What Hurts The Most -AR ff-part 1 pg 6

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

What hurts the most

Intro-pg 1

Pls tell if i shall continue

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

What hurts The Most

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The chilling autumn breeze made me tremor as I walked my way leaving a trail of footsteps over the rotten leaves of the fall. Tears surfaced in my eyes almost ready to drop. My Eyelids heavy and swollen. Kohl smudged around my eyes as the events ran through my mind. How I had wronged him. How i had hurt him without deciphering the Condition of his heart. I tried to wipe away the overflowing tears. I felt so low. I lost all self respect. I knew he'd still not complain yet I had no courage left to face him. By this time i has Reached the end of the cliff and running our memories through my mind, I embraced those moments tight to my heart in fear of losing them and I left forever to the world where life's just a bit more fair.

Pls tell me if you want me to continue .

Pls comment or like or both

love

kavya

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

15 views n no comments? Is it tht bad? :'(

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peacemaker15

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice Start
Do continue soon
Thanks for the text

Btw why dont you continue your old ff's?
I really miss nights like these and my interpretation of a fairytale

Love u di
puvu

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: peacemaker15
Nice Start
Do continue soon
Thanks for the text

Btw why dont you continue your old ff's?
I really miss nights like these and my interpretation of a fairytale

Love u di
puvu

Thanks so much purvi
I thought even u'd not comment !
Old ff's ? Well i dont really use that id anymore and moreover the threads have been closed.
Also since no one actually wants me to continue this...i fear they wouldnt want to read those either!

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peacemaker15

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -kavya-

Thanks so much purvi

I thought even u'd not comment !

Old ff's ? Well i dont really use that id anymore and moreover the threads have been closed.

Also since no one actually wants me to continue this...i fear they wouldnt want to read those either!

how could i not...specially after ur text :P
In that case u can always repost the preexisting parts and continue them
That might be because people dont know its u only had u posted frm old acnt u wud hav got lot of comments :)

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: peacemaker15
how could i not...specially after ur text :P
In that case u can always repost the preexisting parts and continue them
That might be because people dont know its u only had u posted frm old acnt u wud hav got lot of comments :)

Sho shweet of u :)
Not a bad idea..but i would feel really let down in case i dont get response :(
But there's always a first time na...even from that account there was a first time when i posted a ff .

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peacemaker15

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Posted: 14 years ago

@kavu di...m sure u wont get a bad response...u've got so many friends...
But still people got to know u na :P
Atleast try...n u mite get comments soon..mite be rite now not too many people are online
Chalo mummy is calling me...i will talk to u later...byeee

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

@gupta.aditi20
Thanks a lot for pressing the like button

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: peacemaker15
@kavu di...m sure u wont get a bad response...u've got so many friends...
But still people got to know u na :P
Atleast try...n u mite get comments soon..mite be rite now not too many people are online
Chalo mummy is calling me...i will talk to u later...byeee

hmmm...mite be...
Ohk...once i get time..will think ov it. !
Okieshh sweety...nd thanks a lot !