only between two people. He was there. She was there. They were together and that was all they needed.

'I would take that as a YES! Walk to me…Come to me…' he ordered as he understood it from her eyes.

And, she started walking elegantly with fear hidden in her eyes, she looked at him, he was smiling through the shine of lone tear in the corner of his eyes, she chose not to think much and she walked slowly, gazing at him constantly, and then, there was another explosion somewhere she did not know but she felt nothing, just before few hours, she was numb in his arms, yet again, she was numb, but this time, she could feel something in her heart, it was pounding strongly. She remembered her wedding, their wedding was in traditional way, and she remembered the day, she was in haste, she was worried for his look and then, when she saw him in the marriage hall, she was stunned, she was staring at him like she would eat him alive, she would attack that beautiful man ready to pledge his life, it was sad that at that moment, she did not know fate would have some other plans for them. Her marriage was simple, traditional even though it was much talked and awaited, big fat wedding. She felt like she was walking down the aisle, the explosion made her weak, and she felt like she would fell down but then, she looked at him, he was smiling at her and he was silently, giving her strength through his eyes, to walk down the corridor as if it was aisle, to walk to him, to come to him in his arms forever. He adored her through his eyes, and she felt innate strength within her soul as he stared at her and silently asking her to come to him for last time.

She indeed felt like she was walking down the aisle, except the fact that, instead of candles lit through the edge of the wall, it was all bright and radiance because of the fire from explosion, instead of flowers decorated at place, there were dust and small pieces of burnt furniture, wall, papers, ashes, lights and glasses. Instead of melodious music or beautiful verse, there was chaos all around, the screaming of terrified people and sounds of gunshots. Instead of guests and priest, there were cops and terrorists, there was no minister, no priest, no vows, just nothing. They both were there, and their eyes were speaking a lot, they were making all the promises all over again, to love each other, to be with each other till the last breath which she thought, might be counting. They were alone there, each and every fiber constructing universe just stopped, and they were alive all over again, they were rejuvenated again, and they were smiling at each other.

Even if it would sound completely nonsense later in her life, if she would survive this, then also, she would proud to say that, when she was surviving a terrorist attack, walking to him between chaos, with complete fear and terror, somewhere in the small part of her subconscious mind, for their situation she just remembered few words for him and for her, she would be laughing at this after the night, that in between fire and shooting, she was remembering a song and her favorite lines from it, which was meant for him, for them.

If I lay here, If I just lay here, Would you lie with me, And just forget the world?

It was all that his eyes were speaking and her mind was thinking. "

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B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L !!!

Thats the word !!!

I loved this part so much !!!!! I can read and read and read and read this part again and again...This is incredibly awesome, lovely, superb part !!!!

OMG !!!!

Only you could imagine marriage in this fearful situation !!! Gawd...I was like...Maan proposed Geet...Marna He Kya...???

And then lastly the song...with that wordings...I heard it and OMG !!!! Fits perfectly...my teacher used to say that best writing is that writing which can make you see through words...and this entire part...I SAW IT !!!!!

WOW !!!! Great works, Madzz !!!! You are one terrific writer...very well know how to play with emotions and when to hold, when to free your readers...you caught us...and now I HATE YOU !!!!

of course the logic you explained in this part...I so hate you for making maan bleed...but I think you will no kill him...I am sure...my instinct says that you will not kill maan this time...as story does not need to kill anyone but fear...wt say????

again...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👍🏼

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-AlwaysDamon-

@-AlwaysDamon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Oh and by the way...even though I so wanna say I hate you but after reading this update for twice...I cant say it...and I choose...I LOVE YOU...for writing this amazing part...by far this is my FAV part...!!!!!

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Tyro

@Tyro

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: maanddy

Wese, Jyo...I have explained the LOGIC of I HATE YOU in this part only ! 😆

So, THANK YOU Very very very very much, for LOVING ME !!! 🤗

And, this applies to ALL who said, saying or will say, I HATE YOU !!

Anybody, listening ? 🤔 Reva ? 😎 😉