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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie awesome update.Maine socha tha ki now Pia will accept Abhay & all.Le Abhay nalayak nai phir Pia ki memory erase kardi.Kabhi nhi sudhrega.And now Pia dont wnt 2 marry jeh not bad.Parneeb bhi sudhar gya.Deepu is dead.Hope soon Abhiya meets😳.Plzz continue

Luv u🤗


I will write next update how Abhay erased her memories. and Prabeen accha ho gaya 😳 Abhiya will meet soon...

Luv u too 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Fab Update!👏


Pia doesn't remember anything about Abhay. Thank god Deepu is dead. I hate her.🤢 So Prabeen is treating her (Pia) well. Hope Abhay and Aryan are safe & Abhiya meet soon. Liked this Update. Both the parts are equally good. Even after knowing the fact that Abhay is a vampire , she was concerned about him, so sweet.😊 What happened in Abhay's past?😕 Loved Abhay's dialogue-"Abhay, Look only the missing sound of her heartbeat is making you crazy and what will you do when she will be far from you forever?"❤️Looking forward to the next Update!😊 Continue soon.😃


Thanks dear... yes. She was scared and worried for him at the same time. mixed feeling. Abhay's past will be reveled soon 😳 glad u liked it and will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priya.1

Tanzie superb update yaar!!!! thanks dear 😳

So finally Pia knows the truth abt abhay & still she loves him... That's great...

But y did abhay do this to pia??? Y did he erase her memory????

Wt happnd to aryan??? Is he ok???

so many questions...they both are ok. i will write the rest of the flashback in next update 😊

Plz continue soon... will do

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

that was an unbelievably awesome update 👏although painful but gr8 Thanks Shivani
u have really moved the story quite fast
u have really given us shocks and surprises in loads I wand to move the story to the main plot
pia knowing abhay's truth and accepting him like this was unexpectable she didnt really accepted him..it was a mix feeling
mohini part was interesting want to read more
what abhay did with prabeen was awesome he deserved it
whatever happened due to dippanita i m somehow happy becoz at least abhay didn't hurt Pia and get to know that she will accept him no mattter who he is she will later
honestly speaking i was expecting a more painful update than this one
what is the story of jai? why did he give up on pia and forgive her so easily? i guess he knows everything about abhay and pia
i hope dippanita is dead and won't be returning
i guess alina was the one who helped abhay with the help of aryan
but now pia has forgotten everything did abhay erased her memory or something else has happened
now u r leaping story by six months won't u show pia's interaction with kabir misha and others
waiting to know what has happened to abhay
and how will they meet again
thanks for the pm and do update soon will introduce new characters next update and will show how they are with flashbacks...
love u
shivani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

How could you sperate Abhiya. And what was Pia thinking of going intot he jungle alone. Wasn't one experienc eenough for her.

And Jai is he a villan in the story.
Pia baby is in state of shock only this whole chapter first Abhays truth then the fight then loosing her memory and having her uncles changed behaviour. Even if you do not end with amnesia she is sure to get a heart attack. And Jai being sooo supportive something sure is fishy here. And where is Alina now and Aryan.
The story has taken a big u turn I would say.


Its just for a while and Piya will fall in love with Abhay all over again 😳 She got a news of Aryan injured so she ran outside...
Jai is till now grey...
I wanted to move the story to had to do it... will write flashback scenes in next update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

👏no words tanzie just awsum but abhiya are seperated 😭and jeh with pia 😡thanks for pm u write so nice yaar mere paas kuch kehne ke liye nahi hota 😭


Thanks Rash...dont get mad at me...they will meet soon 😳
Aww.thanku soo much... jo bhi kehne ko plzzz say...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

I am vry...sad...Hasti khelti vidu ko sab rula rahe hai...sooo bad...😭...Abhay again did his old tactic...memory loss...on request ...dnt end this ff soon...V wnt romance...thrill...n ahem ahem...😆...Le aa gayi apni aukaad par...😆...Hope Piya meets her life soon...


sorry Vidu... they will meet soon...no worries 😉 and ahem ahem scenes will come when its required.. zaroor ayenge 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry my dearies, I won't be able to reply everyone this time... but will update soon and reply next time everyone individually 🤗
will write the flashback scenes about the rest of the fight and how Abhay erased her memories and no worries...Abhay and Aryan are fine 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago

sry, i knw i m very late this time, which i shouldn't av been specially when i was hell beind ur life to update this part! *holding my ears*

ok nw cmng back to comments!!
honestly telling u, i enjoyed reading it a lot nt coz abhay n aryan both were there(although u showed so much kanjoosi in showing them), bt coz of a fresh start of pia's life, it was so cool n different!!
i loved d way u av kept abhay alive in her memories!!!
u av placed amby-misha's character well, it was so smooth n natural!! loving this gal trio, it would b interesting to knw how story progressess b/w these three!!
so finally jeh, has turned negative, so negative dt he didn't think once dt y abhay killed her mother??, to save her pia, whom she claimed to love at some point of time😕😕😕😕, has he forget abt it?? n i m totally surperised dt somehwere he is playing so good wid her, just coz she is d key to abhay!!!🤢🤢
misha-pia-amby convo was super cool!!
ok nw coming to abhay-aryan😉. although it was painfull reading abt them😭😭😭😭
how aryan must b felt abt pia's question regarding his idientity
d way u wrote abt abhay's pain through aryan's pov, i loved it!!!
abhay compelling scene brought tear into my eyes 😭😭 n u knw it very well ,y it so happened!!😉
abhay-pia scene back at hospital was fab, it was so touchy n appearing so real to me!!! pia's behavior didn't surprise me n it was something natural!!
bt this time i want her to make an xception, no more running away frm d person in her sketches!!
n where r they shifting?? dheradoon???
would love to read nxt part asap, bt nt bf4 😉😉😉😉
luv u loadsss😳😳
Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago

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