-Immoral WORLD-3- PART 41 pg 128 - THE END - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar tume maaneet ka wasta end in a happy note...i cant really see them in pain...my heart is crying for geet😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
why its finishing so fast... i m so sad...
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sorry... but i got to.. if you want me to carry on do say...

& i will reply to all the comments after i update this :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Immoral WORLD
PART 34




Maan and nandini walks in to the study... Nandini very happy that geet left at last.
Maan looks at devs photo broken on the floor, he instantly went to it and picking it up.
"who have broken devs photo?" he angrily looks at nandini.
Nandi "so his name is dev! Good he is dead. People like him don't belong to this world. Bloody raper!" she smiles... And was about to take a seat when maan came rushing slapping her.
Maan "how dare you?" nandini was shocked. Not shocked why he have slapped her but shocked that he have slapped her. She just looks at him in shock.
Nandini "how dare you?"
Maan "how dare you call my brother a raper!" nandini stood up instantly. Brother!
Maan "what do you mean by he is dead?"
Nandini "brother?"
Maan "WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY HE Is DEAD?"
Nandini started to mumble because If she tells the truth now, his own brother will be behind the bar forever.
Maan "if you don't tell me the truth I will not merry you!" he shouts in anger.. Nandini felt petrified. She felt trapped. He have to merry her for the property. Her eyes looked here and there.

Nandini "he have rapped geet before you married her! Geet told me!" she adds the last but. Hiding her truth.
Maans eyes widens. Realizing why they were so keen to merry her off to anyone...
Maan "raped?"
Nandi "the child is devs!" the murder of his brother have disappeared for a moment...
Nandini "she was raped." maan couldn't think at all now. No, dev is not like this at all... How could he stoop so low... He ruses towards geets room.. Nandini stops him...
Nandini "sign the divorce paper... She have signed it. Now we can merry." maan ignored taking the paper from her hand... Then ran towards geets room.

He pushes it open... It's empty... "GEET! GEET!" there was no noise... He peeps through the window, she was not in the garden. He had some weird feeling that she have left! But... All those time she never have left, or took a foot out without his permission then why now...
He quickly opened her wardrobe... It's empty... He shout screaming to call all the servant... Everyone ran in.
Maan "where is geet!" he shouts... Anticipating for one of them to open there mouth.
Anjali "she have left."
Maan "what? And without informing me?"
Anjali "she was a mere servant sir!"
This time maans heart ached. His heart felt the needle. She never did cheat on him. She was always nive and sweet. Innocent. She have loved him, and only him. What he have done. He brushed his hair back... Panicking, where can she go? This town is new... Full of goons... What if someone... The wars thought hit his mind instantly. The child. It's devs... He straight way closed his eyes. He is dead. Another painful truth. He rapped geet! What she must be thinking when she seen his photo.
Maan rushed out..

***

Geet walks under the rain with a umbrella and her luggage. Bus was late and the rain was about to start. She felt chilly. Geet looks in her purse. She had enough money to buy the bus ticket and enough for staying back in HP. Now if she eat, it will decrees her money. But she is pregnant. Geet felt confused what to do.

A dabha, looked very cheap, she went in and ordered the cheapest food. Eating... Her heart was still bleeding but controlled for her kid..

After about 30 minute the bus arrives and she gets on. She wasn't sure where to stay exactly in HP! She have no house now. Maybe chamily. Will she let her stay round her?

Geet smiled sadly..

The bus took off and maan drives in... Asking madly but finding nothing... It started to rain heavily...

Geet looked at her tummy. Very big... She smiled sadly...

Maan went back to KM. Holding nandinis neck. "who have killed my brother?"
Nandini "what do you mean? How I suppose to know?"
Maan "who have killed my brother? I know very well that you are brij sister, so don't think I will leave you. I will also put you behind the bar!"

Nandini got scared and blushed out the truth... "it's brij, he have killed him. And barred him back in HP! The police knows everything"...

Maan frees her and throes her out...



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where is all my like?
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Posted: 14 years ago
OOO can't wait for it darling carry on udar muskaan idar tum u both r best😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
me second.. see i always knew u will make me happy & conteneted..
me feeling like a big stone off my heart
but still cry for sweety
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this part very much...
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar..now maan knows everythign ..
ll geet accept him???
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooopppsss my bad lol i can't beleve i was first one to commet šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: skjgmd

OOO can't wait for it darling carry on udar muskaan idar tum u both r best😃

if me online & keyma updating.. u will only find me idhar..no udharšŸ˜†

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