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Hey ishika pehle tou ek bahut bade vaala sorry hain derii se comment karne ke lityye kan pakad kar sorry ohk now coming the part well it's exceptionally beautiul you know it has two reasons iss baar pehla reason rhthym aur riddhima ka pyaar well vo har scene meiin jhalkata hain par iss part meiin mother's day ne aur bhi specaila bana diyya i loved how rhthym loved his mom and both mother-duo danced and their antics i loved it so very much aur fir riddhima jab gilli huii fir bhi gharr aakar ose aapnein rhthym ko dekhne gayyi yeh sabse sundar tha vo maa hain naa kaise ose chain milta aab baari ayi doosri cheej kii yeh armaan riddhima ke pyaar ne ise khoobsoorat bana diyya everything is beautiful jaise riddhima kho gayyi thi vo bahut sunadar tha cab meiin aur fir oonka dance bahut hii suandar tha bahut khobsoorat tha gaana bhi aur oonka dance bhi riddhima ssach meiin bahut sundar lagti hain sauce vaala laal colour meiin sundar armaan kii aankhon se aur armaan tou hain hii handsome ever aur i loved gang's scene bahut sundar dmg vaala gang aur rehan is such a asweetheart and the scenes is so beautiful when the story is telling by armaan remebered me dmg aur i loved each and every scene and then armaan's end parts is such a beuatiful scene kisiin ne bahut tayari karii hain areey vah i guess aab armaan ko vishwas ho jaayega vo shayad aapne fear chod degaa aur bahein faila kar aapni duniya ko aapni bahone meiin samet lega yeh tou khoobsoorati hain oonke rishte kii binaa kahen bhii sab kar lete hain khamoshi opadh lete hain bas zarurat hain tou manane kii aur ek doosre koo pyaar kare kii vo aab jalid poora ho jaayega sundar tha bahut aab please update kar dena mujhse aab aur wait nahin ho rahaa mujhe dher saare armaan aur riddhima ke scenes padhne hain aur rhuthym aur riddhima kaa pyaar dekhna hain bahut saara aur fir bahut saara pyaar dekhna hain rhthym aur armaan aur riddhima kaa aur riddhima ko finaaly ooska armaan mil jaaye aur armaan koo basket
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ohh my god
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first of all thanku so much guys...

for supporting me
like liking my work thanku all
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thank u niki...
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part-11

First of all I wana tell u all that this part is a joint effort of me and desire akka nikki so I and rhythm wana say thanku nik for helping us '..

Rhythm wana sayyy'...i love u nikii muuhaaa😃

Recap - Armaan enter his room and found it a complete mesh '.clothes were scattered every where'

He almost saved him self from falling due them '

He shoke his head and opened his cupboard'..a big bundle of cloths fell over him'and he on floor'

Ar.." lagta hai ajj kuch jyada taiyari ki gayi hai party ki'"

He was searching his bag coz still he didn't unpacked '..in his search his foot accidently hit a box and it got open'..

His heart ached seeing '.all those thing he gifted riddhima'scatted '.

Continuing '

He slumped on floor with a thud '.and gulped lump forming hard in his throat '..his vision went blurry

He closed his eyes to let the pain fell in form of tears'..

There were all his letters, cards, pics, a soft toy dog''those bangles and pajaib which he gave to riddhima'

It was looking like she have treasured all their moments together in that box and today he found '

His mind stopped working ..his body went numb '..he was just staring all his beautiful memories scattered around him'.

All those things were screaming that - not only he cried all these years but also did she. If he was dying thousand deaths every moment she was dying with him'.

The way he was hiding all his pain inside his heart , she also did d same but more beautifully then him

She didn't let anyone know she is burning from inside ,and hid every pain behind a smiley faked mask.

He also didn't complained to anyone but every one was aware of d heart ache he was suffering.

But all the time she was alone '.with no one understanding her but pressuring her to scarifies just for d sake of this Samaj (community ) which never cared about her happiness'.he was not the only one with whom fath played this cruel joke '.

today all these non living things were ready to tell him how his basket lived without her armaan, how much she cried for him'..they will tell him that which riddhima cant mouth to him'

(plz dnt skip d lines coz here armaan is in the scene but these line telling the story from ridz side defining her'.)

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They showed that his riddhima didn't forgot him, not even for second , she always kept him and his memories near to her heart'.safe from this heartless samaj'.

Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum)-2
Dil Main Dhadkan Ki Tarah
Tan Main Jeevan Ki Tarah
Mere Dharti Mere Mausam
Mere Dil Raat The Tum
Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum

His breathing went ragged and was feeling as if any moment his heart with bust coz of this pain'.he was feeling'.with trembling hand he picked on of the papers which were scatted ''it was from those time when he just realized his love and use to write his and riddhima's name in papers and draw hearts around it'he found faint tear marks on it'his throat went dry with the realization that she use to cry reading all this when she was away from him'..he rubbed his plum over his heart coz d pain was getting unbearable now'..

Phool Khilte The To Aati Thi Tumhari Khushboo -2
Aur Haseen Sham Jagati Thi Tumhara Jadoo
Aine Main Mere Har Din Ki Mulakaat The Tum
Dil Main Dhadkan Ki Tarah
Tan Main Jeevan Ki Tarah
Mere Dharti Mere Mausam
Mere Dil Raat The Tum
Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum

He picked the dmg written photo frame in which they were smiling unknown to future '.he hugged it 'as it he thought how many times she would have cried her heart out hugging this picture'

Adh Mudhi Aankh Main Sajta Hua Ek Khwaab The Tum -2
Pahli Barsaat Main Bheega Hua Mehkaab The Tum
Akhen Meri Thi Magar Inki Har Ek Baat The Tum
Dil Main Dhadkan Ki Tarah
Tan Main Jeevan Ki Tarah
Mere Dharti Mere Mausam
Mere Dil Raat The Tum
Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum

He saw that soft toy dog which reminded him her dreams for their marriage '.which made heart ache more he tried to smile between tears remembering their silly fight over keeping a dog 'but failed'

(Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum)-2
Dil Main Dhadkan Ki Tarah
Tan Main Jeevan Ki Tarah
Mere Dharti Mere Mausam
Mere Dil Raat The Tum
Jab Nahi Aaye The Tum
Tab Bhi Mere Saath The Tum

He creased that pajaib with his knuckles and then let it touch his cheeks'.he kissed it and was staring holding in his palms '..he couldn't take any more, he hid his face in his palms and cried '.cried loud '.

As he could'.sky matched his loud cried with thundering sound and cried with him '.which didn't let anyone hear him'but some how she heard '.she came running to their room and opened it hurriedly '..

Shocked was understatement when she found him in that condition '..she was scared to death seeing him like that'she silently sat in front of him'

Ri.." arrmmaaannn'"

Her voice trembled, she sat on her knees and touched his palm which was covering his face'..her heart was beating crazily'.she pulled his palm softly ''her breath stuck seeing his covered with tears'..

His eyes were bloodshot red and face was pale as if someone met death a moment ago'

He was staring her'..like a helpless child b4 she could say something he hugged her tight '..crying his heart out'..he was hugging her so tight that his body would have absorbed hers if it was possible'.she wrapped her arms around him crying along with him''letting all the pain they both suffered get washed '..

ar:''i love you riddhima''

He said and that makes riddhima's breaths stopped at that moment when her ears registered his words she almost skipped her one breath feeling she is dreaming but she gets sure that as she feels him tightening his grip around her and she wants to ask so many questions but words never leaves her mouth she is just so overwhelmed with emotions that she even did not knows when her hands wrapped at his back and then she

Ar:''itnaa pyaar karti ho mujhse tou kaha kyoon nahin kabhie riddhima kyoon nahin kaha riddhima kii tum bhi vaise hii tadap rahii ho jaise main tadap raha tha tumhare liyye? Kyoon nahin kaha tum kii mujhse dur jaa kar bhi kabhie tum mujhse dur nahin jaa paayi riddhima? Kyoon nahin bataya kii aaj bhi tumhari dhadkan meiin armaan hii hain? Kyoon nahin kaha kii tum mujhse aaj bhi osi pagalpan kii had tak pyaar karti ho jaise maine tumhe Panchgani meiin dekha tha?

Kyoon nahin kaha kii merii hii tarah tumhara pyaar bhi kam nahin hua? Kyoon nahin kaha kii merii hii tarah tum bhi aaj tak sirff mere liyye jeeti ho? Kyoon nahin kaha kii riddhima aaj bhi armaan kii hain jaise armaan sirff riddhima ka hain? Kyoon nahin bataya kii tum sirff mere pyaar ke liyye taras rahii ho jaise main taras raha hun?

Kyoon nahin kaha kii tum bhi humari adhorri mohabbat kii dastan ko poora karne ko tadap rahii ho? Kyoon nahin kaha kii tumne humara yeh rishta rhythm kee saath saath humare pyaar ke liyye bhi qubool kiyya hain? Kyoon nahin kaha kii aalag hokar bhi humare dill mille hue hain? Bolo riddhima kyoon? Bolo riddhima kyoon?''

He said while cupping her face in his warm palms and riddhima looked in his eyes which were filled with tears his blue hypnotizing eyes where she used to see the love for her today she see that love in his eyes after so long time and armaan looked at her, her green eyes too filled with tears but this time with so much happiness too in her green almond eyes as she knows now she will never lose her love and feeling his intense gaze she just

Ri:''main dar gayyi thi armaan kaise kehti tumhe jab tumhe khud hii aapnein aap se dur kiyya tha maine kaise kehti kii main sirff tumse pyaar karti hun aur kabhie tumse pyaar karna nahin chod sakti main kabhie bhi nahin tum tou merii sansein ho armaan 1 pal ke liyye bhi maine tumse pyaar karna nahin choda chodti bhi kaise tumhara pyaar tou mere aandar behta hain armaan

tumhe tou khud se dur kar diyya par aapnein aap ko kabhie tumse dur nahin kar paayi tum tou merii aatma ho armaan aur merii ruh ka aks ho tum armaan maine sirff tumhe chaha tum merii mohabaat kii vo dastan ho jo sirff merii mohabbat ko hii nahin mujhe bhi poora karta hain maine humara yeh rishta jab mujhe fir se mauka milla maine poore dill se qubool kiyya hain armaan i love you armaan humesha se mera dill sirff tumse mill kar poora hota haiin armaan i love you''

She said and armaan's face broke into a very big smile hearing her now he knows whatsoever happened is in past they are two names but one meaning armaan ' riddhima dill mill gayye and he knows now he will not run away from his happiness which laid in her arms and he wiped her tears which is flowing on her cheeks and riddhima did the same with him with a smile and armaan pecked her forhead and then he just hugged her again, they both hugged each-other with so much happiness knowing that their love has finally met their hearts finally completed in each-other's arms and feeling they are in love the warmth of their love and after few minutes armaan detangled her from himself with pecking her forhead again and then he looked at her she looks so pretty in that red saree his sauce vaala laal and riddhima hides her face in his chest feeling his intense gaze they both are fully drenched armaan smiled seeing her like this nothing has changed she is still the same riddhima his shy riddhima and he smiled and hugged her placing a soft peck in her hairs and then he just whispered near her ear while making her shivered

Ar:''oyye hoyye''

That trade mark of his breaks riddhima's face into a wide smile as well she shivered and then armaan slowly makes her sit on the bed and riddhima holds his hand when he turned to go but he smiled and said

Ar:''kahin nahin jaa rahaa hun tumhe poora karna hain naa so wait''

Riddhima with a little confusion leaves his hand and armaan kissed palm and then went away and with in a minute comes back and sit on his knees making riddhima surprised she looked at him with confusion and surprise she did not knows what he is upto and she is about to say something as

Ri:''armaan yeh''

But she is cut short with armaan looking at him shaking his head in ''no'' and then armaan slowly holds her hand in his and makes her wear the pushtani kada and riddhima's eyes filled with tears feeling the kada in her hands as she knows it's hers only and armaan smiled seeing her knows how much she is possessive and in love with this kada and then he just

Ar:''merii riddhima ke haath is kade ke binaa humesha hii soone lagte hain mujhe aur main aaj aapne basket ke haathon kii chudiyan aapnein oops humare pyaar kii pehli nishani is kadde se poora karta hun main''

He said while kissing her wrist over the kada too and then riddhima just so much overwhelmed and then she kissed his forhead and armaan just

Ar:''oyye hoyye basket''

And riddhima lowered her eyes lids blushing her cheeks turned red matching to her saree colour and then armaan slowly holds her feet and placed it on her knee and she looked at him now what as soon armaan makes his saree lifted up she shivered as he let he saree a bit leaving her ankles bare to him only and she shivered feeling his intense gaze on her as he caressed her ankles with his thumb making her shiver as she just

Ri:''armaan yeh''

But again she is shushed with his shaking his head in ''no'' and riddhima quietened and armaan smiled seeing her so innocently agreeing to him and then he placed the ankles riddhima and armaan's pyaar kii doosri nishani their first valentine gift and riddhima feels that metals touching her ankles today she feels she is beautiful though she has lots of jewellery but this two things now with her Mangalsutra makes her feels that she is ready and beautiful and armaan placed both the anklets in her feet and kissing her there either side and then he just slowly whispered to her that

Ar:''vo kya hain naa aaj kal merii riddhima humare prince kee peeche peeche pata nahin kahan kahan bhagti rehti hain kii mujhe mere hii gharr meiin nahin milti tou maine socha kii ooske pairon meiin aapna pyaar fir se pehna dun jis se mujhe pata chalein kii merii pyaari sii jaan kahan bhagti rehti hain aur kahan chupi hui hain aur vaise bhi yeh tab tak adhoori hain jab tak yeh tumhare pairon meiin nahin aati jaise main adhoora hun tumhare binaa aapni riddhima ke binaa''

He said and riddhima gives her a big smiled and kissed her forhead and armaan again placed a lingering kiss on her feet makes a shiver ran down in her spine and she just ran from there and armaan smiled seeing his shy basket and as he made his way he finds her standing in balcony with her shy cheeks and her hands playing with rain drops armaan comes and hugged her from behind locking her hands around her waist placed his head on her shoulder and riddhima over lapped his arms with her too and then they both enjoyed the rain drops falling on their faces today they feels god is blessing them and the rain is their love drops and then he just

Ar:''i love you basket''

And as he said out of blue riddhima turned to him hearing basket from him so long yes this completes her and she immediately whispered to him while locking his eyes with hers making him confused but she just says

Ri:''1 baar fir se kahoo naa''

Ar:''basket basket''

He said knowing what she is implying and riddhima hugged him tighter with him saying this basket finally she feels she belongs to him only and armaan too smiled if she craved to hear he crave to say basket to her and then armaan detangled her and then kissed her all over her face making her smiled as well turned red deeper shade of red and a shiver ran down in her spin feeling his cold lips on her and armaan then locking his arms around his back

Ar:''basket we can wait if you wants i am in no''

He said but riddhima smiled and then stopped him while placing her hand on his lips and armaan kissed her palms and riddhima just speaks saying to him that with so much love

Ri:''nahin bahut intezar kar liyya humari mohabbat ne poora honein meiin i love you armaan so very much armaan''

Ar:''i love you too basket''

And then armaan just picked her and they moved inside their bedroom and to shower each-other with their long forgetten love and awaited love. Aur aaj armaan aur riddhima ne fir se vo do lafzon meiin keh hii diyya jis se oon donow ne ek-doosre ko fir se paa hii liyya armaan ne aapni basket ko aur riddhima ne aapnein armaan ko aur aaj oonki do lafzon kii mohabbat oonke do lafzon ke ikaara ne oonhein fir se 1 kar hii diyya iss baar humesha kee liyya oonki sansein ek doosri meiin ghulti gayyi humesha kee liyye aiseii ghuli ek doosri meiin kii vo kabhie naa aalag honein ke liyye milla gayye oonke khawab riddhima ke oos aanson jise armaan ne aapnein aandar sameta osmeiin oonka dard ek ho gayya aur riddhima ka vo pyaar jo armaan ne oos raat mehsoos kiyya jismein riddhima ne khud ko armaan kea age tut kar bikher diyya armaan ko ooski mohabbat aur oon donow ki khushi ko 1 kar diyya humesha ke liyye oonki Mohabbat jo Muqamaal thi vo poori ho gayyi dill se ek doosre kii Mohaabat ko qubool kiya donow ne simat kar aur fir armaan riddhima dill mill gayye humesha kee liyye kabhie naa juda honein ke liyye kal tak armaan riddhima 2 name the aur ek dill par aab aaj do jism bhi ek jaan ho chukke the sansein sanson meiin ghul kar mill chuki thi donow ko puri tarhh .

Birds were singing their beautiful melodious song to welcome the with a blissful morning ''it was like whole nature was celebrating their reunion '..they both were just lying in each other's arm trying to absorb this soothing feeling '..

They both had a smile dancing on their lips'.armaan bent a lil. And kissed her hairs''her smiled widened and as her face was on his chest near to his heart 'she lifted her face a lil. And looked at his smiley face'.

He was flashing his dimples to her'..and his eyes were filled with mischief '..she bent her face and kissed his heart'." I love u armaan ab kabhi mujhe chor ke mat jana'"

He hugged her tight '" never basket ab chahe khuda b humare beach ane ki kishish kare mai unhe b nahi ane dunga'"

He felt her curdle like a scared kid so he took her hand in his and placed on his heart after kissing it'.

She looked at his face confused, not getting what he wana say'..he smiled '." Try to Listen basket , see my heart again started beating after whole 3 years 5 months 4 days 15 hours'.45 mi'.(she placed her palm on his mouth'.)

Her eyes were glittering with tears'." Bas armaan .."

And again hugged him tight hiding her face in his chest ''.." I love u basket'."

Ri.." whole world knows tell something knew'."

Ar'" oye hoye tumhare pyar ne mujhe india me world famous ker diya hai basket'"

She giggled .."yaaah yaahh.."

Life couldn't be more beautiful for them or could'..

Ar.." basket wont u sleep abhi thori hi der me sab uth jaynge'"

Ri'" cant rhythm will be awake thori hi der me'aur mujhe apne pas nahi payga toh pure ghar ko ser pe utha lega'."

Ar.." hemmm basket u know sometimes I feel jealous of my own son '.u love him more then me '"

He pouted cutly'now this was dharm sankat for riddhima'

Ri'" nahiii aisaa nahii'"

He jumped and sat .." toh tum mujhe jyada pyar kerti ho'."

He asked with a smirk'.riddhima understsud his game'" shut up and sleep I cant live without u both'"

She showed him her big big eyes and ordered him to sleep which he did quietly'

It was 7 am riddhima took rhythm from bi's room and now he was again sleeping peacefully 'she got up to be ready for the day..

She looked at them and they both were sleeping with content face '..she felt as if today her world got completed '..she kissed both of them on forehead and tucked them in duvet after placing pillows rhythms both side'so that armaan dsnt crush him in his sleep'.he still dsnt know how to sleep when a lil. Baby is around'

She was enjoying shaver when she heard muffle sound of baby's crying'.she thought rhythm woke up and was about to come out when voice subsidized'she thought he slept again'.and continued her work'

Where as in d room '

Armaan woke up with a jerk hearing rhythm's soft cries they both were half sleepy so, armaan just picked him and placed over his chest , patted his back softly and eventually they both slept again'.

Ridz came out of bathroom after a good 30 min shower '.she was ruffling her hairs with a towel when her sight reached on bed'.her mouth left open in shock'.

Ri.." ommmggg"

Ridz found rhythm bending towards armaan's face'.

Rhythm heard her voice who was sitting on armaan's chest who was sleeping peacefully, he turned his face toward ridz and showed her his mischievous two teeth smile'..ridz got alarmed seeing that and ran towards him..

She picked him in her arms'and he was pouting to her now'

Ri'." Hawww ridduu u were going to bite dady that bad baby realy bad'."

Rhythm frowned and made a cute face'..which surly melted ridz heart'

Ri.." aweee my baby,(she kissed his cheeks..) mamma knows baby is teething but it dsnt meant na ki baby will bite any thing comes in front of him hai naaa'."

Rhythm was now looking down as if understood what his mamma is trying to tell him'

Ri.." aull dady ko toh bilkul nahi ok dady loves riddu na so much (he looked at her face..) and mamma loves riddu d most dady ko nahi batna ok'"

They both giggled loud and rhythm gave ridz some sloppy kisses which she gestured to him also '..

Ridz came out of their room with her lil devil so that he can go to meet his ku-ku and chu-chu while she will do her house chores'..

Bi and rosy volunteered rhythm to the garden and ridz went to kitchen ''

She looked d time'" omg 8 baj gaye aur ye armaan abhi tak nahi utha '"

She ran towards their room'to wake armaan'

He was burring his face in pillow but those deadly dimples were visible to give heart attack to any one ..she sat near him and ruffled his hairs softly'.."wake up '" (she whispered in his ears')

He winced like a lil kid in his sleep and hid his face in her stomach'"emmm"

She smiled on his antics '" baby wake up werna dr. kirti ajj bf me armaan fry khayngi'"

She felt him smiling still snuggling to her'..

Ar'" first wish me good morning'.."

She kissed his forehead '" good morning'" with a big smile'

He smiled mischievously just like rhythm '.and signled towards his lips'"here"

She was blushing hard and was trying not meet his gaze '..he knew his basket so gestured towards her a lil'..her heart was beating in a jet speed, she was feeling shy just like newly wedded girl..

He was slowly slowly moving towards her lips'.and now her heart was thundering so loud that she felt it will come out any moment'he stopped just an inch before her lips and looked her face with a grin plastered on his face '..she was shriving and her eyes were closed '..not feeling any moment she opened her eyes and found him smirking hard just above her face '..she smiled brightly 'which made him confused a lil. But b4 he could understand she pushed him on bed and ran from there'

Ar'" oyeee basket'."

She ran giggling'" and yaah armaan plz wear a shirt or something plzz'" she shouted from outside..

Armaan looked his bare chest'" kyu dosnt I look good like this basket ..see I made my six pack 8 packes for u (he started counting) 1 2 3 4'.8 "

She again replied from out side'" come out soon or kirti mam will make it a family pack'"

He could hear her giggles which made him smile widly'."oye hoye'"

Where as in a five star hotel '.

Abhimanu '" why r u here sid'."

Sid'" bhai believe me mai yaha apni mistake sudharne aya hu'.mom poisoned my brain so bed ki mained her baat ke liye riddhima ko hi blame kiya '..aur use divorce bhi ker diya '.but jab mujhe pata chala it was all mom's plan to I left home bhai badi muskil se himmat ki hai riddhima se baat kerne ki'."

Abhi took a sign'" but ab ishka koi fayda nahi hai sid, she moved ahead she is married to armaan now'"

Sid was shocked '" what ttt, but shilpa was married to armaan na'."

Abhi.." yaah but she is no more, and circumstance made armaan and ridz together'"

Sid took some moments to absorb every thing'and then'

Sid.." still I wana talk to ridz once bhai plzzz'I will die with this guilt inside me'"

He was crying for now'.

Abhi.." i understand sid but I cant help u, ridz and armaan are my friend to mai unki life me problems nahi ane de sakta '.sorry bro'"

Abhi left'

Sid.." if u wont toh mai sab khud pata ker lunga bhai but mai riddhima se bat kiye bagair nahi jaunga.."

In malik mension'.

Ridz was in kitchen with all sitting around breakfast table while rhythm on his baby chair'rosy was helping ridz in cooking coz she was feeding baby also in between '

Bi was reading some t.v magazine unke favorite actor ka interview u know..so very much engrossed '.

Ridz was running between cooking desk and rhythm'armaan came with a sulking face'.all didn't reacted coz it was daily routine for them but ridz giggled silently '.while he pouted cutly to her' she shoke her head as he wanted her to give him shower just like rhythm 'god she thought her life was tougher or now it gona be toughest with two babies at home'.

Armaan kissed rhythms cheeks on which he stared armaan'he smiled and kissed on his other cheek also which made him giggle '..

All had their bfs with a pouting armaan''and silently giggling ridz and only rhythm witnessing their game he was also giggling with his mamma '.

Bi'" arree armaan tere jane ka time ho gaya naaa'."

Armaan made a sad face'" yaah bi just going'"

He stud up started moving towards the door'..ridz went behind him'.

Ri.." here is ur lunch and (she tip toed and gave him a light peek on his lips') this a lil doge to make u happy now go'.

Before he can react she pushed him out of door coz she know if she gave him time what he will do'

She turned after sending him but the door bell rang'.bi also came and she opened the door'.

There armaan was standing holding his head in his palms'..both the ladies got scared seeing this'.

They made him sit in sofa'

Bi." Kya huaa armaan'."

He spoke in a very painfull voice.." my head is hurting bad bi, I think I cant go'."

Ridz got lil suspicious .." but achanak se '."

Ar.." dekhiye bi yaha mera ser phata jar aha hai aur ye sawal pe sawal kiye ja rahi hai'"

He pouted to bi'

Bi.." haan haan riddhima tu ja jake pani le kea a armaan ke liye..aur koi dawai bhi'aur tu armaan ajj araam ker waise bhi kitna kaam kerta hai ,era bachha'"

Ridz went to get med and water while armaan settled his head in bi's lap'.rhythm reached towards them crawling and stud up holding armaan's legs'he looked his dady a smiled showing off his dimples to him'.

Armaan silently winked to him'and he retuned him back gladly'

Fewww that's it'..lets see ab kya hogaa

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part - 12



Edited by LilApple - 12 years ago
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Haila m first
Finallly u update ... God m waiting for it frn lo g tym n here it is
Wall done guys i m loving it our armaan ridhima is back n our naighty armaan also
N ye sid kyu aya hai i hope ye kuch ulta seedha na kare n thank god abhi ne usse phele hi bata diya sab kuch n i must say he fullfilled his duty as friend last bt nt least our rythm wanna byte his dada haaha aww i wish to have rythm scene more n bechari ridz ab do do baby ko sambhal na patr ga

Very well written bt itna chotu sa
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Bhena u happy see i commented
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Originally posted by: jain92

Haila m first
Finallly u update ... God m waiting for it frn lo g tym n here it is
Wall done guys i m loving it our armaan ridhima is back n our naighty armaan also
N ye sid kyu aya hai i hope ye kuch ulta seedha na kare n thank god abhi ne usse phele hi bata diya sab kuch n i must say he fullfilled his duty as friend last bt nt least our rythm wanna byte his dada haaha aww i wish to have rythm scene more n bechari ridz ab do do baby ko sambhal na patr ga

Very well written bt itna chotu sa

yaar jab likha tha it was looking big yaha chota ho gaya😭

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