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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#511

lovely update. ohhh love the way maan brought geet to his room and changed her cloths without making it tooo obvious and then got her stuff , conference all things sort out. he is really good and smart. omg geet start loosing her self just at his little touch. love the way maan reminded her about his introduction and then the kiss dialogue were really good

thanks for pm and pls update soon yaar.

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#512

Marvee after reading any of your updates though characterizations,story is different I have the same reaction,which is😳

So I think I should make a template reply -with the above mentioned emoticon😆 Then the problem of my repitative posts will be solved😛

I loved the sensitivity and naivety in this one 😊

Thanks for PM of all fics and keep up the fab work!!

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#513

hey marvee...
just read all the updates in one go...
loved them all to the core...
simply awesooome.superb.fab...
wondeful...beautiful and a very soothing love story...
plz do cont.soon...
and thanx for the pm.
take care.

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sky_86

@sky_86

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#514

tooo bad 😡😡i cant like it everytime i re-read it again and again...thanks so much im so touched by your sincerity in fulfilling us greedy pplz wishes and desires⭐️⭐️

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wala66

@wala66

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#515

mummy yeh marvee ladki jo haina..woh mijhe marna chati hai😭😭😭khushi yo se...hailaaayeh kya thaaa😳😳😳thanks sooo much and loaaads of hugs out to you for not 1 but 3 updates haaawwwttt⭐️⭐️⭐️...

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kar1538

@kar1538

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#516

Loved the update. Geet is too innocent
Thanx for the PM

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#517

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan is really gem😊...
i loved the way he treated geet...
really thrilling love story...i loved it...looking fwd...

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Very lovely n beautiful part

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#519

hey dear Marvee,
tht was awesome...
lovely,passionate n hawtt...!!!!!
continue soon sweetie...
Geet is really getting brave FF by FF...lolzz..
thank God she dint shout at him abt all the things...
she understood everything...

PS-dear, dont be sad if my comments r not colourful...
coz i most of the tym read the parts frm my ipod,frm which i cant edit my comments...
so plzzz consider my feelings frm the comments n not by its size or colour...
i kno u understand n only our comments r important for u...but jst felt lyk informing u
abt it,nothing else...no offense at all...

thnkx a lot n love u...
waiting for the next part to cum...
keep writing sweetie... ❤️