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MysticalRealm

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sacred shrine
Happy???umm...errr...well...i am still in the magnificent dream land that u have pushed me into thru this incredible piece...i dnt thnk i am coming out of it anytime soon...has ne1 ever told u how gud u write???u have been blessed wth an amazing mind and creativity that thnks so beautifully..

So with this I suppose you are happy??

I am so sorry yaar, I can't do FF's... I tried.. but I couldn't complete it because I get bored easily... I like writing with fresh Ideas!

But thank you so very much!

it means a lot coming from a wonderful writier like you!

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

resss

Read whole. ll comment later. Bear with me, Jinszy *sigh* (i knw u r habitual 😆)

Awww... u dedicated to me? That sooo sweet.. ILY bbz. <3

*EDITED*
Jinszyyy 🤗

Firstly, thank you for the dedication.. i feel loved <33 ..its soo damn sweet of you! 🤗

About the update:
Okay so when I read the title, I was intrigued. I was thinking what it could be all about... new crushes, teenage woes or love or what? It was only until I read this whole OS i realized how apt the title suited the storyline.. two childhood frnds , best friends to be precise, who were always there for each other ,cared, understood and loved each other ..cudnt live without each other .. finally realized that they had fallen for each other not only since then but it was always there..

The Karan's separation and staying aloof from Shilpa was really hurting.. .it sure;y feels awful when your loved one does that to you.. no wonder the girl cudn't bear it and left for other city.. Sometimes distance is necessary to make others realize ur importance! and thats wht happened here.. m glad Karan realized it soon else ppl take ages too .. 😆
It was really sweet ..they way you started, moved on and finally concluded ! It was just like reading some teenage story .. loved it <3

Do write more..on AR ...pleashhh =D

love
Vini

Edited by coolvini4u - 14 years ago

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Neha

@neha-rockss

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

heyy great OS 🤗 loved it <3 <3
loved ARSH bond dat yu displayed :DD

plzz write more nd do pm me wenevr yu do so:)

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

awesome OS!!!

beautiful ending!!!

finally Karan realized his love for shona.

please do write more.

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: coolvini4u
resss

Read whole. ll comment later. Bear with me, Jinszy *sigh* (i knw u r habitual 😆)

and yeah, just found one typo .. '' As she looked at Armaan she realized how godly he looked.'' U wrote armaan instead of karan.. correct it.. =D

Awww... u dedicated to me? That sooo sweet.. ILY bbz. <3

Habitual is an understatment 😆

I fixed it... Thank you very much my typo finding machine! 😆

Yes I did 😳 and I love you too..

Wating for you to Unres

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neha-rockss
heyy great OS 🤗 loved it <3 <3
loved ARSH bond dat yu displayed :DD

plzz write more nd do pm me wenevr yu do so:)

Thank you!!

Lol, I displayed a KaSh bond, but if you like ArSh then its fine!

I promise I will!

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: fri42911
awesome OS!!!
beautiful ending!!!

finally Karan realized his love for shona.

please do write more.

Thank you!!

😆 Karan is a bit slow

I will 😃

Thanxx again!!

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Neha

@neha-rockss

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian

Thank you!!

Lol, I displayed a KaSh bond, but if you like ArSh then its fine!

I promise I will!

haha i luv ArSh a lot dear ...

sure wll wait for yur writings 😳

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian

Habitual is an understatment 😆

I fixed it... Thank you very much my typo finding machine! 😆
Yes I did 😳 and I love you too..
Wating for you to Unres

Did i torture u so much? 😲😆

Hahahha.. mention not.. at ur service mam 🤣
I edited my comment too =D (dnt be shocked😆