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@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Amazing, wonderful n lovely part

Update soon. ...
Can't wait

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Amazing the way u succeed to make us live those scenes...amazing is the style u r writting...amazing was their first encounter...
I loved the connection between her poem and her feelings and the actions occured between them...beautiful start for a love story,they talked with so much easyness...they felt eachother hearts 😳 😳 He kissed her when she was asleep...so sweet and pure...love the scene...love ur work...pls continue soon

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Awesome.

Amazing.

He is already in love with her.

Wow...m loving it.

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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DASTAK..

@DASTAK..

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

hey
its superb...👏👏
luvd it...
kp writing...
n cont soon...

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anaya

@millllli

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

awesome

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

where is part 1

i am missing hthat

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

hey
thanx for inviting me in ur world of ff
and marvee u are fantastic this story is the best yaar
i loved it😊
im famished with ur working skill and creativity beyond ppl imagination
thanx for pm yaar👏
do send me pm of ur other stories i would love to read it⭐️