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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hai piya kya qatilana update dia hai yaar...
u rock dear...

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PART 44

Maan: Geet kahin tumhe afsoos toh nahi ho raha?

Geet did not feel the need to answer his question she simply sealed his lips with hers telling him the story of their blissful journey

Finally they ended their kiss

Maan was looking lovingly at Geet.

Geet could not take his gaze and immediately hugged him

Maan: Toh meri mishty ko sharmana bhi aata hai...

Geet: Sharmana bhi... kya matlab hai aapka

Maan: Ab dekhona Geet kuch der pehle tum khud hi mujhe itne pyar se kiss kar rahi thi aur ab jaise hi kiss khatm ho gaya dubara sharmana start kar diya... kabhi sherni toh kabhi chuhiya

Geet: Achha toh aapko kaun zyada pasand hai aapki sherni ya aapki sharmane wali gudiya

Maan: Sach kahu toh mujhe toh meri sherni pasand hai aur main toh kehta hoon humesha sherni ki tarah hi pesh aau... kam se kam mujhe humesha aise pyare kisses mila karenge

Geet: maan aap bhina bade shararathi hogaye ho zara apne iss lafange dil par kabu toh kijiye

Maan lifts Geet in his arms and places her on the bed

Maan: (naughty expressions)Geet jab tum mere itne kareeb ho toh dil pe kaabu kaun bekakuuf karna chahtha hai

Geet understanding his intentions pulls him towards herself

Maan too lands on the bed

Geet places her head on his chest

Geet: Toh mat rohkiyena... kisne kaha apne dil par kaabu rakhne ka liye

Maan: Geet dekho tum mujhe uksaa rahi ho phir mat kehna ke maine tumhe warn nahi kiya tha

Geet: Ab aapko nahi uksaaungi toh kya padosiyon ko uksau...

Maan: Geet mere alawa kisi aur ka naam bhi mat lena mazak mein bhi nahi warna

Geet: (with mischief in her eyes) Warna kya saza denge?

Maan: Hmm.. ab saza paane k liye koi itna bekaraar ho toh hum mana kaise kar sakthe hai

Saying so he captures her lips into a passionate kiss

After some time

Geet :Maan jaante hai ye jo lamhe hum saath bita rahe hai ye humari zindagi ki sabse keemti pal hai

Maan :haan Geet kuch saalo baad jab hum inn lamho ko yaad karenge tab humare chehre mein ek behet hi khoobsurat muskurahat hogi

Geet: Maan main uss lamhe ki shukrguzar hoon jis lamhe mein aap meri zindagi mein dhakil hue

Maan: Sach Geet uss din puri kayinaat humpar meherbaan thi ... na tumhe pata tha aur na mujhe k ek din hum ek duje k bagair rehne k bare mein soch bhi nahi sakthe

Geet: Maan mujhe kabhi bhi apne se dur mat kijiyega main aapke bagair jee nahi paaungi

Maan: Duriyon ki baat mat karo Geet... humara rishta itna paak hai k maut bhi hume judaa nahi kar sakthi ...haina

Geet :Maan ek baat bataiye jab hum budhe ho jayenge toh kya tab bhi aap mujhse itna hi pyar karoge?

Maan: Ye sawal toh mujhe tumse karna chahiye Geet...tum toh tab bhi lajawab dikhogi haan tumhara dust danav shayad itna handsome na ho tab...

Geet: Chup rahiye mere Maan jaisa koi nahi... aapse behter na koi hai aur naahi koi ho saktha hai...

Maan: Waise maine humari 50th anniversary k liye gaana bhi soch rakha hai ... sabke saamne gaaunga

Geet: Achha zara main bhi toh sunu wo kaunsa gaana hai aakhirkaar aap mere liye hi toh gungunayenge na..

Maan :Achha toh suno aur haan main tumhe advance mein ye gaana suna raha hoon issliye mujhe interest k saath mera gift chahiye

Geet: Achhaji... toh ab aap blackmail pe bhi utar aaye jaayiye mujhe nahi sunna..main humare 50th anniversary ka wait karungi

Maan: Par main toh abhi issi waqt tumhe wo gaana sunaunga mishty aur haan sahi waqt pe apna gift bhi tumse chura lunga

Geet was blushing

Maan started singing:

" Ae meri zoharzabi tujhe malum nahi tu abhi tak hai haseen aur main jawaan tujhpe kurbaan meri jaan meri jaan"

Geet was totally red and she hugged Maan in shyness

Maan :Geet agar tum abhi itna sharmarahi ho toh tab kitna sharmaogi

Geet:Aap bade bure ho

Maan: Haan woh toh main hoon par sirf tumhare liye... jaanti ho Mishty meri saari duniya bus tumhari ek muskurahat hai..tumhari inn aakon ki sharathe hai ... humesha aisi hi rehna kabhi badlana mat

Geet: Main toh nahi badlungi par aapko kuch badlana hoga

Maan: Kya..hukum kariye ji aapka har ek faisla saraakhon par

Geet: Aap bada besura gaate ho zara sur mein gaana gaana sekhiye..

Maan: Aap sikhaiyena...

Saying so he moves towards her lips

Geet: Achha aapko mujhse seekhna hai main toh humesha se hi taiyaar hoon ji

Maan was surprised

Geet got up and before Maan could claim her lips she bit him near his ear and ran out

Maan :Mishty ab toh tum jaane se rahi

Geet was trying to hide from Maan but finally Maan was successful in finding her

He pulled her towards himself

Geet closed her eyes expecting a kiss

But Maan placed a bunch of keys in her hand

Geet opened her eyes

Geet :Maan ye kya hai?

Maan: Geet ye iss ghar ki chabiyan hai jispar sirf tumhara haqh hai

Geet was overwhelmed to hear this

Geet :Par Maan ye...

Maan placed his hand on her lips

Maan: Shh... Kuch mat kaho Geet

He placed a kiss on her forehead

Maan :Geet pata hai main ye chabiyan tumhe ussi din dena chahtha tha par bhul gaya aur phir maine socha k main jis din bhi ye chabi tumhe du woh din kuch special hona chahiye

Maan: Aur aaj chuki humari pehli anniversary hai toh isse shubh ghadi koi ho hi nahi sakthi k ye chabhi iss ghar ki asli maalkin k paas pauch jaaye

Maan: Aur waise bhi ye gulam kab tak apni maalkin ki dharohar samal kar rakhtha

Geet: Maan aap itne achhe kaise ho?

Maan: Ab jiski Mishty itni pyari ho toh kuch asar toh uske Dhust danav par bhi toh hona chahiyena

Geet: Main sachmuch mein kafi lucky hoon Maan k mujhe aap mile...

Maan: Lucky toh hum dono hai Geet kyunki Geet k bagair Maan adhura hai aur Maan k bagair Geet

Maan: Waise Geet humne abhi tak humare Dreamhouse ka naam nahi rakha

Geet :Maine soch liya hai

Maan: Achha bataau

Geet :Kyunki hai humare pyar ki naishani hai issliye iss ghar ka naam MAANEET VILLA hoga

Maan: Maaneet Villa...

Geet: Haan abhi toh aap ne kaha na k hum ek dusare k bagair adhure hai toh iss ghar ka naam humare bagair saartak ho hi nahi saktha tha

Geet: Maan aur Geet k mel se bana MAANEET...

Maan : Haan ye hume humare pyar ka ehsaas humesha dilatha rahega...

Geet: I love u Maan...I love u more than my life

Maan: I love u too Mishty...

Geet: maan ab hume chalna chaiye bahut der ho chuki hai

Maan: Chalo Geet

he once again lifts her and carries her in his arms

Geet :Maan aap ye phir se kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Geet aaj main tumhare kadam zameen par padne nahi dunga aur waise bhi jab tak ye gulam hai toh aapko fikr karni ki kya zarurat

He takes her to the car and they start for Geet's house

PRECAP: RISHTA FOR GEET😆😆😆😆😆

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Love- Piya

This update is dedicated to my sweet Anu Di she is a Goldie now😛😛😛

PART 45: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1762105/ff-maneet-dil-mil-gaye-thread-3-upd-prt46-pg122

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wohooo
I am first

yippiee

i thought aaj hi rishta geet ke ghar chala jaega
par that okay yar..next update mein sahi
well loved the way u carried on from the last part
superbb
geet is getting naughty haan
muje to laga tha maan hi naughty hai par geet bhi kam nahin yar😉

loved the name of their home- "Maanet Villa"
nice thought
maan is to cute yar
kya bolu ab main
superb update as always

continue soon with the rishta ceremony now
want to know kya hota hai aage

muaaahhh

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago