sry, i knw i m very late this time, which i shouldn't av been specially when i was hell beind ur life to update this part! *holding my ears*
ok nw cmng back to comments!!
honestly telling u, i enjoyed reading it a lot nt coz abhay n aryan both were there(although u showed so much kanjoosi in showing them), bt coz of a fresh start of pia's life, it was so cool n different!!
i loved d way u av kept abhay alive in her memories!!!
u av placed amby-misha's character well, it was so smooth n natural!! loving this gal trio, it would b interesting to knw how story progressess b/w these three!!
so finally jeh, has turned negative, so negative dt he didn't think once dt y abhay killed her mother??, to save her pia, whom she claimed to love at some point of time😕😕😕😕, has he forget abt it?? n i m totally surperised dt somehwere he is playing so good wid her, just coz she is d key to abhay!!!🤢🤢
misha-pia-amby convo was super cool!!
ok nw coming to abhay-aryan😉. although it was painfull reading abt them😭😭😭😭
how aryan must b felt abt pia's question regarding his idientity
d way u wrote abt abhay's pain through aryan's pov, i loved it!!!
abhay compelling scene brought tear into my eyes 😭😭 n u knw it very well ,y it so happened!!😉
abhay-pia scene back at hospital was fab, it was so touchy n appearing so real to me!!! pia's behavior didn't surprise me n it was something natural!!
bt this time i want her to make an xception, no more running away frm d person in her sketches!!
n where r they shifting?? dheradoon???
would love to read nxt part asap, bt nt bf4 😉😉😉😉
luv u loadsss😳😳
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