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Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

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hey bidzy!🤗
awesome part. 👏
like it very much. 😛
haha opening scene was really funny. 😆
mayu n amy scene was nyc as well. 😉
loved the convo of mayur. 😳
honest to each other. 😃
that's a great beginning to their love story.😍
as it is said, the most imp thing in relationship is trust and truth. (according to me atleast 😆)
AR scene was cute😍
like how ridz forgived him.
amy over excited? 😳

wow! me dancing!
once week
aab ye one week jaldi se la meri pyari dost.
can't wait.
n dare you call me despo again!

promo is amazing yaar.
like it very very much.
Muah!
obv. answer is yes.

well, AR promo is sad and heart touching at same time.
really glad amy will be der for her.

hoping to see more of their scenes as well.

BTW, i like your idea of ud'ing every saturday.
one q. u'll be uding every saturday, all ur ff's or one by one?

Thank you for unresing! PHEW! 😆
Well, nope! I'll be updating this FF on Saturday! Iss FF mein characters jyada hai iss liye dimaag ka use kuch jyada karna padhta hai! 🤣
Rest 4 FFs will be updated in the other days of the week...waha pe jyada mehenat nahi karni padhti cuz those r around the central characterz only! 😳
Samjhi?? 😊


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Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Thank you for unresing! PHEW! 😆
Well, nope! I'll be updating this FF on Saturday! Iss FF mein characters jyada hai iss liye dimaag ka use kuch jyada karna padhta hai! 🤣
Rest 4 FFs will be updated in the other days of the week...waha pe jyada mehenat nahi karni padhti cuz those r around the central characterz only! 😳
Samjhi?? 😊



Hey, phew karne ki zarurat nai hai.
i already explained! 😆

Oh alright. got it.
thank you then.
every day i'll wait for this ud then.
promise to catch up in ibadaat soon.
😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hy ..
yaar... please pm me... about your updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part. Thanks for the pm
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Chapter 4 - - Fantastic!
Nervousness and Friendliness is all around :)
Love the part very much...Getting bit more closer to eachother..
Armaan is really caring and Mayank Nupur as always will always stay my fav ;)
Waiting for next ud...
ud soon :)
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hey bidz
amazing update loved it
mayur convo was very nice
whole update loved it very well written
do cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u so much for the love and lots of appreciations...truly overwhelmed! A tiiight hug to all of u! 🤗 Really sorry guys for the late update but as u all know, my school is going on and i can't update in the week days, as different ideas ka rastaa in my brain is blocked by the assignments stress and tiredness! 😳

I know...u ppl are too sweet tht u'll understand my problem😉.. So from now on until I get any long break, I'll update all my FFs just in the weekends😃..

Not making u ppl bored anymore..enjoy the next update😉..
Mayur fans, Ibaadat will be updated tomorrow.. Pakka! 😳
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Chapter Five


Mayank, Nupur, their mothers and a priest were sitting on the sofa in a round way. Armaan and Riddhima were standing at a corner, while Armaan constantly gazing Riddhima and admiring her innocence-filled beauty. Mayank and Nupur were stealing nervous glances at each other. The priest was engrossed in reading something, while the mothers were looking at his face and waiting for an answer.

"Dekhiye, kundali ke hisaab se shaadi ki mahurat ek hafte baad 17 taarikh ko theek shaam ke 8 baje se shuru hogi.", The priest informed everyone. Everyone was astonished.

"Par pandit ji, itni jaldi? Iss ke baad ka koi mahurat nahi hai?", Radhika Bhushan concernedly asked.

"Maaf kijiye par iske baad 5 saal tak koi mahurat nahi hai.", The priest told them with a sorry look and this just added some more worry lines on Radhika's forehead.

"Par itni jaldi.. kaise sab..", she stammered and Shilpa, placing her palm on her shoulder, said in a supportive way, "Don't worry Radhika, sab ho jayega. Tumhe chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai."

"Par..", Radhika muttered in disbelief by cutting off in her statement, Shilpa sternly said, "Par var kuch nahi, jitna manage tum kar payogi, karna, aur phir main help karne ke liye hu naa. So relax."

Radhika finally smiled a little bit, and seeing that peaceful smile, Shilpa smiled too. They stood up and hugging, they congratulated each other.

"Congratulat-", Armaan stopped as he saw something unusual on Riddhima's face. She was smiling contently but her eyes were teary as well.

"Tum theek ho naa?", Armaan asked her concernedly. Riddhima nodded and wiped off a tear from the corner of her eyes.

"Pata nahi aage kya hoga. Feeling so restless!", Mayank thought and heaved a long sigh.

"Bohot darr lag raha hai. I hope ki sab theek ho.", Nupur closed her eyes and prayed in her heart.

**

"So kaisa laga Mayank?", Riddhima, sitting on the bed, curiously asked.

"Accha hai, just like umm I don't know but accha hai.", Nupur tried to reply in her as-usual rude tone but she couldn't hide the blush on her cheeks.

After few seconds of silence, Riddhima spoke up teasingly, "I can get the fragrance of your blushing cheeks."

"Riddhi, tu bhi naa!", said Nupur and shyly smiled.

"Accha theek hai. I wont tease you.", Riddhima said with honesty and continued with a sleepy expression, "Mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai. Thodi der so jaati hoon."

"Theek hai.", Nupur said while removing her jewelries. Riddhima laid on the bed and closed her eyes.

ARMAAN MALIK!.. and she opened her eyes in a jerk. Why did this name echo in her mind so suddenly? She wondered.

**

Mayank was signing some important documents, just then; Armaan arrived there. "Tu phir se office ka kaam yaha lekar aaya? Uff! Nupur tujhe kaise tolerate karegi, only god knows.", Armaan said in irritation but instantly smiled when he saw the unconscious smile on Mayank's face hearing the name NUPUR!

"Mayank Sharma is smiling and that too for a girl. Ahem ahem! Pehele mulaakat mein hi yeh kya ho gaya. Haaye!", Armaan said dramatically and knowing what was going to happen next after seeing Mayank's tu-pitega-mujhse expression, he ran away laughing.

**

"Peheli bar iss dunia mein koi meri jaisi mili.", Mayank thought deeply.

"Accha toh hai par shaadi ke baad agar papa ki tarah.. No! I won't let that happen at any cost." Nupur said with a determined look.

**

"Chalo, Armaan beta, dosti ka farz adaa karo. Itna toh karna padhega tumhe, after all, its all for your best friend.", Armaan said to himself to gain some confidence and taking a deep breath, he dialed a number.

"Hello."

Armaan froze hearing the voice which was so soft and delicate and he was feeling if he could listen her forever.

"Hello! Kaun bol raha hai?"

"Riddhima, its me, Armaan."

"Armaan, aap?", Riddhima was surprised.

"Woh ek zarurat baat hai. Actually I was thinking ke if Mayank aur Nupur dubara se mille toh.. I hope u don't mind hun.", Armaan was hesitant.

"No no..not at all. Yeh toh acchi baat hai. Par did u ask Mayank?"

"I'm scared!", Armaan pouted sadly.

Riddhima started laughing and Armaan felt as if he was listening music.

"Aap unse darrte kyun hai?", Riddhima asked after a while.

"Pata nahi..bas aise hi. Waise, u can talk with Nupur. Main Mayank ko manaa lunga."

"Pata nahi Nupur maanegi bhi ya nahi." Riddhima was worried.

"I'm sure she'll agree."

"I hope so too."

"Anyways, see ya. Gotta go. Mayank is coming I guess."

"Okay bye and.."

"And..?", Armaan was keen to hear something amazing.

"Take care."

Riddhima's words brought a strange satisfaction in Armaan's heart.

"You too.", Armaan lovingly wished and hung up the phone. They both held the receiver for a moment and smiled dreamily.

**

"Armaan, ek bar usse milna chahta hu yaar.", Mayank impatiently said while enjoying the fresh air of the night, standing beside the window.

"Arey waah! Mayank toh khud hi Nupur se milna chahta hai. Thank god mujhe hard work nahi karna padha." Armaan thought and grinned.

"Kya soch raha hai?", Mayank asked confusedly.

"Well, I can make u both meet tomorrow at any park or restaurant in the evening.", Armaan said confidently smiling.

"Really?", Mayank's face glowed up.

Armaan nodded smilingly but suddenly something struck his mind, "Waise, someone wasn't interested in this marriage.", he said in a way of pulling leg looking here and there.

Mayank, glaring him, said, "Mujhe kaam hai." and left. Armaan giggled.

**

Preview of Chapter 6: Mayur meeting and some more cute interaction, AR's sudden encounter.😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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hy dear i really love your this ff.. please do pm whenever you do next update

well it was very very nice

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