OMG! Reserved! :D
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Kinzu Apu, i have seriously no words to explain how BEAUTIFUL this update is! Actually i'm wrong! It's something much beyond than beautiful! 😳
My heartbeats are on the topmost level possible! I wonder how many times i sighed reading each lines! ☺️
Surprisingly i'm breathing properly! Whoa! 😆
*gasp* I'm at loss of words right now! You have made me speechless! I just wanna tell you how i felt reading each scene! 😳Imaging the first scene... the rose petals, the romantic environment and Nupur's nervousness! My cheeks turned the DARKEST red! ☺️
"this is not fair!",
"tum ne tu ankehin hi band kar lin hai, and here i was thinking maybe we'll have our first eye lock,",
Haha Mayank's dialogues made me laugh! He's so cute! 😆 😳
Inhaling his Armani perfume...Ohhh myy goodness! ☺️ ☺️
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"hmmm, so do you now mind if I look into the deep eyes of my wife?", he smiled and nupur ' who was trembling with nervousness, couldn't help the curve form on her lips.
I can't stop doing AWWW reading this! Haayyee! I'm loving Mayank a LOT! ❤️
Unable to explain how i felt reading the intimate scenes! I'm in a different world! 😍
by the way I am still waiting for you to honor me by raising your eyes", he sighed and biting her lower lip, she batted her eye lids for a couple of times and raised them slowly to find that he was already intently staring.
Can i pull Mayank's cheeks? Umm i can dream at least! *closing my eyes* Awww man! He looks super duper adorable! *sigh* He's behaving like a cutie pie tonight! 😳
Nupur raised her eyes and he was staring! WOW! 😍
Nupur's every fiber contracted with love...awww! 😳 😃
"I think I was wrong before", his voice yet again echoed and with jerk she lowered her eyes, "your eyes are much more beautiful than you",
OMG! He's treating her like a princess! Such an ideal husband! ☺️
Even with lowered eyes, she could feel that he was smiling, and finally gaining some confidence, she decided to speak, "you are flattering"
Aahhann! 😉 Nupur replied back! Happy! 😃
"no I am not!, I never flatter", he stated it, as if a matter of fact and nupur looked up again to find him smiling and this time she smiled back, looking in his eyes and the glows on their faces matched.
Thank you for making Mayank say this! I'm truly feeling relaxed from the core of my heart! Mayank's genuine confession about he never flatters made me take a sigh of relief! He doesn't seem to make any problem!
"okay now there is something of which I am very excited, ", he said excitedly and nupur's mouth was left open, what was..
"this..", he took out a jewelry box from his pocket and nupur breathed a sigh of relief, and scolded herself on thinking too far.
Haha Mayankkk! Ufff i'm loving this side of him! ☺️
Nupur's mouth left open...hahaha what she thought hun? Naughty! 😛 😆
"this is the first thing in my life which I have shopped all on my own!, can you imagine that!, I went alone for this, actually I didn't know that there is something u need to gift ur wife on wedding night, mujhe tu bhaiya ne bataya!, and can u imagine, I was about to call you k lets go shopping again and phir bhiaya ne danta, ye khud lo ja k, so I went alone and I chose it after one whole day's surfing! .. I just hope u like it", he was speaking on a spree and took a deep sigh at the end and nupur broke in a giggle.
"hey don't laugh!, this is serious!", he pouted and nupur felt like pulling his cheeks but well, it was too early, she'll do it later on, and blushing on this thought she made sure she concentered full on the box,
OMG! CUTENESS PERSONIFIED!!!! 😳
Plain diamond ring...aaahhh that's my dream engagement ring! ☺️ LOVED IT MAN!
"pehno na!", mayank said again sensing there was no gesture from which he could say was leading to his wish
"main khud pehno?", she looked at him, widening her eyes, with all the confusion and mayank smiled, so quick, as if with a reflex action, and seeing that smile, nupur lowered her eyes, because next, mayank moved more close, and took the box from her hands, deliberately brushing his hand over her fingers, leading to shivers in her body held her left hand in his grip tightly.
OMG! The scene turned from cute to hot! My cheeks are burning now! ☺️
The whole sequence of ring and bangles removing was dreamy! Nupur not feeling hurt with removal of bangles and the whole feeling of MN sent me to dreamland! ☺️
Whoaaa Mayank noticed so many girls and Nupur jealous hmmm! 😉
"sweetheart, you are very innocent for these sorts of plays", - Umm... what did he actually mean by it? I wonder! I'm almost sure that he had a lot of affairs before marriage! But i hope he's changed now! Umm...he's actually changed i guess cause he sounds genuine which attracted me to him the most! ☺️
Ohhooo that kangan...kabab mein haddi ban gaya b/w that passionate moment *blush*...bechara Mayank...😛
"but we just lost the moment", - awww how sad...hehe 😆
"by the way I guess I should just go change, I feel like monument in this sherwani", he smiled and kissed her cheek again. - i want a husband like mayank!!!!! hehe!!! kidding!!! goshhh he's tooo damn cute...cutest...usse bhi bohot jyada...☺️
'nupur please ye sab bed se utha dena okay", - aww i can sense the feeling of right in this dialogue of him...kitne haq se kehe raha hain...aww...😳
witnessed her hair falling down free from the clip down her waist like a gushing stream of water down a mountain. - beautiful use of words!!!! 👏 👏
OMG!!! Bechara mayank...nupur seems to kill her by her innocence...aahhh that scene at that moment...the closeness,the burning gaze...yeahh...i m feeling like im living the moment...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
"you look so different, trust me I have never seen you this beautiful before". - I so love Mayank for telling this...he's so amazing...woh nupur ko kitna amazing feel karwa raha hain...just as nupur dreamed...😳😳😳
i can understand how nupur always felt about her dusky complexion...even i have the same skin colour n i used to feel the same too...but now i know im beautiful cuz beauty is from inner side...n moreover...dusky complexion is not ugly...not at all...n i hope nupur would understand that soon...mayank wud make her understand tht...😊
finally arrives the kiss...the much awaited kiss...long kiss...haayyyeee dreamyyy...blushing...shivering...feeling goosebumps...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
"We should shorten the kiss for next time, this is life threatening",
"you know you have injured my neck just with a kiss, I wonder what is going to happen when we ..
hehe...mayank is tooo naughty haan...mischievousness is in his blood i guess...haha kidding...well,i love his naughtiness...❤️...both these lines made me laugh as well as blush...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
wow...unbelievable...nupur initiated n kissed him...i was kind of shocked reading that...haha...yet...blushing again...ohoo my cheeks...burning a lot...☺️☺️☺️☺️
and all the things that happened next...aahhh...blushinggg...kya yaar...lagta hain meri new friend...my kinzu apu...woh meri cheeks acchi tarah se burn karke hi chodegii...😆
haha...innocent nupur's wild ways n naughty mayank's gentle ways...rare combination...loving it to the extent...they became one...dreaming...blushing...yeahh...omg...loss of words...❤️
umm...the last scene...i felt as if it represented a whole part of the story...mayank's likes n choices r quite different from nupur's...poor nupur had to kill her wish of enjoying the rain...for mayank...perhaps she'd have to do the same thing whole the time...at least until mayank understands her...but i'm pretty sure of one thing...i have no confusion about mayank's character now...he's nice n genuine...n i'm sure he wud be a nice husband..yet he's not a kind of person to compromise...so nupur always has to adjust...that's what i felt...lets c what u bring in the story further...😊
i'm lost in ur soothing n peaceful story...every update makes me crave for reading the other update in the next moment...😳...*deep sigh* finally i'm done with the comment...wow it took me 45 mins to comment...see the effect of ur update...i'm still in bliss...☺️
update reallyyy soon...okay...n thanks for such a mind blasting update...love u for this n i hope u r satisfied with my comment...keep smiling 😊 Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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