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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
omg ek hi update mein itna kuch... starting mein i got a bit confused with meet /vairabhi geet /misthy
hmm...interesting start ab ye arjun kaun hai
continue soon
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well its just that vairabi is called as meet and mishty as geet in their family... as their pet names...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
loved the update...
actually love the bonding both the sisters have...
so maan loves meet...has he met her b4 or this is the first time he is meeting her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Lovely update continue soon. Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Late update kiya aapne...
Maan aur meet ek doosrey ko janthe hai kya?????😕😕😕
Waise Update is superb...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awesome and interesting part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

wonderful update

maan so demand to have meet in his life
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38




Part 3

The night was sleepless for maan as he was surrounded with the thoughts of vairabi. From her talk he came to know about her and pointed them out in his mind.

1. She is cute

2. she is inteleegent i.e DCP afterall'..

3. she is from oher caste and state'.. no problem

4. doesn't talks much

5. doesn't makes friends

6. I love her''

And then he made a list of works he has to do '..

1. Make her comfortable

2. Make her talk

3. Allow her to call me maan

4. Change from vairabi to meet'..

5. Try best to impress her

6. If not then force her to be mine

7. Every thing is fare in love and war''

It was 4:30 in the morning when tierd of trying to sleep he went out of his seat near the door of his compartment only to see a girl standing near the door .

Maan ' excuse me'..

When the girl turned he saw it was one of the twin. And he immediately came to know her to be meet. He looked her from up to down. Her salwar was gone and was repaced by a jeans and a simple full sleaved kurti. And she was looking simple yet very elegant.

Maan ' good morning vairabi'.. he said casually'.

Vairabi ' morning'' mr.khurana'..

Maan ' so was I right????

Vairabi ' yes'.. how did you know???

Maan ' your eyes'' he explained when she looked confused'.. your eyes are almond and geet's brown.

Vairabi ' you are the first one to notice the difference in a short time''

Maan ' but what are you doing here at this time????

Vairabi ' well hum log delhi 30 min main poohanch ne wale hain'' so its better that we should get ready'..

Maan ' really???... I didn't know''

Vairabi ' not your's fault'.. aapne kabhi train main safar nahin kiya ha naw'..

Maan ' tumhe kaise pata????

Vairabi ' arjun'. And smiled a little'.. and went past him'.

Maan ' kahan ja rahi ho???... a desperation was heard'.

Vairabi ' geet ko jagane ke liye'.. bahot time leti hai ... and went giving a small and confused smile to him.

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It was almost 5 am when the train stopped at delhi station. Though it was not as crowded as it normally should be but was enough to make a person to get lost. They got down from the train and stood there for a while . maan tried to savior her picture permanently in his heart.

The khuranas were waiting outside for their car. It had been 15 minutes and not a car had arrived . maan was angry beyond limit. They had to waait and maan hated to wait. Just then a scorpio halted in front of them. As the passanger window lowered they saw geet sitting there .

Geet ' aunty kya hua???? Aap gaye nahin?????

Avanti ' han beta whoh hamara driver bhi naw'..

Geet ' hum aapko chod den????

Dev ' par tum logon ne yah kahin se churaya toh nahin naw????? He asked narrowing his eyes''

Geet ' jara peeche number plate to dekhiye'..

Dev went behind and came back with a shocked expression.

Dadi ' kya hua bte????

Dev - likha tha'.. geet and meet'' toh yeh meet ki gadi hai????

Geet ' yah''kyunki mujhe driving nahin aati''.

Dev ' toh drive kaun kar raha hai?????

This was answered by arjun

Arjun ' meet''

Just then meet came out.

Meet ' will you all please get inside the car before it gets worse?????

Maan ' what do you mean?????

Meet ' I mean mr.khurana ki media yahan pea a gayi hai'' so if you all don't want your photo to get displayed in the first page please get inside''.

And then with no other option they all got inside. And the arrangement was shocking.

Meet was siting in front with arjun and debases . While the middle was occupied by dadi, Avanti , dev and maan. While in the back geet was sitting with tara and khusi. And meet was sitting on dev. At that time the whole media had come there. And they weer pretty sure that the khuranas were in the scorpio and they knocked in the window of meet.

Meet - I am telling you for once and all no one will open their mouth.

Arjun ' par meet n=bahar media hai.

Meet ' don't worry I know what to do'. And then she opened the window to reveal a man standing outside wearing a full black dress. He bend on meet.

Meet ' you know what to do''

Man ' ok''..

Ad then meet rolled up the window and drove from there.

Dadi ' beta who kaun tha????

Meet ' mera body guard''

Dev ' body guard???????

Meet ' as you have one''

And then there was silence . after some time meet rolled down her window and tied her hairs in a bun .

Meet ' you can roll down if you want '.. arjun you will have to guide me'..

Just then meet shouted

Meet jr ' papa mujhe meet aunty ke paas baithna hai'..

Dev very well knew that she was not comfortable with everyone.

Dev ' par beta aunty drive ka rrahin hai naw'.

But before he could cont'.. the car halted and meet turned around

Meet ' hey junior '..

Meet jr ' hey aunty'..

Meet ' mera pass baithna hai????

Meet jr ' haan''

Meet ' I have a condition''..

Meet jr ' kya condition???? Al were interested in the conversation now and khusi was almost hangigng out of the grip of tara.

Meet ' you will call me didi instead of aunty''.

Meet jr ' well thik hai'.. agar main aapko senior bulaun toh koi problem??????

Meet ' not at all'. Junior'..

Meet jr ' thanks sr.

Meet ' ha' ha ' ha '. Now come to me'.. she then opened her seat belt seated her in her lap and put on the belt securely around them'.

Khusi ' mujhe bhi aapke pass baithna hai'' please please please '.

Meet ' toh main drive kais karoon????

Arjun ' tum aake mere pass kyun nahin baith jati?????

Khusi ' ok!!!! And jumped on arjun's lap''.

Tara ' ek warning de doon '.yeh donno bahut ladhte hain'..

Meet ' now you are complaining'.. yeh dono jab bade ho jayenge'.. you will smile remembering their fights tara'...

Tara ' wow'..

Meet ' toh chalein junior?????

Meet jr ' surely'.

And then the again drove. All the time while others were talking meet was quietly driving enjoying the drive and maan was constantly looking at her and was taking in her features. After some time meet jr. got bored.

Meet jr. - hey didi

Meet ' hmm'

Meet jr. - Koi gana hai kya didi?????

Meet ' kya hua????

Meet jr. ' bore lag raha hai'..

Meet ' kyun?????

Meet jr. ' aapko pata hai' aap bilkul maan papa ki tarah ho'..

And this line caught every body's attention.

Meet ' kaise?????

Meet jr. ' pure car main sirf aap dono hin chup chap baithe ho''.

Meet ' na jr. main aapke maan papa ki tarah nahin hoon. Waise kaun sa song sunogi?????

Meet jr ' some thing rocking''.

Meet ' hmm'. ok!!!!

And she switched on the cd drive. And a shrill sound of guitar came up and her speed increased. While all went silent as they knew that maan hated music and songs'.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I0eD4zobJKs

Pehla nasha pyar ka

Kar dega mujhko deewana(2)

Na din bte'

Kate na tere bina ratein

Sataye mujhe teri yaadein

Whoh mulakatein jaise mujhe tanhayian

Tumse keh diya hai ki abjaha se nahin darenge

Khae hai kasam yeh bina sanam ke nahin jiyenge

Sunle ab yeh jahan mujhko dar hai kahan

Han '. Han maine pyar kiya'.

Gumsumna raho kar lega kya yeh jamana

Na bhar aa hein agar hain yeh

Toh payenge yahan rahein''

Muskurake ''.

Milegi hamein manzil yahan

Tumse keh diya hai ki ab jahan se nahin darenge

Khae kasam yeh ki bina sanam ke nahin rahenge''..

But no one knew that this song suited perfectly maan and that maan was very happy listening to this song as it depicted his emotions perfectly and was more happy because it was selected by the girl he is going mad for. By the end of this song they were going at the speed of 120km/ hr. but she slowly slowed down.

Khusi ' didi slow kyun kar diya????? Dekho na chachu bhi so gaye'..

And then she turned to see arjun sleeping peacefully beside her.

Meet ' chachu ko sone do'' teen dino se mere saath bhag raha hai'..

Khusi ' kyun????

Meet ' kyunki hum dono milke job karte hain

Meet jr. ' jo bhi ho'aap ne slow kyunkiya????? She shouted

Meet ' dheere'. Cachu so raheinna'..

And arjun stirred a little'..

Arjun ' meet kya hua???? He asked without opening his eyes'.

Meet ' kuch nahin cheak post hai'.. tu so ja'..

Arjun ' ghar pohanch jaen to uthe dena''. And then grabbed khusi and slept'..

Meet ' surely'' she said to her self'. Chalo utho jr. document dikhane hain

Meet jr. ' main bhi aaungi''

Meet ' ok!!!! And then she got uff and settled jr. in the roof of the car. And showed the req documents

Man ' yeh log kaun hai?????

Meet ' yeh meri family hai''

Man ' hmm''.and handed her the document . then they rode to the mansion.

Meet ' uncle main road pet oh aagaye'.. phir yahanse????

Debases ' bate yahan se right turn ke half km ke baad ka mansion hai

Meet ' ji'.. and then they went as told as soon they were in front of a huge white mansion. As all went down arjun was still sleeping .

Meet ' arjun'. Arjun '. Uth'.. tera ghar aa gaya'..

Arjun ' sone dena meet'.. koi important case hai kya?????

Meet ' han commissioner ne tujhe abhi bulaya hai'..

Arjun ' kya???????? And jumped down from the car.

Meet ' hum tere ghar ke samne khade hain '..

Arjun ' sach mian????? Mera quarters aisa kaise ho gaya???? He asked looking at the mansion.and meet shook her head.

Meet ' hum abhi delhi main hain aur yeh tera ghar hai'''

Arjun ' oh!!! Yah'' k '.. bye''.

Meet ' tu jake so ja'. Warna kabhi tut ere dadi ko pratibha patil bula dega''. Main chalti hoon bye''.

And there geet had taken leave from all. As she was about to go.. arjun held her hand.

Arjun ' abe yaar goodbye hug toh deti ja''

Meet ' pura nahin ja rahi hoon'.. aaj evening ko phir se aaungi'.. tera help cahiye'' bye'' while she hugged him. And here maan's blood was boiling''. Good bye everyone''. Bye junior'.

And then they drove away. Leaving a determined maan to fulfill the last lines of the song''

Edited by lovelycutietedy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
loved the update...
so maan is determined to make her his...
well we r getting to know abt meet only wat abt geet...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice update …..!!!😊 but i love almonds eyes on GEET only …… y meet have it ……??😕

and plzzz v will love to c MAANEET and that is MAAN n GEET no meet …… 🤢 u r only telling about MEET what abt GEET ???? we just knw that she is a lawyer …. want to knw more abt MAAN n GEET ….. plzzz!!!!

update soon …..!!!!!

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