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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wow...soo cute...loved it...plz
update soon...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
i hope ki pia apne abhay se mil jaye iss party me !!!
awesome update
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Awesome update... waiting for Abhiya meeting and Prem's birthday party... continue soon... thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY DEAR😃AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...WHY PIA IS BEHAVING LIKE THIS YAAR...WHY C IS NOT TELLING YHAT C IS BACK...PREM SPENDING TIME WITH HIS MA...THAT WAS CUTE YAAR...LOOKING FORWARD FOR PREM'S BIRTHDAY PARTY...HOPE VO DONO FACE TO FACE AA JAYE...PLZ UPDATE SOON DEARHEY I WILL SEND U BUDDY REQUEST PLZ ACCEPT IT ...OKHAV A NICE DAYLUV USUNITA
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
wow yaar nice twist but Y Pia left thm.Plzz continue.I cant wait 4 Abhiya meeting.Plzz continue😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awesome
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have no words to say
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Part 6:
ABHAY'S HOUSE:
the whole mansion was decorated like a beautiful bride..lights everywhere...only on this day the whole mansion was used to be lighted and the rest all dark...abhay was very happy...and also prem..but prem's excitement was much more than abhay...abhay was standing in the hall looking all the arrangements..prem was in his room..looking at his clothes which he never liked...coat n pents...-prem-i hate it...!! ..he went to abhay with those clothes in his hands..-prem-mein ye nai pehna chahta...i dont want to look like a waiter...!!!!!!!!! -abhay smiled-oh..! to phir mein b kya waiter lago ga..? -prem-haan. but it doesnt matter cuz u r used to it..but i want something else..!!..-abhay-ok...wht u want to wear..??..-prem-i want t-shirt n trousers..-abhay-ok..yaar...chalo mein tumhare liye select karta hon...happy..?-prem-yups...abhay selected his dress n again started to check the arrangements...
pia was all confused wht to wear..her bed was covered with all sorts of clothes..sarees,gowns,jeans,shirts...she looked at them for a while...wht to wear..??..agar abhay hota to mujhe zaroor batata what to wear...pia..tum use q yaad karti ho..?? u dont deserve. him..she thought...
All the guests started to arrive...they were amazed by how the mansion was decorated...it was a masquerade party...everyone was enjoying the party...abhay came down...wearing a black half sleeves shirt n waist coat with black jeans. .(imagine guyz...such a hottie...)every girl in the party was admiring him...then came the birthday boy...wearing yellow shirt n blue shorts...(cute)...he was looking here n there for pia..but couldnt see her...abhay was standing alone at one side but after a while there was a huge crowd of young girls following him but abhay as usual no interest..misha ,jeh and panchi n neil were talking with each other but were not interested in party...vedh n prem were also chatting...but still prem looking here n there for pia...he heard abhay announcing...:"Ladies n genltemen...! thnk u for coming in my beloved son prem's birthday party...now widout further ado...prem...come here ..." prem came to abhay...abhay handed him the knife..and they were just going to cut the cake tht prem saw pia entering the party...he was vry much happy tht she finally came...pia was looking gorgeous in all the party..wearing a pink saree with silver emnroidery...she clapped for prem...prem ran to pia with cake piece in his hand and gave her the piece...pia smiled n took it...abhay was looking tht wht he was doing with tht strange girl...?..the music started...Dil Ibadat Kar raha hai...prem took pia to abhay and made them hold their hands...pia was shocked to see abhay whose face was clear cuz he wasnt wearing the mask...she wanted to free herself but failed..they started to dance...abhay was feeling a connection between them...(u can imagine the dance just like the dance on raichands welcome party..)..the dance over and pia fleed...she was looking at abhay who was busy in his mobile seeing pia's pics..."wo mujhe bhool chuka hai..acha hi hai..she thought..she closed her eyes n a tear fell from her eye...she turned around n saw mish n panchi..she was glad to see them but she didnt wanted them to knw tht she was alive...prem had an idea...for meeting abhay n pia...he had a goblet full of orange juice and came to pia running..the juice fell on pia saree.."ahh..!!'pia said..prem dekh kar chalo...-prem-sorry..,piya was cleaning it with a tissue...-prem-mein aapko washroom le jata hon...come on..." he held pia's hand n took her to the washroom in abhay's room...after leaving pia there he went to abhay as fast as he could...-prem-papa...apke room me chor ghus aya..mein ne use apke room me band kiya hai...use pakde..."abhay ran to his room...and opened the door...it was all dark...but the moonlight made the room beautiful n glowing...the scent was vry familiar...pia came out of washroom still trying to dry her wet saree..and piya's foot stuck in the carpet n she fell tht abhay caught her...
PRECAP:ABHAY N PIYA FACE TO FACE...
hope u liked it n plz comment...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
beautiful update bt it was very short...
n moreover u ended it at such an xciting moment, nt fair dear😆
prem is such a smart child
bt pia's behaviour is confusing me like hell...wanna knw abt her secret asap
continue soon wid a long part, nxt part is going to b damn interesting so if possible post it nw only😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

beautiful update bt it was very short...
n moreover u ended it at such an xciting moment, nt fair dear😆
prem is such a smart child
bt pia's behaviour is confusing me like hell...wanna knw abt her secret asap
continue soon wid a long part, nxt part is going to b damn interesting so if possible post it nw only😆




thnx yaar...i knw it is short cuz i got very little time...n i promise next will be the longest part...but i think next part will hurt u very much...so better be prepared for to face the bitter part..tomorrow..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY DEAR😃AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...WOW PREM IS SOOO CUTE YAAR...WHY PIA IS SAYING THAT C DONT DESERVED ABHAY...WHO SAVED HER YAAR...BUT ABHAY FOUND HER DIED NAA...THAN HOW C IS STILL ALIVE...IS SHE HUMAN NAA...OMG I M SOOO CONFUSED YAAR...PLZ HELP ME...PRECAP REALLY SOUNDS INTERESTING YAAR...PLZ UPDATE SOON YAAR...HAV A NICE DAYLUV U SUNITA

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