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Part:-5

In khuraana mansion:-
D:" aapko miss kar rahe the"
Maan smiled
D:" agle week aa rahe hai Naintara ke saath"
His smile vanished on word "Naintara"
Mk:" uska aana zaroori hai" he said angrily
Dadima was shocked what he is saying
D:" Maan yeh aap kya keh rage hai woh aapki bhabhi hai aur Dev ki patni tau zahir hai woh bhi aarahi hai"
Mk:" woh Jo bhi ho I hate her "
D:" bete plz hum jante hai unho ne Jo kuch bhi kiya wo galat tha lekin insaan ko dusra mauka tau milna chahiye na"
Mk:" mauka use mauka nahin mauke diye par har baar woh aurat kuch aesa karti hai jiski wajah se mere dil mein aur nafrat paida hojati hai"
He left from there and went to study room, he sit on his chair and closed his eyes, the first face comes in front of him was geet he quickly opened his eyes
Mk:" us Larki ka chehra baar baar meri ankhon ke samne kyun aaraha hai o god"
He started to work on his project to keep himself busy from her thoughts, after that he went to his room and sleep

Morning:-
Geet woke up and went to washroom with her hands on wall to support herself easily
R:" didi breakfast ready hai aajao"
G:" haa aayi" she changed into beautiful red shalwar kameez and left her hair open
G:" rajji tujhe yaad haina aaj mandir jaana hai"
R:" haa didi mujhe yaad hai bas breakfast ke baad chalte hai"
G:" theek hai"
After finishing breakfast both headed off to mandir, they reached mandir and meet pandit
P:" are beti kaisi ho buhat Dino baad aayi ho"
G:" jee woh bas aesi hi pandit ji kya aaj ki aarti mein gaa lo"
P:" beti yeh koi pochne wali baat hai zarror"
G:" rajji pandit Ji ko pooja ki thaali dede"
R:" ji didi"
Raaji gave thaali to pandit ji and they started pooja
P:" thoori der ruko abhi yahan kisi ne aana hai uske baad pooja shuru karenge"
R:" kisne aana hai"
P:" savitri Devi ji ne"
R:" woh kon hai"
P:" are tumhe unka nahin pata woh har budwaar ko yahan aati hai khuraana parivar ki sabse bhari hai unke teen pote hai pati unke aab is duniya mein nahin rahe bas thori der tak aajaiye gi"
G:" oh"

In khuraana mansion:-
Dadima was getting ready for mandir, Maan came and asked
Mk:" aap kahin jaa rahi hai"
D:" haa hum mandir jaa rahe hai"
Mk:" oh"
D:" aap bhi chaliye na" she said lovingly
Mk:" plz aapko pata haina mein in sab baato mein yakeen nahin rakhta"
D:" bete aap bhi na"
Mk:" mein office jaa raha hu"
D:" theek hai"
Both left to their destinations
Dadima reached mandir and meet pandit ji
P:" namaste savitri ji kaisi hai aap"
D:" hum bilkul theek hai"
P:" agar aap kahe tau pooja shuru kare"
D:" jee bikul"
Pandit went to geet
P:" beta arti shuru kar do"
G:" woh aagai hai"
P:" haa"
Geet start the aarti and and start singing in her beautiful sweet voice, dadima was impressed from her and said to pandit ji
D:" yeh se Larki kon hai"
P:" kon Jo aarti gaa rahi hai"
D:" jee"
P:" yeh geet hai buhat hi pyaari bachi hai bechari"
Dadima looked at him surprised and said
D:" bechari?"
P:" jee yeh Dekh nahin sakti"
D:" kyaa" with shocked face
P:" jee kuch salon pehle upar wale ne is se iski ankhon ki roshni cheen li par sabse bhari baat yeh hai ke isne kabhi upar wale se shikayat nahin ki kabhi kisi ko kuch bura bhala nahin kehti, iske maa baap is duniya mein nahin rahe, sirf choti behan hai jo iske duniya hai, Jo iske keliye Sab kuch hai, humesha khud se pehle dusron ke baare mein sochti hai, khud se zada dusron ki parwah karti hai, kabhi kabhi meine khud bechari ko yahan chup chup ke bait kar rote huye dekha hai par kabhi kisi se kuch nahin kehti"
Dadima had tears in her eyes after listening to him
D:" hum inse milna chahte hai"
P:"jee zaroor"
After aarti pandit ask to geet
P:" geet beta mujhe tumhe kisi se milna hai"
G:" kis se pandit ji"
P:" savitri devi jee se woh tumse milna chahti hai"
G:" jee theek hai"
Raaji hold her hand and went with pandit ji
P:" savitri jee yeh hai geet"
Dadima looked at her and thought how beautiful she is
P:" aur geet beta tumhare samne savitri Jed khari hai"
G:" namaste" and bends down to touch her feet
D:" jeete rahiye beta humesha khush rahiye"
P:" aur yeh rajji beta hai geet ki choti behan"
R:" jee namaste" she also bends down to touch her feet
D:" khush rahiye"
D:" geet beta aapki awaz tau buhat hi khubsurat hai bilkul aapki tarah"
Geet smiled and said:" jee shukariya"
D:" aur kaha rehti hai aap"
G:" jee yahin nazdeek hi"


Precap:- g:" aap yahan pe"




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Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago
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simply fabulous and i love ur ff
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i loved it !!! can u include some english in it ??its kind of diffcult to read in full hindi,,,
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very good FF
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where is part 5?????????????
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just read all the parts!
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part 6:-

D:' hume pata chala ke aap dekh nahin sakti buat bura laga sunkar aap kabhi aayega humare ghar pe'
G:' jee mein'
D:' kyun nahin aa sakti '
G:' jee ase baat nahin hai '
D:' hum jante hai hum aapke liye anjaan hai isliye aap aesa soch rahi hai na'
G:' aesi baat nahin hai dadima..., kya mein aapko dadima bula sakti hu'
D:' zaroor bete aap hume dadima bula sakti hai'
G;' jee theek hai'
D:' aab hum chalte hai'
G;' jee namaste'
D;' ahh beta hum aapse ek baat puche'
G:' je pucheiye'
D:' aap bura tau nahin maane gi'
G;' nahin puchiye naa'
D;' aap apni ankhon ka ilaj kyun nahi karwati'
after listeing that she had teras in her eyes and said
G:' jee wo mein'
D;' koi baat nahin beta agar aap nahin batana chahti tau koi baat nahi its okay'
G;' nahin aesa nahin hai woh woh itne peese nahin hai ke mein apna ilaj kar wa payu'
D;' tau aap ghar ka kharcha kaise sambhalti hai'
G;' jee woh mere bhai hote hai dusre shehar mein woh har mahine paise bejte hai hume bas usse se apna kharcha chilta hai'
D;' ohh koi baat nahin beta agar upar wale ne chaha tau buhat jald aapki ankhon ki roshni wapis aa jaegi'
G; jee shukariya'
D;' hu chalte hai'
dadima hugged har at went back to home

R;' chale didi
G;' haa chal'
both also went home and rajji ask
R;' didi woh kya puch rahi thi aapse'
G;' kon'
R;' wahi dadima jo thi mandir mein'
G:' keh rahi thi ke min apni ankhon ka ilaaj kyn nahin karwa leti'
R;' tau aapna kya kaha'
G;' meine kaha humare pas itne paise nahin hai bas isliye hi'
rajji hugged geet and started crying bitterly and said
R;' aap fikar mat karo didi dekhna ek din aapk ankhe bilkul theek ho jaye gi hmm'
G;' hmm tu rona band kar'

In khuraana mansion:-
dadima went inside and saw maan already in the hall
D;' maan bete aap jaldi aa gaye'
MK;' jee woh meeting jaldi khatam ho gayi thi isliye'
D;' ohh... appko pata hai beta aaj humemandir mein larki mili buhat hi khubsurat thi'
MK;' tau' he was busy in his newspaper
D;' per bechari dekh nahin sakti'
after listening that maan looked at her and remembered about geet
D;' phir bhi humne unki ankhon mein koi shiqwa koi shiqayat nahin dekhi bagwan keliye woh bagwan jisne usse uska sab kuch cheen liya'
dadima tell him eveything about what happened in mandir and her talking with geet
maan was listening to her very carefully

dadima changes the topic and said
D;' hum apne room mein ja rahe hai'
MK;' jee'
maan was still thinking about geet and left to his room

after one week:'
today was a big day for khuraanas, dev singh khuraana amd naintara singh khuraana are soming back after 2 years from canada

D;' nakul sari tayariyan ho gayi haina'
N;' jee dadiam sab kuch ho gaya hai aap fikar mat kijiye'
just then they hear a sound of car and dadima said
D;' lagata hai agaye hai'
D;' naukl jaiye jaake maan ko bula kar laiye'
N;' jee dadima' he left from there
he knockes maan's door
MK;' yes'
N;' bhare saab woh dadima aapko bula rahi hai chote aap bahu raani ke saath aagaye hai'
MK;' theek hai mein aarahu hu'
nakul left from there and downstairs

dev and nainatra came and bends down to touch her feet
D;' khush rahiye'
Dev;' bro kaha hai dadima'
D;' maan aate hi honge'
just then maan came and hugged him
MK; kaise ho dev kitne change ho gaye ho'
Dev;' par aap bilkul nahin badle bro wese ke wese hi hai aap'
Dev:'dadima bro ka gussa badla ya nahin'
D;' nahin oh nahin badla'
maan looked at naintara and naintara was looking at with with lustful eyes maan feels disgusted and looked away
N;' kaise hai maan veerji'
maan looked at her


precap:' N;'aap chahe kuch bhi kar lejiye maan aapko hum apna bana kar rahe ge' and smiled evily













Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago

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