What Hurts The Most -AR ff-part 1 pg 6 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: Laila.N

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Originally posted by: divkashfull

its a emotinal concept

do continue it

yeaa it is...

What Hurts The Most: Part 1

The rain gods seemed to be ecstatic. October in Delhi seemed like july in mumbai. waterlogged streets were now a habit. It had been a week since the clouds had taken rest, but today was different. Accompanying and partying with the heavy downpour were thunder and storm. It was late, i had to reach home. I looked out of my office window. it did not seem that the rains would stop anytime soon and i knew i would get no public transport ride me back home however i decided to risk the possibilities.

Waiting outside my office doors i tried to hire a taxi but to no avail. i started walking down the road soaking myself in the rain water hoping to get a lift. Most cars around were getting damaged due to water. The thunder made me shiver in fear. finally i succeeded in finding someone to ride me back home. A Mercedes M series car stopped in front of me and as the window pulled down i saw a young sculpted man, with greek god looks, blue eyes and firm posture looking at me signalling me to get into the car. I thought again, after all he was just a stranger but i decided to accept the offer as i was pretty sure that i would not get conveyance otherwise.

Getting into the cari shut the door . The air conditioner made me shiver. Noticing this he turned it off and rather switched on the heater. I could smell his intoxicating masculine cologne. Sensing my discomfort, i guess, he switched on the music.. One of my favourites-'Ek Ajnabee haseena se'

though the man had been kind to me. I did not really find him warm. He seemed firm and cold. As if he had lost a lot. His eyes showed emptiness. Just as if reading my thoughts he decided to prove against me. He started humming the song. His voice more melodious than a nightingale. He stopped the car. confused i looked up at him and spoke for the first time ''ummm...kya hua? ''

he looked at me, his eyes almost laughed at my stupid question however contolling his smirk he asked '' Direction? ''

i realized how unthoughtful i had been. i guided him to my house as he drove..

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It was raining, again. How i loved these rains. It was in these rains that i had seen her for the first time.

Driving through the waterlogged streets i could see a small frame walking her way through the water. This was exactly where i had seen her for the first time. Just that the streets were not this waterlogged back then. She wrapped her arms embracing herself due to fear or cold i could not tell. Her hair drenched and dripping water. Her lips quivering. She looked angelic. Her face as innocent as a newborn. Her eyes spoke volumes. She was trying to get a ride back home I guess. I couldn't make myself not help her. By her looks i could tell she wasn't too talkative. I did not want her to feel i was trying to flirt so I kept a straight face. I could see her notice my features and personality almost as if analyzing whether she had taken the right decision by accepting my offer. Though drenched she smelled of jadore. I could tell that. She looked at me with those round brown eyes. I could almost sink in them. She seemed to be feeling cold, i switched on the heater. I could sense her discomfort. I played the music. One of my favorite melodies '' ek ajnabee haseena se''. Realizing that the song fit my present situation so wall I couldn't help but hum along. I was always a decent good singer. She seemed impressed and also more comfortable.

I kept driving for a while but at the end of the road i halted. She looked at me with such shock that i could tell she almost believed i was going to rape her. Convincing herself she asked in the most childish voice''kya hua''

I could help but smirk at it. I knew it seemed rude so controlling my amusement i asked her for directions as she obliged.

"Sometimes what it takes to happen is just a beginning. "

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