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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update dear...
loved it...
awww super surprise...
loved the way maan described geet...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
great surprise plan Maan, waiting for☺️☺️☺️ I mean the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for ur love and support. This part has a song sequence it is a humble request do listen to this song.

Sheru u wanted some intimate moments of Maneet well i have tried but I m sure there may b loads of mistakes. Sorry for not living upto ur expectations
Khushi I hope u will like ur surprise

Love- Piya

PART 43

Maan: Geet puchogi nahi hum kaha jaa rahe hai

Geet: Aap chahe mujhe kahi bhi lejaiye main aapse koi sawal nahi karungi mere liye bus itna kafi hai k aap mere paas ho mere kareeb

Maan: Achha aur agar maine tumhare bharose ka galat fayda uthaliya toh

Geet: Aap aisa karoge nahi aur agar aapne aisa kar bhi liya toh bhi koi shikwa nahi hai aapka haq hai mujhpar aap jo chahe wo kar sakte ho

Maan opens the door of the car and places Geet on the seat

Maan: Geet main tumhe humare dream house mein le jaaraha hoon kuch der k liye

Geet: Maine aapse kuch nahi pucha Maan aap mujhe jaha marzi le chaliye main aapke saath chalne k liye taiyaar hoon

Maan: Toh thik hai chalthe hai

After some time they reach their dream house

Once again Maan carries her in his arms and takes her inside

He takes her to a room which was beautifully decorated with flowers and scented candles

There was a beautiful heart shaped cake lying on the table

Geet: Maan ye cake aaj toh na aapka birthday hai aur naahi mera

Maan: Geet aaj hum dono ka birthday hai

Geet: kya matlab?

Maan: Geet thik 1 saal pehle hum issi din pehli baar mile the aaj humari pehli mulakat ki first anniversary hai

Geet: Maan aapko ye sab yaad raha

Maan: Jis din meri kismatne meri zindagi mein pehla kadam rakha wo din main kaise bhool saktha hoon Geet

Geet: Maan'

Maan: Geet chalo milkar cake cut karte hai

He holds her hand and together they cut the cake

Geet feeds him a piece and Maan feeds the remaining part of the same piece to her

But she could not eat the entire piece as there was a ring in the cake

She held the ring in between her teeth

Maan slowly moved his lips and gently brushed it with hers and took the ring in his mouth

Geet: Maan ye ring

Maan: Geet ye ring main tumhare liye laaya hoon ye mere pyar ki nishani hai kya tum apne dhust danav k saath puri zindagi bitana pasand karogi

Geet had tears in her eyes

She nodded her head in approval

Maan placed the ring in her finger and kissed her hand

Maan: Thanks Mishty jabse tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho meri zindagi khoobsurat ban gayi hai magar aaj tumhari ek haan se mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai k mere aanewali saari zindagi bhi issi tarah khoobsurat hogi

Geet hugs Maan

Geet: Maan waise ye ring toh aapne mujhe propose karne k liye diya hai haina magar mujhe humari anniversary ka gift chahiye

Maan: Geet ab de toh diya gift aur waise bhi itni mehngi ring hai aaj issi se kaam chala lo waise bhi tumhare liye khrach karte karte mera toh diwala nikal jaayega

Geet: Achha aisi baat hai jaaiye main aaj k baad aapse koi bhi gift nahi lungi

She turns her face

Maan hugs her from behind

Maan: Meri Mishty ruth gayi

Geet: Haan aur waise bhi aapko kya farak padtha hai k main ruth jau ya nahi

Maan: Farak toh padtha hai waise Geet main tumhare liye kuch laaya hoon

Geet: Mujhe nahi dekhna

Maan : Geet tumhara Maan tumhare liye kuch lekar aaya hai aur agar tumhi usse nahi dekhogi toh uska dil tuth jaayegana

Geet: Achha dikhaiye kya laaye hai aap mere liye

Maan gives her a gift

Geet opens it

It was a beautiful saree

Maan: Achhi lagi

Geet: Ye toh bahut khoobsurat hai Maan

Maan: Nahi ye khoobsurat tab lagega jab tum isse pehnogi

Geet: Maan aap mere liye itna kuch karte ho aur main aapke liye kuch bhi nahi

Maan: Shh' Geet aisa nahi hai haan waise agar tum chaho toh meri ek khwaish puri kar sakthi ho

Geet: Boliye Maan main aapki baat zarur maanungi

Maan : Geet main aaj tumhe khud apne haatho se sajana chahtha hoon kya tum mujhe ye haqh dogi?

Geet was surprised by Maan's demand

Maan understood her dilemma

Maan: Are Geet main mazak kar raha tha

Geet(smiled) : Maan mazak mein hi sahi aaj pehli baar aapne mujhse kuch maanga hai aur sach kahu toh achha laga k aapne mujhpar apna haqh jataya main aapko wo haq dethi hoon Maan

Maan: Nahi Geet main waqai mein..

Geet: Maan aap khud kehthe haina k aapki Mishty k zuban se nikli hui har baat aapke liye iss duniya ki aakhiri baat ho jaathi hai toh aaj aapki Mishty apne Maan k haatho se sajna chahthi hai kya aap uski ye khwaish puri nahi karoge

Maan was amazed to see the faith and trust that his ladylove possessed for him

He lifted her face holding her chin

Maan: Geet are u sure?

Geet : Aapko haq hai Maan aaj apna haqh jatakar mujhe humesha k liye apna bana lijiye

Maan was still trying to register her words he was still confused did she really mean it

Geet understood his plight and then'

Pls listen to this song to get the proper feeling

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lbrxvC_g99M&feature=related

Music'

She went ahead and hugged Maan passionately and gently started rubbing her face on his ' Maan closed his eyes to feel her touch and to engrave this feeling permanently

Haa'Haaa'.aa'

She keenly moved her fingers on his M shaped lips and then placed one hand of hers under his shirt and started touching his body sensually

Music

She generously started rubbing her body with his. Maan was on fire as her bre**t rubbed against his chest

Ye eye hey hey'.

Without a moment of hesitation she started unbuttoning his shirt with her teeth in this process her soft lips came in contact with his hard chest

Aa'.Aa'Aa'

As and when she opened the buttons she went on placing a kiss on his exposed skin

Aa aa aa''aaa'..

He was losing his senses completely as he was getting aroused due to Geet's proximity

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

Finally he couldn't take it any longer he opened his eyes and realized that Geet had already closed her eyes and lifted her face inviting Maan for a kiss



Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

He started caressing her face lovingly but today Geet wanted something more from Maan she pulled him towards herself forcefully demanding a kiss


Labon ko Labon pe sajao

He finally paid heeds to her demands and took her lips into his' he started kissing her slowly as if promising her that he will never hurt her '

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

He then started increasing the pressure and with every passing second his passion increased which indicated his need for her ' the kiss became a demanding one

Tod do khud ko tum

Maan started nibbling her lower lip and gently bit her lip and sucked her lip with full authority as if telling the entire world that Geet belongs to him


Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein

Geet parted her lips allowing Maan to enter'he started probing every corner of her mouth ' with every passing moment the passion was going on increasing '

Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein meri Baanhon mein

Geet was busy playing with his hair and Maan was shamelessly moving his hands around her bare back

aa aa aa'

Finally they ended the kiss to get some air Geet opened her eyes and looks into his eyes to find a new desire a new need which wanted to claim her forever and ever

Music

Geet could not take his heated gaze any longer and tried to move away but Maan was too fast and he quickly got hold of her hand. He did not feel the need to control himself any longer

Oh oh oh '.

He twisted her around and looked intently in her eyes. Heat tracked her entire body as she was melting with every gaze of his

Music

He started kissing her fingers'then her hand' slowly moving upwards placing shower of kisses on her exposed skin finally reaching her shoulder'

Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein

He moved her hair onto one side and gave her a passionate love bite'Geet moaned his name in pleasure and pain

Mujhko doobati tishnagi si hain

But Maan was not going to stop he squeezed her hand and proceeded to bite the same area she once again moaned his name which further highlighted his desires

Teri adao se dilkash khatao se

He sucked the area passionately and started giving her wet kisses throughout loving every part of her exposed skin

In lamho mein zindagi si hai

He nuzzled in her neck and started making different patterns on her back.



Hayaa ko zara bhool jao

Slowly his hands made way to the strap of her one shoulder dress he started to slide her strap when Geet became conscious and she turned around and hugged him.

Mere hi tarah pesh aao

But this act of Geet only added fuel to the fire. Her neck was just an inch away from his lips.

Khobhi do khud ko tum

Maan could no longer resist his temptation and he started licking her exposed neck with his tongue and at the same time his fingers started unzipping her dress.



Raaton mein meri raaton mein meri raaton mein meri raaton mein

Geet clutched his shoulder tightly as she realized what Maan was doing.

Aa aaa aaa'.aa '.

Maan slowly sided her strap with his teeth.

Labon ko Labon pe sajao

In a matter of seconds her dress was resting on the floor.

Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Maan carefully took Geet out of his embrace and started admiring her beautiful form' her almost naked form. Geet could not take his intense stare any longer and tried to cover herself with her arms

Music

Maan looked into her eyes as if questioning her'"Don't I have this right?" Geet understood his question and immediately removed her hands. Her breathtaking form was sending shivers throughout Maan. Geet was too shy she closed her eyes. Maan understood her state and took a cloth and blindfolded her. He picked up the blouse of the saree and then placed one hand of hers in the arm of the sleeveless blouse while doing so he kept on showering her with kisses he did the same thing with her other hand as well.

Tere zajbaaton mein mehki si saason mein

Geet was breathing heavily due to which her bre**t was moving in a rhythmic pattern pacing up and down constantly. Maan sensually moved his fingers onto her bre**t'his touch felt like an electric current to her she was drowning in her new found desires. Her nip***s hardened as Maan started teasing it with his fingers. She was melting more and more in his desires and she wanted him to give her more pleasure.

Yeh jo mehek Sangali si hai

Maan then moved on to the hook of her blouse. He placed his hand on her bare waist giving her enough support and then he started to adjust her hook with his mouth. He started kissing and nibbling her valley. With every hook of the blouse that Maan was adjusting Geet was getting immense pleasure and since she was blindfolded she was experiencing an additional intensity and passion as well. Finally Geet's blouse was done.

Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein

Maan took the saree and started wrapping it around Geet' Geet was trembling with every touch of Maan' He started caressing her waist and started teasing her navel' Goosebumps ran through her body as she felt a tingling sensation.

Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai

Maan started licking her navel'Geet was going weak in her knees she was about to fall but Maan held her strongly with his other hand and continued his sweet torture. He kissed her navel and started biting the skin adjacent to it'

Chehre se chehra chupao

She screamed his name in pleasure' he continued his assault for sometime after which he once again took the upper route he cupped her bre**t with his hands over the blouse and started kissing biting and sucking it.

Sene ki dhadkan sunaao

Maan was making every second a pleasurable journey for Geet. Finally he placed the pallu on her shoulders He Lifted Geet in his arms and placed her in front of the mirror. He removed the blindfold.

Dekh lo khud ko tum

Geet's face was completely flushed she was still living those blissful moments. Maan kissed her eyes and gave her a signal to open them.

Aankhon mein meri aakhon mein meri aakhon mein meri aakhon mein

Geet opened her eyes and she could not stop admiring herself' she was looking like a princess in the saree there was an angelic glow on her face that was making her more gorgeous.

Aa aaa..aaa..aaa..aa'

She turned around and hugged Maan

Maan: Geet kahi tumhe afsoos toh nahi ho raha?

Labon ko Labon pe sajao Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Geet did not feel the need to answer him she simply sealed his lips with hers telling him the story of their blissful journey

So how was it Guys this was the first time that I attempted to write some intimate scenes so I m really sorry for my mistakes.😭😭😭

Pls press d like button n do comment

Love-Piya

@ Pooja (mandymore) Congrats dear u r a dazzler now😊

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG piya it was awesome
i was breathing heavily while reading it it was full of passion 😳☺️
loved it i dont have wrds to describe it
hayeee mein mar jawan

and by the way i m first to comment😉
Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well that was an actual romantic part yar
dont know what to say
great update
m sure u dint disappoint anyone yar

continue soon
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Resss
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no words to describe this part bt thats for u di
Edited by gurtilover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome hot. loved it...☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Piya, awesome 😊
lovely description 😳😉
song selection was awesome 😳😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx 4 pm

Such a dreamy 😍 scene ...it didn't look like u wrote for the first time ...Maan is naughty ...


Update soon


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