MN * YOU & ME - It's MAGIC. Part 18 - Pg 88.

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#501

Thank god that finalllyyy he said SORRY...I was expecting atleast a sorry from mayank...Whatever he said was not justified but im glad that he understood his mistake and apologized...With a promise that he wont get angry and listen to her heart out...

That was a indeed a special update...This time nupur showed her anger and mayank was still soft, consoling her...That was a lovely part...

Now want to see how mayank understand her point of view and clear the complexion nonsense from her head for good...
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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#502

Damn..to this cruel society.If you want to live fully, then this society would not let you live happily.It will pull you back from where you started living happily.

My heart wrenched feeling nupur condition.Poor soul.She has to be strong for herself.Her past memories made me emotional.

Thank God!!!!Mayank got some sense n talk to her politely.And the way he assured her was good.

Fantastic update Kinza.

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#503

lovely ff

waiting for the next part

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#504

amazing update...loved it so emotional😊

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#505

Ahah...! I got my answer...! And a very satisfying 1...! Thanks Kinza for the clarification...I really wanted that.. :D

A beautiful update... :D

I just hope this strengthens the bond of Mayank Nupur...

Its those people who taunted her who are racist... those people who actually did not matter to her but still their words left a profound effect on her... Nupur has gone through the worst... And u noe the saying "After the worst, the only thing that God can do is better.." So, now Nupur wil only get the best...!! Haina??

Perfect writing Kinza...!

Love the way u write... U r really talented..!!! :D

Pl continue soon...

Waiting,

Pooja

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#506

i was Expecting this, she must be in hospital after all this stress, and she was right its not her fault, its the fault of the Society, and Mayank should handle this matter with care, loved his concern in today's update

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#507

Kinzu..
The theme of this ff is really laudable..👏
Many of us have,at one point or the other, faced such problems.Some of us courageously face it, while others get affected by it deeply.
Waiting to see how Mayank removes every fear and complexes from Nupur's mind.

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#508

awesome part!!

loved it❤️

continue soon

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Nikhita

@nuckts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#509

part 15 was so brilliantly written i liked the way u depicted nupur's fear,mayank's concern n anger as well as his naughty 😉 talks at such time in hospital mayur rock!!!!!!!!

i loved d part specially "there is no need, you won't understand ever, you just shout and that is it", she said and mayank moved more close, "and what if I promise not to get angry and listen and discuss", he said and suddenly feeling his breath on her cheek she opened her eyes alarmingly, "ye kiya kar rahe ho ap, thora door reh k baat karo, hospital hai", she tried pushing him away but he moved more close, "it's okay nupur, wasie bhi doctor ne mujhe kaha hai to patch up, so it's a part of your medication", he winked and nupur opened her eyes wide, "dekho ap ..

And further protest was not possible as he captured her lips, in a kiss. Nupur was amazed at the softness of this kiss, it was so gentle and soft, yet love filled, she kissed back, with tears flowing out from her eyes, mayank pulled away after a couple of minutes, "I am sorry", he whispered against her lips and another tear fell from her eyes and he kissed it too, making it as a silent promise that he will erase them all. nice work sweety continue updating all d magic ffs,n os galleries u have written r my fav. well done😊

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shivi02

@shivi02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#510

this was totally written from the soul..i can so tell🤗
the parts in red and the past memories- yes that's really tough to come out...when the society has been so prejudiced it pricks...when ur close ones like granny says such stuff- it hurts...
nupur had gone through a very tough phase in her life
mayank is absolutely right in his thoughts but he needs to show sensitivity on this issue with nupur
very well written as usual

this update reminds me of something you once shared with us and i hated all who made u upset
you are a gem of a person🤗...love you from the bottom of my heart ❤️

@shu: ur comment is the cutest😆

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