FF: Tu Jaane Na...ch9 pg82. UPDATED!(: PMs later

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Wow, the prologue was intensifying man. I was hooked from the first line and I read the first chapter as well and man, it's too good.

U gotta continue this way.. It seems FF are gonna the only place we will see Arnav and Khushi together. This week is so slow. Damn it, Khushi go to Lucknow or Arnav stop her.. But sorry about the rant.

Awesome work👏 Add me to your PM list if u have one.😳

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@SK1991

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

awww sooo nice dear...like it very much...

keep it up dear...waiting for next update...😃

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moon20283

@moon20283

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

amazzzing story priyanka... 🤗

i could totally see it... so well written! 😊

waiting eagerly for the next part of your story 😍

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

i totally love this chapter.❤️

omg, arnav used a toy gun,couldn't believe that😆

plz do update soon.it is written very beautifully.🤗

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

AWESOME.. 👏
Khushi handling the big guys .. and Arnav scaring them with a toy gun.. 😆

Update soon the next part...

Cheers,
Monsi

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

WOW Khushi is amazing man. She almost smashed them 👏 😆

but after all our Hero had to come for his heroin's rescue 😉 And Arnav is very clever, Fake gun ha? 😆 Awesome FF priyanka. Please continue soon and add me in your PM list 😛

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neahakhan

@neahakhan

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Omgg tusii great ho.
I loved it.
Please update soon:)

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654772

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

too good! pm me next time plz!

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Hallo Prix3,😊

Well, this is the first time am ever commenting on either of your FFs. But let me tell you something... You've got Amazing Writing Skills and a Fantabulous Imagination!! 😃 😛 I really loved the prologue of 'Tu Jaane Na'. It was a good start as there is so much for us to know about their past, the cause of this Showdown or should i say, Fight...

And about chapter 1: That was really awesome of her to keep going, rather than be stalled with fear written large in her eyes. That was totally cool. Even if she was scared, she did manage to keep those thugs away for sometime. And then came Arnav with a Gun!! 😲 Hah!...at first, I thought he was some secret agent or something (as you haven't given any character sketch of the characters)...But when, I came across his revelation, it was Hilarious 😆! hahaha...Even Khushi was shocked to see him with a gun.

And now, coming to the serious part, am kinda happy that Arnav, at least, realised his mistake. But by judging their thoughts and movements, I don't think that either of 'em will give each other away so easily, unless they come close to each other and feel each other's presence, look in the eye, try to read what is hidden in there and hold on to each other so as to not let go, as if their life depended on each other. ❤️

Hmm...What a lovely ❤️ story!! Heheheheh...😆

...All the Best, Prix3!! 😃

I, also wanted to dedicate a song to this FF (I know its a bit early to do anything like this, but look at the bright side, please) I request you to fit in this song in your FF - Tu Jaane Na, wherever you like, and whenever you like. It is truly an Amazing and one of the most Beautiful songs I've ever heard...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7M7tko9oTI

(It is an instrumental, so you can even use it as a background score for the couple.)

Regards

Annie😊

Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 14 years ago