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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1041

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Tanzie.🤗🤗.that was awesome...i luvd d update.⭐️...

see..my guess is right.!!..

amby raichand is really tough 2 handle.!!..

i luvd d way arman is feeling 4 her.😊..

T😆..god she can never thing anything else.. other than stealing😆.😆..

where ever my sweet heart is there will be fun...aryan was choo chweet.🤗🤗

i adore him...he is such a cutie pie.🤗..i luvd his expression.😳.

how could u plan my honey with alina.!!!...chalo no problem..since all i care is only my sweet heart 😛

but my honey was hardly on this update...

.tanzie i was waiting 4 this ff 4 a long time..!!!..this is ma fav..

happy piya refused jeh's offer...m sure that m gonna hate gaurav ...

so abhiya finally met...aww.😍.he embraced her..😍..

.n tanzie...u ended d very moment she recognized him.😡...i hate u 4 ending there😡...i just thought...wow..finally they met...n was eager 2 read d next line..but u ended.....i was on my way 2 my dream land when u stopped!!!!

continue soon tanzie..m waiting eagerly...luv u lot n take care.🤗...

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1042

Why Did U stop??????????
Pagal hoye jabo erokom korte thakle.

Tanzie ki bariya update tao aito tara tari sesh korli. Cholbe na

Want update soonish

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1043

lovely update tanzie 👏

sorry i missed commenting on the past updates...as told u was bit busy... though i have read all..😊

now coming to the update...

so alina has a soft corner for aryan..! but will aryan fall for alina too..!?

though i hope not bt i think jay will find it out in no time..🤢

so piya heard abhay's voice at last..

hummm so arman is in love with amby...! and amby too loves him...only she isnt accepting it...!

aww m loving amby more and more...loved her attitude and the way she talked to T...this reminds me of abhay. specially that dialogue 'style? woh mujhe apni family se virasat main mili hai..' so true ..no one can adopt it...it is raichand's signature style..!! 😎😍 and the moment you introduced amby i knew she was a vampire and abhay and aryan's sister as well...! coz humans cant b so deadly attractive...!! 🤪

piya sensing abhay everytime is so beautifully written...👍🏼

ohh this jay is so irritating..😡 who is he to tell what to do and what nt to do to piya..! piya's reply was apt..

awww... amby-aryan bond was beauuutiful...and abhay -amby convo was simple yet signify deep bonding...😳

the raichands rock...😎

humm...so amby wants to throw a party...! well it's destined to happen ...akhir abhay aur piya ko milna hai jo..so how can abhay nt agree..! 😉

abhay smelling piya instantly as soon as she entered was so expected and inevitable...that's y we call abhiya an epic couple...❤️ 😍

piya at the very moment remembered abhay & his name...that's y she is piya...!!!abhay's piyaaa...!!! ❤️

and abhay is surprised..that piya cn still remember his name...! well he shudnot b..! dosnt he know it yet ...that piya is totally insane when it comes to him..!?

everytime you keep us in suspence...😕well cant blame you...yeh to writers ki purani aadat hai...kaise chutegi...! hai na..!? 😉

once again..it was an awesumuummm update...👏 👍🏼

and plzz update asap...cant wait ...!

p.s. the new characters u introduced in this ff..m loving all of them...specially aryan,pihu and amby...❤️

and once again sorry for nt being able to comment in earlier updates..😭

key..t.c. love you...🤗

--indu--

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1044

awsum tanazie!!!!

loved it but y u stoped at really exiting part!!!!

agar thoda aur likh dete to kuch chala jata tere!!!!

amby is abhays sis!!! cool n she is emotionally attached 2 pia!!!

i hope dat will help abhay n pia!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!

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chandrima

@Viviliciousgirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1045

Hey Tanzie...sorry for late reply re. I have missed out a few chapters of your FF..will update myself soon and will comment also. BTW...you are an awesome writer!!! 🤗

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1046

awsome tanzie, pia remember abhay name, that good, ab firse wahi hoga, pia abhay ko apne aap se dur rehne nahi degi, cant wait for next update, i love this ff very much tanzie

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#1047

Lovely cute update Tanzie!

It was shocking to know about Amby's truth!! But she's too sweet adapted with humans as well as Abhay..!

She's a doctor.. Hope her profession will be of use in near future😊.

But why did you stop there with Abhay being shocked..

And moreover what was that precap?? Either you should have continue or not give the precap..!

You know at times you are not playing fair!😈

Thanks for the PM dear!! Update soon!

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#1048

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1049

wow awesome👏 update tanzie but why u ended it here 😡😡 yar abhiya come face to face plz update soon now i cant wait its becoming soo interesting,loved it to the core.

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1050

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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oky i knw, d above thing of killing one, is nw applicable on me, bt u knw d reason na😛 yea yea 😛

😛😛

believe me agar mere xams nahi hota, i would av eaten up ur head till knw, coz of ur dare devil act of leaving this part at such an expensive moment!! okay fine u brought them back thanx for dt, bt no thanx fr leaving it there only, sachi yaar thoda sa aur lekhne me tera kya ja raha tha?? thnaks God, ur exm saved me 😛 and common... suspense is my virture.. 😛 if i don maintain it..kaise hoga 😆

bt how cn i stop myself frm saying this, dt whole suitation which u created , was just perfect!!👏👏👏 thanks u 😳

nxt was amby, believe me amby;s part was a real shocker , bt a lovely one, u kept this thing under wrap so perfectly dt it didn't even come once in my mind!! hats off u to u for this

amby-abhay-aryan, reli xcited to knw abt d amby's role in their eternal love story!! Amby is Lady Abhay Raichand 😆 many people guessed by her attitude and i thot u will as well... here im surprused..for the first time 😆

tanz, these new characters r falling so perfectly in d puzzle of till d end of time, its totally mindblowing!!

how cn jeh b so selfish!!😡, blood effects!! I have different plans for Jeh and here he will be evil... 😕

tanushree-amby part was superb!! kya insult ki bandi ki, she was badly i need of dt!! bt nw wats d story beind dt locket, i knw u r nt gonna answer this!!😭 U guessed right so dont ask again before I say myself.. 😛

i so loved dt line tanz where u wrote alina's wish has been granted!!

okay nw i want nxt aryan there in nxt part wid loadss of abhiya!!

here my essay ends!! Aryan will meet Alina in the next update n yeap.. lots of abhiya will be there

luv u loadsss🤗 luvs u tooo 🤗