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chapter 10 was great...loved how maan and geet were together...and i loved maan's inner thoughts...i was wondering why he kept looking at the scars on his hands to remind him to stay away from geet...can't wait for the next update👏

Originally posted by: sweet coco

ARZOO!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: ninand

my god Liz, I cant describe exactly how well you have written the scene between Maan and Geet in that small dirty dingy room.. and how charged the atmosphere feels, .. Maans varied feelings- their strength and intensity , the way her presence and thoughts completely overcome his will, make him helpless and prone to abject surrender to his senses that only clamor for her... send me reeling with their force ..

Awww yay! I wanted this to be a deeper story . . . Hence it took me so long to write it LOL

oH my god it was absolutely adorable , (the kind that leaves you feeling bad, teary yet enamored) , the way he placed his hands under her feet. how apologetic he was for the dirty room, and the joy that lit up his face when she took the soup... god! I have fallen in love with this helpless, innocent man.. completely..

Yes I love writing about him . . . He's so dreamy 😍

so also with this Geet.. No words for just how inexplicably strong their bond is.. I loved how at peace he feels with her.. and how she chatters away to glory.. their attachment feels so tender, the attraction just too strong , leaves one feeling wistful and in awe.

Yes . . . They are my angelic couple 😆

I am in love with this ff, if you have not already made that out😆 Awww 😆

and I am dying to see Maan in Rathod household.. Soon muhahahaha LOL 😳

forgot to mention in all this.. how heart rending Annie and her mothers scene was.. This ff is a lot different from what you have written so far and I am loving the difference... maybe its got to do wit the story , dunno, .. but it delves a bit more into the psyche of the characters and explains more about their emotions..

Yes I wanted this to be a tragedy with a happy ending of course . . . Let's see how that plays out!

And really after this Maan.. I know its going to wrench our hearts out when his memory returns and he goes back to being his cold manipulative self, who most definitely would use Geet to avenge his family(?).. whatever be the case, I m hooked, and cannot wait for more!

. . .I to love this Maan what is to come won't be pretty (BEWARE ALL) 😲

thanks for the super long Maan-Geet filled update.. and please do update soon.😳

Awww your welcome and for sure . . . I am in the mode 😆

Love

Liz