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Posted: 14 years ago
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WELCOME TO:
(banner credit goes to ankita ghosh- ankita2804)
ITS AFTER A VERY LONG TYM I'M UPDATING THIS FF...HOPE U ALL WILL LYK IT
ENJOY READING!!!!!

College:

Class gets over'.n all goes back home

Geet- ohh teri!

Khushi- kya hua!!

Geet- yaar mein apni assignment file class mein hi bhool gayi

Khushi- hey bhagwaan!!! Tum kab badloge yaar!!!

Anyways mein leke aati hoon'

Geet smiles n khushi goes to d class

Geet(to her other frndz)- yaar!!! Meine khushi ko jaan booch kar beji hain

Frndz- kya??? Lekin kyun?

Geet- dekho.. kal humaari khushi ki b'day hain'aur meine uske liye ek surprise bhi plan kiya hain'aur uss plan ke bare mujhe tum logon se baat karni thi'isliye

1 of her frndz- acha'tol bolo..kya plan hain'.

Geet tells d plan'.

Geet- mein khushi ki daadi maa se bhi baat ki hain'.woh bhi hume help karegi'.

1 of her frndz- superb idea'.hum sab teri saath hain geet

Geet- shh shh khushi aa rahi hain

Khushi comes wid the file- yeh lo!! Tumhaari file'..

Geet- thnk u jaanu'.

Khushi- haan theek theek hain'ab chalo''(in a stern voice)aage se bhoolna mat

Geet nods her head(in a childish way)
Maan's cabin:

He's busy doin his work in d laptop'

Right then his cell phone rings

Daadi maa's name flashes in d screen

Maan (picks up d phone)- ji boliye daadi maa

Daadi- maan beta kal khushi ki b'day hain

Maan- jaanta hoon daadi maa''

Daadi- beta darasal baat yeh hain ki khushi ki frnds ek surprise party organize kiya hain'toh woh log chaahthe hain ki hum bhi uss party mein aaye

Maan- lekin kyun daadi maa..mein kal khushi ke saath waqt bitaaunga na'.

Toh phir'

Dadi- yeh baat hum aur khushi dono jaanthe hain'.maan beta mein yeh chaahthi hoon ki hum bhi khushi ko ek surprise de'.woh kabhi expect nahi karenge ki tum party mein aayega'.tumhe khushi ki vaasthe aana hi padega

Maan- theek hain daadi mein'par yeh party kab aur kahan pe hain???

Dadi- aaj shaam 8 baje..Hotel Beach Orchid mein

Maan- ok daadi maa main office se seedha hotel pahunch jaaunga..bye

Dadi- bye beta''.

Khurana mansions:

Dadi comes to meet khushi in her room

Dadi- khushi'aaj ka din kaisa tha beta

Khushi-dadi who bohot ach'(she thinks abt how ASR spoke to her rudely in d mrng)

Dadi- kya hua???

Khushi- kuch nahi dadi'.aaj ka din bohot acha tha

Dadi- acha who sab chodo'.

Aaj Meira(chk the CS) ki b'day hain!!!!

Khushi- arrey haan'mein toh bhool gayi thi

Dadi- dev(chk the CS) ne ek party organize kiya hain'hotel Beach orchid mein'.toh hume wahaa jana padega'.

Khushi- theek hain dadi maa'mein bhai se poochthi hoon

Dadi- maine maan se keh diya hain'maan ne kaha ki hum dono ko 10 baje ke pehle ghar wapas aana padega'

Khushi- ok dadi maa mujhe ek assignment complete karna hain..uske baat mein thayyar hoti hoon''

Dadi- theek hain beta''

Later dadi calls geet

Daadi- geet beta main khushi ko leke hotel beach orchid aa jaungi'.

Geet- aww thnk u sooo much daadi maa

Dadi- acha suno beta'..

Geet- ji

Daadi- maine khushi se meira ki b'day ke bare mein hi kaha hain

Toh maine dev,meira ko bhi party mein bulaaya hain'aur unlogon ko plan ke bare mein bhi kaha hain'.

Geet- acha'..by the way daadi maine dev aur meira se kabhi mila hi nahi'bas un dono ka naam suna hain'

Daadi- tum usske bare mein fikar mat karo'.meine un logon se 7 baje hotel ki reception hall mein aane ke liye kaha hain..

Geet- acha theek hain daadi maa'.baaki sab mein kar loongi'

Daadi- theek hain beta..ab hum phone rakhthe hain..bye beta

Geet- bye daadi maa

Geet calls her home

Anjali picks up d phone

Anjali- hello

Geet- helow didii

Anjali- tum ab phone kar rahe ho??? Ghar a ane ka koi plan hain kya tumhe??

Geet- ohho didii'aap bhi na'maine aapko bataaya tha na ki aaj mein khushi ke liye ek surprise party organize kar rahi hoon..aap bhool gaye kya?

Anjali- ohhh!! Sorry geet'..

Geet- theek hain dii'.aap bhai se bhi bol dijiyega'

Anjali- ok geet..acha agar bohot raat hoti hain toh chote tujhe pickup karne ke liye aayega

Geet- haan theek hain diii

Anjali- acha byee'apna khayal rakhna'

Geet- ok dii'.byeee

Anjali- byee

Khurana Constructions:

Maan- 5.30 baj gaye..mujhe khushi ke liye ek gift khareedna hain

I think mujhe nikalna chaahiye..

N he calls for ADI

Adi- jii sir

Maan- adi agar aaj koi appointments hain toh who sab cancel kar do

Adi 'theek hain sir'..

Sir'.kal khushi ki b'day hain'toh pls aap meri taraf se unko wish karna'.

Maan- theek hain!!!

N he leaves'..

Maan reaches Hotel Beach Orchid'.he has a gift in his hand too J

Maan- ab toh sirf 7 baj gaye hain!! Ek ghanta baaki hain'.kya karoo'...Reception hall jaata hoon...

He enters the hotel

MSK(to d receptionist)- excuse me'..reception hall kaha pe hain

Receptionist- ji'.5th floor mein

Maan- ok thnk u'..

He goes to the reception hall thrugh the elevator.

As soon as he entered a\teh reception hall a girl who had a baket full of roses dashed wid him

It was our GEET.

Well the flowers baskest went up n all the flowers fell on both of them(as if there was a baarish of FLOWERS)

Geet(to maan)- ohh Mr'dekh kar chal nahi sakta kya!!!

Maan- what???

Geet- aap ghoonga hain??'.

Maan- nahi

Geet- theek hain..aapne meri phool kyun giraayi???

Maan- meine giraaya??? Tumhare paas phool thi'.tumhe dhyaan se chalna chaahiye tha na '

Geet- ohh ab woh meri galthi hin

Maan- dekho tum'..

(he pauses n thinks)- Maan tum yahan apni behen ki b'day celebrate karne aayi ho..isse jhagada karne ke liye nahi...

Maan- I'M REALLY SORRY(n he goes)

Geet- hain??? Ajeeb aadmi hain!!! (she looks at the flowers lying in d ground)- heyy papaji...ab mujhe ek nayi roses leni padegi

Maan sees dev n meira''

Dev- hi bro!!!!

Maan- hi dev!! Hi meira

Meira- hii

Maan- ahh meira'.happy b'dAY

MEIRA-thnk u bhaiyya'.

Maan- acha tum log yahaan kaise???

Dev- woh humhe daadi maa ne bulaaya'.

Maan- acha'.

Well mein phone call karke aata hoon'..

He sees geet decorating the reception hall'.

Maan-shayad yeh ladki khushi ki dost hain'..

Geet was standing on a chair'

Just then he leg slips n she was about to fall

Maan comes quickly n holds her'..

(Geet maan ki baahon mein hain yaara!!)

N they share an intense eye lock''.a romantic one'.

They were looking at each other's as they knew each since long tym''.

Precap- Khushi's b'day celebration'.Maaneet and Arhi Moments

hope u all had a great tym reading my FF...

pls post ur valuable comments...im eagerly waiting for that ..NEW READERS PLS LIKE THe PM LIST POST(in pg11) SO THT I MAY ADD U TO The PM list

Love,

Sonia

Edited by awesumsonia - 13 years ago
monika21 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
keep it up dear.. nice attempt.. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63


Wonderful update...thanx for pm Soniya...

so Maan-Geet first meeting happen with colliding, fighting and then slipping...all are there to celebrate Khushi's b'day...

waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
luvd it.. finally dey met...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
😊i have sent u buddy request...plz pmme whenu update...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by awesumsonia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

wid...😉
4 pm me...😛
me 4 that...😃
ur updates r wid
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me dears...
so much.....
really
&
dear...👍🏼
tons of 4 u dear...
at last wishing u
dear..😊...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Amaaazing:D
Loved it:D
cont soon:D
thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: monika21

keep it up dear.. nice attempt.. 👏

thnkkxxx a lot monu diii :) :)

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