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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Loved the update Nadia!!

Once again, you've built up the scene and mood perfectly.

The passion felt by both Arnav and Khushi is evident.

I loved the way he gradually made his way to her. It seems like he's savouring every sentiment whilst testing his self control to the absolute maximum!!

Looking forward to the next installment, as always!!

😊

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#182

omg :O

i enjoyed every bit of this update :d

loved it and wooo again a ahem ahem cliff hanegr

cant wit now :P

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#183

I enjoyed this part

but why did you end on such a good part

you need to update like today or tomorrow

you have no choice

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#184

wow! dat was too Hawttt!!

awsum update!

ArHi romance rockd!!!

do update soon! :-)

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Kinarandomness

@Kinarandomness

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#185

lovely update

but again you ended on such bad point

please continue it today

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salekh1

@salekh1

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#186

AMMAZINGGG

BREATH TAKING

AWESOMELY WRITTEN

PLEASE PLAEASE CONTINUE

IF POSSIBLE PLEASE PM ME

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#187

wooo hooo that simply superb...hey can you make a one shot both dancing together and then,...hmmm you know what and then i would love one more in which our Khusi is ia beautifu saree adorned in jweles ...ot in a gown or chudidhar and everything come out one by one ...ha ha look at me shameless i am making demands...any it great tna d i love it thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!1

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neahakhan

@neahakhan

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Hey amazing ff Nadia.
Please add me to ur pm list and do keep with this unique piece of work :)

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#189

hi im new here!
just started reading ur SS n its beautiful. please continue.. waiting 4 nxt update.

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Anju Sharma

@amitasaily

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#190

I wish Arnav would stop after a couple of minutes and tell Khushi with a straight face that he has decideed to go slow and give her all the time she needs. Lets see how Khushi will conveythat she does not need any time. She wants it as much as he does

BTW you are a terriffic writer with good imagination. Please add me to the PM list, atleast for this SS

Anju