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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.
superb.
fab...
wonderful..
loved the updates...
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Both the parts were beautiful.
Maaneet are not able to stay away from each other.
Thank God Daadi didnt catch them again and the whole family was out.
Loved Romeo and Sam making up.
Annie is so silly wonder why she keeps going behind Romeo.
Geet is the sweetest daughter.
She wanted her mom also to have her share of happiness.
Though Rano didnot agree she wanted to convince her.
The engagement and teasing by all the cousins was so sweet.
Maaneet finally found a way and place to meet.
They cant keep their hands off each other.
Geet's confession of her feelings was the bestest.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo sweet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
lovely
aww the cozins of maan teasrd geet
they made luv b4 engagement!
poor rano how embarassed she myt hv felt on hearing to remarry 4m her own daughter
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will update any minute :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Keyama..thanks 4 da pm n wonderful double updates. Apprecaite u updating from ur fone! Love the updates. Sam wants to find a bride for Romeo. Awseum Maaneet moments. Sam planning the wedding. Maaneet cannot stay away from each other. Update soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haye maan and geet can't get enough of each other and haha rano not liking geets over enthusiastic suggestion of remarrying lol and awe poor annie who's smitten over Romeo trying to impress him but Romeo and Sam not impressed and haha they haven't even started the engagement ceremony that the passion took over and they made love instead anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago



ENIGMA
Part 92

Hope I will get my Internet back today.. So so sorry for mistakes...
Thanks for all the love and support... It motivates me allot...

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"I love you 2..."

Everyone was present along with media, waiting for the future Mrs maan sing khurana."
Dadi "where is maan? Where is geet?" a panic came by... The surrounding was only waiting for there mr and mrs. The evening cool breeze was unfulfilled without this couple. The atmosphere looked dull along with the unknown sensation.

Geets heart skipped beats by seeing the illuminate light. Her face sparkled with tense, shown by the reaction of the sudden gasp of her hand. It became solid with each step. Crashing maans hand. The thud noise and the hassle of the crowded have left her speechless along with the beauty. Everything was up to it's perfection with the detailed design. Her heart cried, it almost felt like too much...

Maan softly held her hand in his, showing her the beuty of the world. Mesmerising. She slowly held her long skirt, pulling up to see her chinderala shoe and then carefully she took each step down the stair. Maans hand firmly supported along the way while everyone envying the perfection they have shown. Geets eyes looked at him with each step, mesmerising her future hubby, she wasn't sure how strong this feeling maybe but it was certain it's beyond anyone's imagination. Loving is one of the most beautiful feeling she have ever experienced or ever will...

The crowed Gathered around as they stood in the middle for the ring exchange. It's truly a breathtaking view, picture camera, reporters, there was non stop noise. Geet could barely here her self thinking she came close supressing her self more towards maan. Anni on the other side stood by the side with a ring, she was the stand. Her eyes wouldn't stop gazing at Romeo. He felt frustrated, she was like his personal stalker, now he understand, no girl have self respect.

Maan took the ring from the big red thali where the emoral with diamond ring laid, a unique design of gold and very rare. She didn't hesitate to put her hand up, hold by rano, then lovingly he slides the ring. It glittered on her hand. Made for one another. She loved the symbol, maan gently picked her hand up and kissed the ring. His eyes miscibiously looked at geet, a goose bump went through her body, her heart nearly stopped beating with the clapping and owwweing. She blushed, with pink cheek the Camera required no blush.
Rano, who held the other plate, she offered the other ring... Her hand shivered, shaking, the effect of his kiss was still present, her heartbeat raised, thinking he will be her forever.. And ever and ever...
She took the ring, a G craved on the silver, it's plain, nothing fancy, but the G stood out very well. Her eyes looked at him questioningly, then sliding it to his finger, he smiled, then slowly his foot took two step, bringing her close and then eventually "you are my..." everyone clapped again, screaming. She never in her life feel this happy like today. Every aspect was out of ordinary, everything is so beautiful... She have lost count of the people's around the hall, one end to another, faces after face, some she knew some are new, she was amazed by the overwhelming love each member have shown...

Romeo was munching a snack when anni walked in,
Anni "what are you doing?" she stood right behind him, her chest touched his back...
Romeo jumped, as her warm annoying voice Brush against his ear!
Romeo "excuseme!"
Anni "how you enjoying the party?"
Romeo "nun of your business!" he walked off but anni flowed.

Geet stood there with maan, saying good by to one after another gust, impressed and happy for them.
Maan "aj rath kha jana hi?" he smirked. She looked at him confusingly, not sure what exactly was he talking about. Geet smiled at few guest and then back at him...
Geet "mathlab?"
Maan "kha jana?"
Geet "home I guess!" she still wasn't sure what he was talking about. Maan with a frustration tone "chalo!" and held her hand walked to the parking lot.
Geet "what about the guest, it looks rude if we are not there!"

Rano and dadi observed from far, they looked way nodding there head negatively, what will they do with this two. Dadima was happy at least they are getting married soon...

Geet "where are we going?"
Maan "chalo to sahi..."
Geet "per kha?"

Maan came somewhere very dark, but red light everywhere... There was certain glow, certain type of love that geet could feel... As she stepped out, firework starts to hover up above, her heart skipped beat as each firework brought out what was hidden on the ground, a romantic candle light With dinner, the floor filled with Rose pattle, the sweet aroma was so strong, she nearly forgot to breath...
Geets eye looks back at him... Surprised and with love... He came close, sliding his hand around his waist... "I know you haven't eaten anything, actually so haven't I... Now I am hungry , shall we..."
Geets eye teared up again... It was so busy but still he kept and looked after her every need...she came forward and pecked his lips softly, but maan didn't want to let go, atlas in whole evening he have the chance to taste her lips, he will not give this up...


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Next- romantic dinner & haldi... :D
Please do press the like and comment to motivate me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing lovely perfect
I ant wait for next part
Make it hot super hot
Heheh
Please do update one more :)
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