Tumse Acha Kon Hai... (sajan ss) completed - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update tia...!
Where were you dear?? Gayab ho gayi tu!? missed ur ff...!! especially d songs...
Very cute update this tym...!! D breakfast part was superbbb!!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update good sis 😊 😳 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7

Awesome update dear!! Eagerly waiting 4 sajans confession. Thanks alot 4 d pm


hmm bht jald karne wali hun thnx

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow i really love updates 9 and 10 plzz continued soon tiaaa really love it


thank u dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ss
plz ad me to pm list

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Posted: 13 years ago

thnx...kabi long comment bhi kar dia karo yar...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi guyzz...here is the 2nd last part so sory ke me ye ss khtm kari hun cuz muje time nai milta bana ne ko ..so do long longgg comments guyzz or mera dil khush karo plzzz...warna me naraz ho jaun gi sab se...here is part ...

part 11

gunjan:ab..wo mera matlb hai ke tum mere frend ho to bas isi liye

samrat:hmm ok phi raat ko 8 baje milte hn abhi muje kam se jana hai bht zarori kam hai

gunjan:esa kya kam hai jo muje akela chor ke jare ho!

samrat:gunjan bhabi hen na tumare sath are 8 to yun baj jaen ge

gunjan:ok

samrat:bye

gunjan:bye


samrat chala jata hai


samrat:bas gunjan 8 baje ka intizar karlo phir tume me apne se kabi dor nai karun ga i promis u


achanak se darwaza baj ta hai...gunjan darwaza kholne jati hia...


gunjan:jii

man:jii kya miss gunjan ghra pe hn..

gunjan:jii kahiye me hi hun gunjan

man:oh1 mam ye ap ke liye diya gaya hai..

gunjan:per kisne bheja hai

man:mam ye to me ap ko nai bata skta bas un ho ne muje ye deno ko kaha ab mera kam ho gaya hai me chalta hun..

gunjan:thek hai..


gunjan ander jati hai..


gunjan:kisne bheja hoga dekhti hun...


gunjan wo gift kholti hai or us me box hota hai or wo box kholti hai jis me ek khubsurat sa saree hota hai...


gunjan:waooo kitni pyari saree hai...per ye kya hai...


us box me ek letter bhi hota hai..gunjan wo letter uthati hai or parti hai..


gunjan:is khubsurat si saree ko koi khusurat si girl phne gi to muje acha lage ga plzz ye saree phn ke peache wale kamre me ajana ...ye kon ho skta hai kahin samrat to nai..


achanak se samrat kamre me entry marta hai..


samrat:kya hua gunjan tum itni pareshan q lag ri ho or ye ye tumare hath me kya hia ...

gunjan:ab wo kuch nai choro chalo bhar chalte hn.

samrat:ok.(smile)


now this time to surpirise...


gunjan is ready...gunjan ne wahi saree phna hoa hota hai..

gunjan dar dar ke peache wale kamre me jati hai...


gunjan:kon ho skta hai or yhn kitna andhera hai muje andhere se bht dar lagta hai..


achanak se ek awaz ati hai...


boy:tum aj bht khubsurat lag ri ho jese koi angel mere pas ari ho ..

gunjan:tum ho kon samne q nai ate..

boy:itni bhi kya jaldi hai meri princess

gunjan:plzz samne ao muje andhere me dar lagta hai...

boy:is chand ko kareeb dekhne ke liye tarap to me bhi raha hun per kya karun is chand ki roshni bhi barne me der laga ti hai..

gunjan(smile)lagta hai barso se jante ho muje..

boy:barso se to nai bas kuch hi dino se..

gunjan:per tum muj se kya chate ho..

boy:tumara hasii tumara pyar tumara apna pan..

gunjan:per me tume wo sab nai de skti..

boy:q??

gunjan:wo me kisi ko de chuki hun!

boy:kon hai wo hame nai batao gii...

gunjan:hai koi jis se me bht pyar karti hun ..

boy:acha muj se ziyada to nai karti hogi..

gunjan:tume kya us se..or tum us ke bare me kuch nai jante..

boy:acha!


achanak se lite on hoti hai..oe samrat ka muh peache hota hai...


boy;us ka naam jan skta hun me...kye me hi hun wo


wo gunjan ki taraf trun karta hai...


gunjan:samrattt!!!!!tum

samrat:han q tum to kisi or se pyar karti ho na phir ye sari mehnat meri bekar gayi..

gunjan:nai me tum se pyar karti hun ..wo pyar wo apna pan wo ehsas wo khulus wo didar wo itizar or sab se bari bat ke me tume apna dil de bethi hun..

samrat:acha1 me bhi apni princess ko apna dil jaan de chuka hun or me us ke leye apna sab kuch karbaan karta hun me aj tumse apne dil ki bat kehna chata hun ke me tum se bht bht pyaar karta hun apni jaan se bhi ziyada agr tum kaho ke jaan de do wo bhi tumare age de dun ga...gunjan I LOVE U...

gunjan:I LOVE U TOO samrat...


samrat:can i dance with u princess..

gunjan way not!


danceing timeee...


song..

Jab jab tere paas main aaya
Ik sukoon mila..
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya
Woh wajood mila..
Jab aaye mausam gham ke
Tujhe yaad kiya

Ho'.
Jab sehme tanhapan se
Tujhe yaad kiya

Hmm.. dil..
Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu
Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua
Janu naa
Main janu naa
O..o..

Dil.. sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu
Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu

Jis raah pe
Hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se
Haan main hoon guzra
shayad yahi
Dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye
Kya pata'

Kya hai yeh silsala
Janu naa
Main janu naa
O..o..

Dil.. sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu
Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu

Kuch bhi nahi
Jab darmiyan
Phir kyun hai dil
Tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaha ki de
Tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin
Ho na sakaa.. a'a'aaa'.

Kya hai yeh maamla
Janu naa
Main janu naa..

Dil.. sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu
Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu

Dil.. sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat
Karne chala hai tu


here is part end...

love tia...



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hiii

awsome update

cont soon


thnks but u were not big comment...thnx😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good
so sam sends a saree to gunjan
gunjan wears it and goes to meet the person
it was samrat
they both confessed their love
plz cont soon asnd pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was biliyant yar ...loved it ..
cnt soon

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