NewFF(Maneet) Mere humsafar Thrd 2 Upd pt26 pg 141

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Thnx 4 pm

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as usual i hate arjun

i hate him too

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Thank you for ur love and support

FOR PART 25

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Thank you friends for ur love and encouragement. Here is the next part I hope u will enjoy reading it

love-Piya

PART 26

The party ends

Arjun: Geet raat bahut ho gayi hai aur aise mein aapka akele ghar jaana thik nahi hoga toh main soch raha tha k agar aapko koi aitraz na ho toh kya main aapko ghar tak chod du

Geet Arjun k saath nahi jaana chahthi thi. She was trying to think of a reason to avoid him...

Geet: Wo actually Arjun main...

Maan: Geet mere saath chal rahi hai kyun geet?

Geet (looks at maan): Haan... Haan main Maan Sir k saath jaa rahi hoon

Arjun:( thinking) Phir se Maan...

Arjun: O ye toh achhi baat hai

Maan: Waise Arjun I hope aapko party ke arrangements pasand aaye honge

Arjun: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai... Off course saare arrangements fantastic theey I m impressed

Maan: Thik hai toh phir baaki ki baate kal karenge abhi hum chalthe hai. Good night

Arjun: Good night Maan... Good night Geet

Geet: Goodnight

Maan: Chale Geet

Geet: Ji Sir

Maan aur Geet chale jaate hai

Maan starts the car

Geet (thinking) Aaj ek baar phir inhone meri madat ki warna main uss arjun se apna picha kaise chudathi

Geet was constantly admiring maan

Maan notices this

Maan: Kuch kehna chahthi ho

Geet: haan wo ... nahi toh

Maan: Geet pehle tum ye decide karlo k tumhe haan kehna hai ya na

Geet: Mera matlab hai haan...

Maan: Agar kuch kehna hai toh bol dho waise bhi bakbak karne mein toh tumhe PHD haasil hai...koi sunna chahe ya na chahe tum apni baat kahe bagair reh nahi sakthi kyun?

Geet: aapke kehne ka matlab hai k main bahut baate karti hoon...aur agar aisa hai bhi toh ismein kaunsa bada gunaah hai... aur waise bhi sab aapke jaise chaubeeso ghante gusse mein ghum nahi sakthe...

Geet: apne aap ko aaine mein dekhiye itni darawani aakhen hai aapki k sheesha bhi darr kar tuth jaaye

Maan: Geet tumne meri aakhon ko darawna kaha...aur maine kya abhi tumhe gusse se dekha jo tum kuch bhi kahe jaa rahi ho

Geet: eh lo... Sir aap issi tarah se without expression change kiye apna face car k mirror mein dekhiye

Maan: Haan ismein kaunsi badi baat hai... abhi dekh letha hoon

Maan looks in the mirror

Geet: Dekha ab bataiye aapko aapki aakhein darawani lag rahi hai ya nahi

Maan (unknowingly) Haan lag tho rahi hai

Geet: Dekha maine kaha tha na

Maan: Geet kya tum mujhse yahi baat kehna chahthi thi

Geet: Nahi main toh aapko thanks kehna chahthi thi

Maan: Thanks... kis liye?

Geet: Wo agar aap sahi time par aakar arjun se ye nahi kehthe k main aapke saath aa rahi hoon toh mujhe shayad uss arjun k saath jaana padtha

Maan: Hmm... thanks kehne ka ye achha tareeka hai... meri aakhon ko darawna keh diya kyun?

Geet: Sir ab kehthe hai na sachhai kadwi hothi hai

Maan: Geet tum ab dubara shuru ho gayi

Geet starts laughing

Maan gets lost for a second

Maan: (self thought): Kitni masumiyat hai Geet ki hassi mein...

Geet: Kya hua Sir aap aise kya dekh rahe hai?

Maan: Kuch nahi lo ghar aa gaya ab jaakar so jao...

Geet: Good night Sir

Maan: Good night

Geet goes to her room

Maan realizes that Geet had left her purse in his car

Outhouse

Geet: Wo waise nahi hai jaise maine unhe pehli mulakat mein samjha tha...

Geet: Aaj agar wo nahi hothe tho wo Arjun mera peecha hi nahi chodtha... waise aaj party mein bada maza aaya

Geet starts thinking about the party

Geet: Maine toh socha bhi nahi tha k aaj wo party mein aayenge... magar phir se humare beech ladai ho gayi... najaane wo din kab aayega jis din hum ladenge nahi

Geet: Uske baad unhone mujhe kiss kiya...

Suddenly her smile vanishes

Geet: Kya... unhone tujhe kiss kiya...aur tune ye hone kaise diya...mujhe issi waqt unse baat karni hogi

Geet bahar ki taraf badthi hai... maan was also entering the outhouse at the same time

Dono ki takar ho jati hai

Geet ka pair fisal jaata hai par maan usse apne baaho ka sahara de dethe hai

Maneet eyelock

Mahi...Mahi...

Tabhi maan ka mobile bajne lagta hai

Maan geet ko thek se khada kar detha hai

Maan: Adi main tumhe call back karta hoon

He then looks at Geet

Maan: Geet tum kabhi bhi thek tareke se chal nahi sakthi... ya phir tum humesha ye jaanbujkar karti ho

Geet: Main dekkhar hi chal rahi thi aap batayi aap ka dyan kaha tha aur waise bhi aap iss waqt mere ghar mein kya kar rahe hai?

Maan: Main tumhe tumhara purse lautane aaya tha... meri chodo tum ye batau k tum kaha jaa rahi thi

Geet: Main aaphi k paas aa rahi thi

Maan: Mere paas magar kyun?

Geet: mujhe pehle ye batayiye k aapne kya sochkar mujhe kiss kiya

Maan: wo ...actually...

Geet: Bataiye aapne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?

Maan: Wo galti se ho gaya

Geet: Galti? aisi bhi koi galti karta hai kya... sach sach bataiye

Maan: Geet tumhare sawalo k jawab dene ki koi zarurat nahi hai...aur waise bhi tum koi swarg se utari hui apsara ya pari nahi ho jo har koi tumhare aas paas mandaratha phire

Geet: Aap mere sawal ko taalne ki koshish mat kijiye...

Maan: Ye lo tumhara purse main ja raha hoon... tumhari faltoo bakwaas sunne mein mujhe koi interest nahi hai

Maan goes. Geet is shocked

Geet: Bakwaas...hmm... dekh lungi main aapko

Maan goes to his room and as usual comes and stands near the window

Geet bhi apne kamre ki khidki k paas aakar khadi ho jaati hai

Their eyes meet

Mahi...Mahi...

But then geet realizes that she is angry

Geet immediately closes the window

Maan: Iski ye himmat...main bhi isse dekh lunga samajthi kya hai apne aap ko

Maan also closes his window and goes off to sleep

Next day

Khurana constructions

Maan: Dev tum aur Adi bhi mere saath chal rahe ho

Geet: Sir mian bhi aaplogo k saath chal sakthi hoon

Maan: (thinking) kal raat ko khidki band kar di thi na...ab batatha hoon

Maan: nahi geet tum office mein hi raho...jo subah maine tumhe kuch files complete karne k liye diye the wo complete karo

Geet: Sir wo maine already kar liya hai

Maan: Good tho ek kaam karo storeroom mein Khanna and company k saath jo humare purana deal hua tha uske kuch files pade hue hai jao aur jaakar unhe waha se nikal lo aur unn files ko study karo

Geet: Magar Sir wo deal toh kafi purani hai main unhe abhi study kyun karu

Maan: Geet tumse jitna kaha gaya hai utna karo...amin aakar tumhe batata hoon k maine aisa kyun kaha

Geet: Thik hai Sir

Maan: Dev n Adi let's go

Maan, Dev and Adi go for attending some meeting

Geet goes to the store room

Meanwhile Arjun arrives

Arjun: pinky kya baat hai aaj koi nazar nahi aa raha

Pinky: wo actually Maan Sir ,Dev Sir aur Adi Sir ek meeting k liye gaye hai

Arjun: Aur Geet?

Pinky: Geet storeroom mein kuch files dhund rahi hai

Arjun: Achha ... main abhi aaya

Arjun storeroom ki taraf badtha hai

Arjun: (thinking) Aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha saktha... aaj toh maan bhi nahi hai

PRECAP: Arjun: "Bachkar kaha jaaogi Geet...yaha koi nahi aayega tumhari madat k liye"😡😭

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Love- Piya

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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finally...today i have got the first place...haha...
maan again saving his angel i the nick of time...am so happy...n that arjun...even after so many failures...he is still having wrong ideas about geet...am telling u Piya...he seriously needs a good beating from maan to get it all ut of his mind...n then maan himself admitting that he was looking darawana...haha...when i read about the kiss...i thought that i had missed some part...but then i remembered...she was talking about that forehead kiss...right???when she was saying that maan didnt even notice her in the sari...am a bit scared now...u said that this time maan might not be here to save her...i wonder what will happen...continue soon...

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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me 2nd

first for u big🤗

and for update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

update is super cool...

i love all scenes...

funny scenes ...maaneet sweet sweeet nok jok...for everythink...love it..

romantic scenes...their takar...eyelock and mahi mahi...

precap me geet uski band bajaegi chahe kase bi ho...

superb update...

keep writing...

cont soon...

love u alot...

xxx

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Shivangi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow!!! I enjoyed this part thoroughly...and finally...able to comment...!!!!

yipee...lovely part!!! continue soon...waiting!!!

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago

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XxshonaxX

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Posted: 13 years ago

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thiz iz seriously not fair...every time u make me wait 4 the time arjun will try 2 abuse geet...n wen will maan save her...ahhh...plzzz make it happen in the next update...plzzz...anywayz nice part

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Lovely part dear. :D
Hehe i loved how maan accepted that his eyed are scary lol.
Maan is awestruck by geet's innocence :)
Oops Arjun is upto to no good :o

Cant wait for more :)

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