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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16

Rocking update.😉
Will be eagerly waiting for next part.i think the person is Aman
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Thanks Raunika di!!!🤗
Hehehe😳
Great guess!!!👍🏼 😉

Shipss
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyy crazy ArHi fans!!!🤗

How's everyone?!😛

Forgive me for updating late because my computer was having problems'

I'm back with my fifth update on DBGA!😉

Most people were guessing Aman, and I got one Shyam Babuaa.😆 Everyone's guesses were so awesome and the evidence provided was fantastic!😉

Lets see who was right...

Here we go!:




We Left Off Here:

A: "TUMAARI ITNI HIMMAT?!!! Lavanaya, tumhe pata tha ki yeh papers kitne important hai?!!! Yeh files humaare trading marketing ke baare mein hai, aur who bhi Japan ke saath!!!!! Tumne bas Khushi se badla lene tha aur tumne ITNI BADI file ko pada?!
And you Khushi!!!"
Khushi got scared and turned towards him.
"Khushi how can you be so dumb?!"
He stepped towards her.
"Meine tumhe specifically kaha tha ki tumhe yeh papers ka dyan rakna hai! Aur tumne kya kiya hai?! Yeh papers Sim aur Pam ke pas rakdiya!!!!!"
Khushi felt heart-broken with a hint of guilty.
"Now what do you want to say?!!! SORRY?!!!!! Yeh tum hi hamesha kehti ho, right?!!!"
This time, Khushi couldn't help but let her tears flow out. She started crying.

Just then, someone who was watching this from his cabin stepped up. It was...

😲

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'...it was... none other than, AMAN!😲

Arnav: He stepped up even closer to Khushi and caught her two arms and squeezed them tight.

"Tum dekhna ki mein tumari halat ' "

Aman held Arnav by his arm. He took Arnav's hands off Khushi's. Then, he took Khushi's arm and moved her back towards him.

Khushi was shocked, while Arnav was even more furious then before.

Aman: "Kya hua, Khushi?"

Khushi was crying her eyes out.

Ar: "Who the heck are you and how dare you touch me?!!!"

Am: "Who...mein darasal Khushi ka dost hoon."

Ar: "Dost?"

Arnav froze as he was having a flashback.

_____FLASHBACK_____

Girl: "Ab hum dono dost hai na?!"

Boy: "Haan! Ab hum dost hai!!"

* hugged *

They both held each other's hand and went skipping back to the house.

😳

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Arnav looked at Khushi. Then, he shook his head.

Am: "Sir, aap teek tho ho?"

Ar: "Haan. Tum bas apni dost ko bolo ki agar who iss company ki liye kaam karna chahti hai, then she has to follow EVERYTHING that she is told to do. She can't be careless of her needs just the way she is, like right now."

Aman felt so sorry for Khushi. He felt like slapping ASR for the way he was talking to Khushi!

Am: "Dekhiye ASR' mujhe maloom hai ki Khushi bodh responsible hai. Par, agar koi Khushi ke baarein mein aise baat kadega, mujhe bardaash nahi hota. Aur kya koi mujhe batayega ki Khushi ne kiya kya hai?!!"

Ar: He was getting mad now. "Tum kudh usse pooch lo'"

Arnav left and went to his cabin.

Am: "Chalo, Khushi."

He took Khushi to her cabin.

He, then made her sit down.

Am: "Kya hua? Who ASR tum pe chila kyun ra hai?"

Khushi explained everything about the files.

"Toh, who Lavanya ne kagaj ko para hai, right?"

Lavanya nodded.

"Agar mein allowed tha, tho mein uss Arnav Singh raizada ka sharir tod tha kyun ki uss ne tumaare upar blame dala."

Khushi noticed how much Aman cared for her.

K: "Tum gussa mat ho."

_____ASR's Cabin_____

The P.A. System turned on and called, "Lavanya to my office." It was obviously Arnav's voice.

Lavanya knocked on his door.

"Tumne bulaaya ASR?", she said while giving him a smile.

ASR stared intensely at Lavanya.

Ar: "Lavanya how could you this?"

Lavanya walked up to ASR while still smiling. She held his hand.

L: "ASR tum - "

ASR pulled his hand away from her.

Ar: "You know what Lavanya?!! Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki jaise mujhe tum par haat utaana padega!!! Tumne itni IMPORTANT files padi, aur phir mujhse maafi mang rahi ho?! Mujhe lag raha hai ki mujhe tumhe suspension dehna padega."

L: "WHAT?!!! No ASR! Please!!! You know that mein tumhe miss karungi'"

Ar: "Just SHUT-UP!!"

L: "I don't know what's happening to you ASR! Tum uss chamkeeli ke side ' "

Arnav looked at Lavanaya (because she had said chamkeeli).

L: "I mean... Khushi * rolled her eyes * ke side le rahe ho tum."

Arnav just looked away and didn't answer.

L: "I'm really, very sorry ASR."

Lavanya wanted ASR to pacify her' but knew that it wasn't going to happen. ASR didn't respond to her.

Lavanya held her ears.

...

L: "Arrey ASR dekho na, mein apni kaan pakar rahi hoon'"

ASR was getting sick and tired of all of this. He turned to face her and grabbed her wrists which made her let go of her ears. He held them tight.

Ar: "Now listen' Mein tumhe kabhi iss ki liye maaf nahi karunga. Aur iss baat ko dyaan se suno. Mein tumhe aakri warning doonga. Agar tumne mere saath, ya phir Khushi, ya phir kissi worker ke saath panga liya, to phir tum dekhna ki mein tumaari halat kya karta hoon."

He threw her hands down.

Ar: "Now LEAVE."

Lavanya felt like she just got struck by lightning.

She stomped her foot and left the room leaving behind an "Angry Young man".

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THE END

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😆 hahaha I felt like writing loads more but wanted to leave it like this.😉 hehehee

Okay so how was this update?!😃

I hope you all enjoyed it!😛

So' now we know who was the mystery man😉!

Please leave your valuable comments/criticizes!

And don't forget to press the LIKE button!!!😳😛

Take care,

Shipss


Edited by shilparoxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey shilpa dear

really good update.

wish ASR would shout la like that in the actual show. cant believe he gave her another...u r dumb arnav!

im so glad khushi has aman there for her.

great work!!!

If I'm allowed can make a prediction on ur FF?

Will arnav get jealous seeing aman and khushi together?

Thanx for PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Davi

hey shilpa dear


really good update.

wish ASR would shout la like that in the actual show. cant believe he gave her another...u r dumb arnav!

im so glad khushi has aman there for her.

great work!!!

If I'm allowed can make a prediction on ur FF?

Will arnav get jealous seeing aman and khushi together?

Thanx for PM.


Heyy davita di!!🤗
Thank you!!😛
I know!😲 I also wish ASR would shout like that at La in the real show!!😔
😳 yah same here! He's a wonderful friend!😉
Yah sure!! No need to ask di!!😛
Well... YES!!😃 Later on in the FF😉 hehe

Your welcome!
🤗
take care,
Shipss
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shipss deary!!!
Dekha...maine kaha tha, Aman hi hoga!!!!!😆😆
I love the way he stood up for her!!
I'm a bit partial towards Arnav so I wasn't happy that he grabbed Arnav's hand and threatened to slap him...but I'm glad that he was there for Khushi!!!
I wonder where the story's headed now...oh BTW, what was the flashback about? Is it Arnav remembering his childhood friend, who happens to be Khushi?
Looking forward to the answers to all my questions in the next update...so update soon!!!😆😆
Thanks for the PM sugar!!
😊
Edit - I've just re read the part on page 13!! I think the flashback is of Arnav and Khushi...😊
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm...nice update;D
Loved it;D
Awan..aman was sweet;D
Lavanya got what she deserved;D;D
hey will we see a jealous Arnav?
I so hope we do..it will be fun;D;D
continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yahoo! I guessed right. Arnav told la off, good. Awww aman cares for khushi soo much, hope he is not in love with her. That is only Arnav's copyright;) wish u updated longer part. It was really nice. Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awhh lovely update bless ya thankss
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the update...thanks for the pm
will arnav get jealous of aman being with khushi?
I am so glad that asr told of la...i wish that actually happend
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, Ships...lovely..👏👏.n I was bang on...my guess was correct..😉.😆.waiting for more...😍

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