-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#431

ha Maan really needs to work his butt off to get Geet to trust him again esp with Sia
it's sad how she treats Mia and Troy differently but she's not at fault.
please do add another part :D

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#432

awesome maan has to suffer more such that geet accept him again

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#433

yaaay ur back ...
loved the update...
i guess maan deserves this because of what he did to geet...
i hope you are updating soon

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ammyicycool

@ammyicycool

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#434

IMMORAL WORLD

Part 37

wow..

welcome back my dear..

missed u so badly...

thanks a lot for ur updates..i can imagine how difficult it would have been for u...after the shifting..new place..but still u spend some time for us by posting the updates..

thanks a lot..

and the story is going so well my dear...

wow.. really..i want maan to suffer more..plz..he should also get the taste of the pain poor geet went through..

plz extend that track more...

plz...

plzzz...

plz update sooonnn...

i know i am being so selfish..but cant help it darling...

i an addicted to ur stories...

when u were'nt updating..i kept reading ur older updates..but now my selfish dil maange more..more...😉

luv u loadz...

waoting for ur new update parts 38, 39... hehehe..

and dont forget to torture maan more...little sadist me...

luv,

ammy

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#435

heyyy ur back!!!!

i am sooo happy to see u and update

but how sad yaar...

geet is losttt, i miss the love they had!! poor maan

he need to show and prove to geet he has accepted sia as his...

very sad part yaar

update soonnn

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muskaan...

@muskaan...

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Love the update...

Cant blame Geet for her Behavior... as being wife she might forget Maan but as mother she cant ...

once trust is broken ... can never be build again...& it hearts more when it comes to the kids...for mother...

wish to have more update for this FF...as I feel u can write some more part for this...

Love ...muskaan

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#437

She is a mother. . . . Every child should be equal 4r her. . . . How could she ignore dem. . . .

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#438

hey dear welcome back
loved the part
Maan deserve this
plz continue soon

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#439

loved it

but y end it now!!

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#440

awesome part...am so happy that u r back with an update...

seriously maan u have got to really work hard to gain back the old geet who only knew how to love u...

but then it feels sad to see that geet treats mia n troy differently from sia...but maybe she stills suffers from the insecurity that maan n the others hate sia...thatsy she is being so protective of her...

continue soon n thnxxx...