The Contract of Hearts (Last Part Updated Pg.97) - Page 74

Originally posted by: Davi

omg shailu

i loved the ending. it was so intelligent to leave it up to the reader.

brilliant writing! i dont think ive complimented you enough.

i really enjoyed reading your FF. i loved that you updated daily as it gave me something to look forward to.

If you do get a chance please do write another FF would love to read it.

My fav character is arhi. love them always.

I loved all the tracks but particularly liked the last one where khushi still works for him in terms of a contract as you maintained the original concept.

Loved the FF.

Will miss reading your updates.

Originally posted by: Zbegum

WOW! loved the ending! omg it would be amazing to see the turnaround unfold! arnav in pursuit of khushi!

thanks for the amazing updates!!!

hope to see more writing from you in future

xxx

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Shailu!!

This was a really nice end to a truly wonderful story!!

You had all the perfect ingredients in your writing and not once did you bore me as a reader. I've been hooked since chapter 1!!!

I suppose it would be too obvious to say I liked Arnav and Khushi's characters, but I liked the changes you showed in Arnav's character through the story. His character has shown the most development, whereas Khushi's character was steady all the way.

I really enjoyed the track which involved Maan and Geet. It was really brilliantly written.

I wish you all the best with your research work, and hope you come back with another terrific FF!! Your writing is a delight to read so you should definitely keep it up!!

Thanks for all the PMs and hope to hear from you soon!!!

Zeba

😊

i luved it..but i wish it never ended ..plz write anthr fic :)

I cant believe this ended 😒

That was so beautiful! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful FF and sharing it with us Shailu! 😃 It was truly a treat to read and I enjoyed it so much! What can I say... I loved all the characters and all the tracks it was all just amazing! Thank you once again! Hoping to read more of your work in the furture if you decide to write more. 😊

what an ending yaar👏 it was really sweet. i loved it. i liked the way you ended it. going to miss this ff hereafter. thanks for sending pm for all the updates so far

Amazing ending Shailu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THis should have been published!!! I do hope there will be a sequel to this!

So nice to see Khushi thinking that somethings never change!

WOWOW;D

Totally loved it! What a unique ending as well. Seriously i've soo many thots running through my mind, dont know what to write first. yay i guessed right, she was arnav's mom, but never expected their wedding to be disrupted(is that the ryt word to use?) in such a way. Then khushi going away, followed by leap of THREE years! What i love is that she didn't remain broken but rather became better wow MBA then studying in england( was really unexpected to me). Arnav ki takkar ki bangayi hai khushi. Oh just love imagining khushi in jeans n kurti, would have loved to read arnav's and others reaction to change in her dressing style, as in did he prefer her in this or misses the pompoms (can i hope for season 2 please!) oh Maya baby her wish came true. I cant say which xter was my fav, arnav or khushi. But fav cameo was ofcourse Geet maan singh khurana. I 've soo many fav scenes that the page will not be enough, but mention a few: their confession, arnav being jealous of bhavesh, Geet's tutoring, their marriage, jalebi night, the ending ofcourse...
Gosh its really ended? Pls pls pls continue season 2 if u can, will love to read arnav being the confident one in their love n relationship and how he'll make khushi his again, i know u said use ur imagination, but mine is very poor. Left to me, i'll be thinking she was wearing a mangalsuter under her kurti with a half collar, so it's not visible. But then i dont think he tied it round her neck. Well see? Pathetic ryt? So pls? Pls pls? Return wit season 2? Or revoke of contract of hearts? ;-) it was really nice ff that i cant seem to let go. It was lovely to read, thank you so much for it. And thanks 4 the pms as well.